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来自英国的 John 一直期待能够到北京旅行，以更好地了解这座城市。请你写一篇短文介绍他通过在线旅游网站了解到的信息。
【注意】1. 内容须涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数 90 左右，开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、网站名等信息。
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing. He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
来自英国的 John 一直期待能够到北京旅行，以更好地了解这座城市。请你写一篇短文介绍他通过在线旅游网站了解到的信息。
【注意】1. 内容须涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数 90 左右，开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、网站名等信息。
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing. He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
One possible version
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing. He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
Beijing, the capital of China, is a good place to visit. It is a city with a long history. It's also one of the biggest cities in China. People in Beijing are kind and friendly. They are always glad to help others.
The weather is neither too hot nor too cold in spring. It's a good season to visit Beijing. There are many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City. As for food, Beijing roast duck is the most famous and it is quite delicious.
He is sure that he will have a great vacation if he comes to Beijing in person.
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing. He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
Beijing, the capital of China, is a good place to visit. It is a city with a long history. It's also one of the biggest cities in China. People in Beijing are kind and friendly. They are always glad to help others.
The weather is neither too hot nor too cold in spring. It's a good season to visit Beijing. There are many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City. As for food, Beijing roast duck is the most famous and it is quite delicious.
He is sure that he will have a great vacation if he comes to Beijing in person.
答案：One possible version
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing. He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
Beijing, the capital of China, is a good place to visit. It is a city with a long history. It's also one of the biggest cities in China. People in Beijing are kind and friendly. They are always glad to help others.
The weather is neither too hot nor too cold in spring. It's a good season to visit Beijing. There are many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City. As for food, Beijing roast duck is the most famous and it is quite delicious.
He is sure that he will have a great vacation if he comes to Beijing in person.
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing. He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
Beijing, the capital of China, is a good place to visit. It is a city with a long history. It's also one of the biggest cities in China. People in Beijing are kind and friendly. They are always glad to help others.
The weather is neither too hot nor too cold in spring. It's a good season to visit Beijing. There are many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City. As for food, Beijing roast duck is the most famous and it is quite delicious.
He is sure that he will have a great vacation if he comes to Beijing in person.
解析：
【分析】
首先拿到这道题先明确写作任务：给计划来北京旅行的英国友人John介绍北京的相关旅行信息，需要覆盖全部给定的三个写作要点，词数控制在90左右，不能出现真实私人信息。我们可以按照逻辑顺序分步构思：第一步先承接题目给出的开头，完成城市概况部分的写作，从历史、人文角度点明北京是中国首都，历史悠久，当地居民热情友善；第二步完成最佳旅行时间的说明，选择春季作为最佳出行时间，解释此时气温适宜不冷不热的原因；第三步列举长城、故宫、颐和园等北京知名景点，还可以适当补充北京特色美食烤鸭丰富内容，最后收尾点出对旅行的美好期待，调整语句让整体流畅通顺，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，首先介绍北京的城市属性：点明北京是中国的首都，是一座历史悠久的城市，也是中国超大型城市之一，当地居民友善好客，完成城市概况部分的内容输出。
2. 接下来说明最佳旅行时间：指出春季是到访北京的最佳时段，此时天气既不太热也不太冷，体感舒适非常适合出游。
3. 随后介绍北京的游玩资源：列举长城、颐和园、故宫等多处知名名胜古迹，还补充介绍北京特色美食北京烤鸭，让内容更丰富。
4. 最后收尾，表达John相信亲自到访北京一定会度过愉快的假期，整体调整语句，保证行文连贯，词数符合要求，所有要点全部覆盖。
【答案】
One possible version
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing. He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
Beijing, the capital of China, is a good place to visit. It is a city with a long history. It's also one of the biggest cities in China. People in Beijing are kind and friendly. They are always glad to help others.
The weather is neither too hot nor too cold in spring. It's a good season to visit Beijing. There are many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City. As for food, Beijing roast duck is the most famous and it is quite delicious.
He is sure that he will have a great vacation if he comes to Beijing in person.
【知识点】
英语介绍类写作，旅行话题表达，要点整合写作
【点评】
本篇短文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部三个写作要点，行文逻辑清晰，从城市概况到出行建议再到游玩资源的介绍顺理成章，语言地道简洁，词数符合要求，额外补充的特色美食内容也让介绍更有吸引力，完全贴合给境外游客做旅行参考的写作场景，是一篇质量合格的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题先明确写作任务：给计划来北京旅行的英国友人John介绍北京的相关旅行信息，需要覆盖全部给定的三个写作要点，词数控制在90左右，不能出现真实私人信息。我们可以按照逻辑顺序分步构思：第一步先承接题目给出的开头，完成城市概况部分的写作，从历史、人文角度点明北京是中国首都，历史悠久，当地居民热情友善；第二步完成最佳旅行时间的说明，选择春季作为最佳出行时间，解释此时气温适宜不冷不热的原因；第三步列举长城、故宫、颐和园等北京知名景点，还可以适当补充北京特色美食烤鸭丰富内容，最后收尾点出对旅行的美好期待，调整语句让整体流畅通顺，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，首先介绍北京的城市属性：点明北京是中国的首都，是一座历史悠久的城市，也是中国超大型城市之一，当地居民友善好客，完成城市概况部分的内容输出。
2. 接下来说明最佳旅行时间：指出春季是到访北京的最佳时段，此时天气既不太热也不太冷，体感舒适非常适合出游。
3. 随后介绍北京的游玩资源：列举长城、颐和园、故宫等多处知名名胜古迹，还补充介绍北京特色美食北京烤鸭，让内容更丰富。
4. 最后收尾，表达John相信亲自到访北京一定会度过愉快的假期，整体调整语句，保证行文连贯，词数符合要求，所有要点全部覆盖。
【答案】
One possible version
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing. He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
Beijing, the capital of China, is a good place to visit. It is a city with a long history. It's also one of the biggest cities in China. People in Beijing are kind and friendly. They are always glad to help others.
The weather is neither too hot nor too cold in spring. It's a good season to visit Beijing. There are many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City. As for food, Beijing roast duck is the most famous and it is quite delicious.
He is sure that he will have a great vacation if he comes to Beijing in person.
【知识点】
英语介绍类写作，旅行话题表达，要点整合写作
【点评】
本篇短文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部三个写作要点，行文逻辑清晰，从城市概况到出行建议再到游玩资源的介绍顺理成章，语言地道简洁，词数符合要求，额外补充的特色美食内容也让介绍更有吸引力，完全贴合给境外游客做旅行参考的写作场景，是一篇质量合格的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7