经典例题
(2025·江苏徐州鼓楼区期中)近些年来,中国发生了巨大的变化,令人振奋。假设你是海外华人李先生,回到了阔别许久的故乡,请根据以下表格要点,把故乡巨大的变化及自己的感受写在博客上,与大家分享。

【要求】1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,表达清楚,语法正确。
2. 必须包括所有相关信息,可适当发挥。
3. 词数90左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
4. 不得出现真实的姓名和校名等。
Changes in people's lives
Great changes have taken place in people's lives over the years in my hometown.
(2025·江苏徐州鼓楼区期中)近些年来,中国发生了巨大的变化,令人振奋。假设你是海外华人李先生,回到了阔别许久的故乡,请根据以下表格要点,把故乡巨大的变化及自己的感受写在博客上,与大家分享。
【要求】1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,表达清楚,语法正确。
2. 必须包括所有相关信息,可适当发挥。
3. 词数90左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
4. 不得出现真实的姓名和校名等。
Changes in people's lives
Great changes have taken place in people's lives over the years in my hometown.
答案:Great changes have taken place in people's lives over the years in my hometown.
In the past, my family lived in a small and crowded house. People communicated with each other by writing letters. For fun, they watched TV, read newspapers or listened to the radio. They usually went out by bike or on foot.
But now, we live in a new and bright big apartment. We can use mobile phones or the Internet to keep in touch easily. Travelling has become a popular way to spend free time. When going out, we can take buses, undergrounds, taxis or even drive our own cars.
I'm so glad to see these great changes. They make our life more comfortable and wonderful.
In the past, my family lived in a small and crowded house. People communicated with each other by writing letters. For fun, they watched TV, read newspapers or listened to the radio. They usually went out by bike or on foot.
But now, we live in a new and bright big apartment. We can use mobile phones or the Internet to keep in touch easily. Travelling has become a popular way to spend free time. When going out, we can take buses, undergrounds, taxis or even drive our own cars.
I'm so glad to see these great changes. They make our life more comfortable and wonderful.
解析:
本题要求以海外华人李先生的身份介绍家乡生活的变化,属于今昔对比类说明文写作。需运用八年级下册所学的一般过去时和一般现在时进行对比描述,借助in the past, now等衔接词,完整涵盖居住、通信、娱乐、交通四个方面的变化,最后可适当添加个人感受,确保语句通顺、内容完整,符合词数要求。