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（2025·江苏扬州江都区月考）春天是游览扬州的最佳季节，Tom 和他的同学在计划去扬州的三日游。假如你是 Tom，请根据表中要点，写一篇有关这次旅行的计划和注意事项的短文。
【注意】1. 文中必须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2. 词数 100 左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
3. 请勿提及真实姓名。
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou.
（2025·江苏扬州江都区月考）春天是游览扬州的最佳季节，Tom 和他的同学在计划去扬州的三日游。假如你是 Tom，请根据表中要点，写一篇有关这次旅行的计划和注意事项的短文。
【注意】1. 文中必须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2. 词数 100 左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
3. 请勿提及真实姓名。
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou.
Yangzhou has changed a lot. The beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit museums to learn about local culture. The next day, we'll enjoy the natural beauty at the Slender West Lake. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Dongguan Street.
We'll check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. We'll keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yangzhou's beauty.
答案：One possible version
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou.
Yangzhou has changed a lot. The beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit museums to learn about local culture. The next day, we'll enjoy the natural beauty at the Slender West Lake. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Dongguan Street.
We'll check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. We'll keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yangzhou's beauty.
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou.
Yangzhou has changed a lot. The beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit museums to learn about local culture. The next day, we'll enjoy the natural beauty at the Slender West Lake. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Dongguan Street.
We'll check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. We'll keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yangzhou's beauty.
解析：
【分析】
首先我需要先明确这篇写作的核心要求：身份是Tom，主题是扬州三日游计划，必须覆盖表格所有给定要点，不能生硬翻译，词数控制在100左右。第一步先梳理行文逻辑：先承接给定开头，先介绍扬州的整体变化，除了题干给出的花美空气清新、街道干净交通便利的优势，自拟一个合理的点比如当地旅游业发展成熟、市民十分友好，说明扬州很适合春日出游。第二步按照时间顺序依次介绍三天的行程安排，把博物馆研学、瘦西湖赏景、东关街美食购物的内容自然串联。最后补充出行的小注意事项，再表达自己对旅程的期待，整体用一般将来时表述计划，保证语句流畅连贯。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，先点明扬州近年变化很大，除了题干给出的鲜花盛放、空气清新，街道整洁、交通便利的特点，自然引出它非常适合春日出行的结论，完成原因部分的内容输出。
2. 用过渡句引出行程安排，按第一天、第二天、第三天的时间顺序，依次对应写出参观博物馆了解本土文化、游览瘦西湖感受自然美、到东关街品尝美食购物的内容，逻辑清晰不会遗漏要点。
3. 最后补充合理的出行注意事项，比如提前确认天气、穿舒适的鞋、游玩时爱护环境遵守公共规则，最后表达对这次旅行的期待，完成感受部分的内容，整体整合语句，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou.
Yangzhou has changed a lot. The beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit museums to learn about local culture. The next day, we'll enjoy the natural beauty at the Slender West Lake. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Dongguan Street.
We'll check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. We'll keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yangzhou's beauty.
【知识点】
旅行类话题写作，一般将来时运用，要点整合表达
【点评】
本题是典型的提纲类应用文写作，给出的要点提示清晰，既降低了写作门槛，又要求学生不能生硬逐句翻译，需要自主补充合理的衔接内容和出行感受，能有效考察学生对行程类话题的英语表达能力，写作时按照时间顺序排布内容，就可以很轻松做到逻辑通顺、要点全覆盖。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先我需要先明确这篇写作的核心要求：身份是Tom，主题是扬州三日游计划，必须覆盖表格所有给定要点，不能生硬翻译，词数控制在100左右。第一步先梳理行文逻辑：先承接给定开头，先介绍扬州的整体变化，除了题干给出的花美空气清新、街道干净交通便利的优势，自拟一个合理的点比如当地旅游业发展成熟、市民十分友好，说明扬州很适合春日出游。第二步按照时间顺序依次介绍三天的行程安排，把博物馆研学、瘦西湖赏景、东关街美食购物的内容自然串联。最后补充出行的小注意事项，再表达自己对旅程的期待，整体用一般将来时表述计划，保证语句流畅连贯。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，先点明扬州近年变化很大，除了题干给出的鲜花盛放、空气清新，街道整洁、交通便利的特点，自然引出它非常适合春日出行的结论，完成原因部分的内容输出。
2. 用过渡句引出行程安排，按第一天、第二天、第三天的时间顺序，依次对应写出参观博物馆了解本土文化、游览瘦西湖感受自然美、到东关街品尝美食购物的内容，逻辑清晰不会遗漏要点。
3. 最后补充合理的出行注意事项，比如提前确认天气、穿舒适的鞋、游玩时爱护环境遵守公共规则，最后表达对这次旅行的期待，完成感受部分的内容，整体整合语句，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yangzhou.
Yangzhou has changed a lot. The beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit museums to learn about local culture. The next day, we'll enjoy the natural beauty at the Slender West Lake. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Dongguan Street.
We'll check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. We'll keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yangzhou's beauty.
【知识点】
旅行类话题写作，一般将来时运用，要点整合表达
【点评】
本题是典型的提纲类应用文写作，给出的要点提示清晰，既降低了写作门槛，又要求学生不能生硬逐句翻译，需要自主补充合理的衔接内容和出行感受，能有效考察学生对行程类话题的英语表达能力，写作时按照时间顺序排布内容，就可以很轻松做到逻辑通顺、要点全覆盖。
【难度系数】
0.6