七、书面表达(30分)
A. 句子翻译。(共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)
1. 他们已经结婚十多年了。
2. 我们的老师有足够的耐心帮助我们学英语。
3. 活到老,学到老。
4. 有些书帮助我们明智地处理生活中的问题。
5. 人们到处乱扔垃圾是不对的。
A. 句子翻译。(共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)
1. 他们已经结婚十多年了。
They have been married for over ten years.
2. 我们的老师有足够的耐心帮助我们学英语。
Our teacher is always patient enough to help us with our English.
3. 活到老,学到老。
It's never too old to learn.
4. 有些书帮助我们明智地处理生活中的问题。
Some books help us deal with life problems wisely.
5. 人们到处乱扔垃圾是不对的。
It's not right for people to drop litter everywhere.
答案:1. They have been married for over ten years.
2. Our teacher is always patient enough to help us with our English.
3. It's never too old to learn.
4. Some books help us deal with life problems wisely.
5. It's not right for people to drop litter everywhere.
2. Our teacher is always patient enough to help us with our English.
3. It's never too old to learn.
4. Some books help us deal with life problems wisely.
5. It's not right for people to drop litter everywhere.
解析:
【分析】
做这类汉译英句子翻译题,我们可以按照以下思路逐步推导:1. 先通读中文句子,判断句子对应的时态和核心句型;2. 梳理句中的固定搭配,注意易错语法点,比如短暂性动词不能和时间段连用、形式主语的使用等;3. 遇到常见谚语优先使用约定俗成的标准译法,避免逐字翻译产生中式英语;4. 最后核对主谓一致、副词位置等细节,保证句子语法正确。
逐题思考逻辑:第1题看到“已经+时间段”立刻想到现在完成时,要把短暂性动词marry转换为延续性状态be married才能和for加时间段搭配;第2题看到“足够...做某事”直接对应固定结构adj+enough to do sth,再搭配help sb with sth的固定表达;第3题是常见谚语,对应too...to结构的经典固定译法;第4题先确定主谓结构,用help sb do sth搭配deal with的短语,副词wisely放在动词短语后修饰动作;第5题是描述“做某事对某人来说是...的”,优先用it作形式主语的固定句型,避免句子头重脚轻。
【解析】
1. 句子时态为现在完成时,“结婚十多年”是持续的状态,需将短暂性动词marry转换为延续性短语be married,“十多年”译为over ten years,时间状语用for引出,最终得到对应句子。
2. 句子核心结构为“be + 形容词 + enough to do sth(足够...做某事)”,“有耐心”译为patient,“帮助某人学英语”用固定搭配help sb with one's English,主语our teacher为第三人称单数,be动词用is,最终得到对应句子。
3. 该句是通用英语谚语,采用too...to(太...而不能)的否定结构表达“永远不会因为太老而无法学习”的含义,使用约定俗成的标准译法即可。
4. 句子主语为Some books,使用固定搭配help sb do sth,“处理”译为deal with,副词wisely修饰动作“处理问题”,放在动词短语后,最终得到对应句子。
5. 该句使用it作形式主语的固定句型It's + 形容词 + for sb to do sth,避免句子头重脚轻,“乱扔垃圾”译为drop litter everywhere,最终得到对应句子。
【答案】
1. They have been married for over ten years.
2. Our teacher is always patient enough to help us with our English.
3. It's never too old to learn.
4. Some books help us deal with life problems wisely.
5. It's not right for people to drop litter everywhere.
【知识点】
现在完成时延续性用法
常用固定句型
英语谚语识记
【点评】
本题的5道翻译题均为初中英语核心考点,覆盖了现在完成时的易错点(短暂性动词转延续性状态)、enough用法、it形式主语等高频考点,同时考察了常见谚语的积累,整体难度偏基础,同学们做题时要注意规避逐字翻译的中式英语问题,牢记短暂性动词不能和持续时间段连用的规则,很容易拿到满分。
【难度系数】
0.7
做这类汉译英句子翻译题,我们可以按照以下思路逐步推导:1. 先通读中文句子,判断句子对应的时态和核心句型;2. 梳理句中的固定搭配,注意易错语法点,比如短暂性动词不能和时间段连用、形式主语的使用等;3. 遇到常见谚语优先使用约定俗成的标准译法,避免逐字翻译产生中式英语;4. 最后核对主谓一致、副词位置等细节,保证句子语法正确。
逐题思考逻辑:第1题看到“已经+时间段”立刻想到现在完成时,要把短暂性动词marry转换为延续性状态be married才能和for加时间段搭配;第2题看到“足够...做某事”直接对应固定结构adj+enough to do sth,再搭配help sb with sth的固定表达;第3题是常见谚语,对应too...to结构的经典固定译法;第4题先确定主谓结构,用help sb do sth搭配deal with的短语,副词wisely放在动词短语后修饰动作;第5题是描述“做某事对某人来说是...的”,优先用it作形式主语的固定句型,避免句子头重脚轻。
【解析】
1. 句子时态为现在完成时,“结婚十多年”是持续的状态,需将短暂性动词marry转换为延续性短语be married,“十多年”译为over ten years,时间状语用for引出,最终得到对应句子。
2. 句子核心结构为“be + 形容词 + enough to do sth(足够...做某事)”,“有耐心”译为patient,“帮助某人学英语”用固定搭配help sb with one's English,主语our teacher为第三人称单数,be动词用is,最终得到对应句子。
3. 该句是通用英语谚语,采用too...to(太...而不能)的否定结构表达“永远不会因为太老而无法学习”的含义,使用约定俗成的标准译法即可。
4. 句子主语为Some books,使用固定搭配help sb do sth,“处理”译为deal with,副词wisely修饰动作“处理问题”,放在动词短语后,最终得到对应句子。
5. 该句使用it作形式主语的固定句型It's + 形容词 + for sb to do sth,避免句子头重脚轻,“乱扔垃圾”译为drop litter everywhere,最终得到对应句子。
【答案】
1. They have been married for over ten years.
2. Our teacher is always patient enough to help us with our English.
3. It's never too old to learn.
4. Some books help us deal with life problems wisely.
5. It's not right for people to drop litter everywhere.
【知识点】
现在完成时延续性用法
常用固定句型
英语谚语识记
【点评】
本题的5道翻译题均为初中英语核心考点,覆盖了现在完成时的易错点(短暂性动词转延续性状态)、enough用法、it形式主语等高频考点,同时考察了常见谚语的积累,整体难度偏基础,同学们做题时要注意规避逐字翻译的中式英语问题,牢记短暂性动词不能和持续时间段连用的规则,很容易拿到满分。
【难度系数】
0.7
B. 写作(满分20分)
在八年级即将结束之际,八年级一班将举行一次主题班会,要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。假如你是Simon,请根据以下表格中的要点提示,写一篇100词左右的英语演讲稿。

Hello, everyone. I'm Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
在八年级即将结束之际,八年级一班将举行一次主题班会,要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。假如你是Simon,请根据以下表格中的要点提示,写一篇100词左右的英语演讲稿。
Hello, everyone. I'm Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
答案:One possible version
Hello, everyone. I'm Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
First, I used to be careless with my homework and was bad at my lessons. But now I listen carefully in class. I am more and more interested in all my lessons. Second, I used to spend most of my free time listening to music and playing computer games. But now I try to spend my free time reading because it can broaden my horizons and make me relaxed. Third, in the past I often dropped litter everywhere and shouted loudly in public places. Now, I behave politely. I always recycle the waste to protect the environment.
I believe I will be better in Grade 9.
Thanks for your listening!
Hello, everyone. I'm Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
First, I used to be careless with my homework and was bad at my lessons. But now I listen carefully in class. I am more and more interested in all my lessons. Second, I used to spend most of my free time listening to music and playing computer games. But now I try to spend my free time reading because it can broaden my horizons and make me relaxed. Third, in the past I often dropped litter everywhere and shouted loudly in public places. Now, I behave politely. I always recycle the waste to protect the environment.
I believe I will be better in Grade 9.
Thanks for your listening!
解析:
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确写作要求:这是一篇主题班会的英语演讲稿,要求以Simon的身份介绍自己一年来的变化与成长,词数控制在100词左右。首先第一步梳理所有表格给出的提示要点,确保没有遗漏:学习、生活、行为三个维度的今昔对比,以及九年级的未来展望。第二步确定写作逻辑:用清晰的连接词分点介绍三个维度的变化,先讲过去的状态,再转折讲现在的改变,补充合理的细节让内容充实,最后收尾写未来的期许,加上演讲稿必备的致谢收尾。第三步选择合适的表达:描述过去的旧习惯用used to do的固定结构,非常贴合今昔对比的主题,对应不同时间场景匹配对应的时态,保证语法正确,语句通顺。
【解析】
1. 文体与时态确定:本文为发言稿,使用第一人称叙事,描述过去的习惯用一般过去时/used to do结构,描述当前的状态用一般现在时,描述未来展望用一般将来时。
2. 要点逐一落实:
① 学习板块:先点明过去的问题“做作业粗心,功课不好”,用used to be careless with my homework and was bad at my lessons表达,转折后写现在的状态“认真听讲,对所有课程越来越喜欢”,对应表达为listen carefully in class, am more and more interested in all my lessons。
② 生活板块:先写过去的业余安排“大部分业余时间听音乐,玩电脑游戏”,用used to spend most of my free time listening to music and playing computer games表达,转折后写现在的安排是阅读,补充合理原因“阅读能开阔视野、放松身心”,让内容更饱满。
③ 行为板块:先写过去的不当行为“乱扔垃圾,公共场所大声喧哗”,转折后写现在的改变:举止礼貌,通过回收废弃物等方式保护环境。
④ 收尾部分:补充对九年级的展望,最后加上演讲稿的标准致谢语,符合场景要求。
3. 用First、Second、Third这类逻辑连接词串联内容,让文章条理清晰,调整语句流畅度,把总词数控制在要求范围内。
【答案】
One possible version
Hello, everyone. I'm Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
First, I used to be careless with my homework and was bad at my lessons. But now I listen carefully in class. I am more and more interested in all my lessons. Second, I used to spend most of my free time listening to music and playing computer games. But now I try to spend my free time reading because it can broaden my horizons and make me relaxed. Third, in the past I often dropped litter everywhere and shouted loudly in public places. Now, I behave politely. I always recycle the waste to protect the environment.
I believe I will be better in Grade 9.
Thanks for your listening!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作
used to do结构
时态综合运用
【点评】
本题属于提示类应用文写作,给出的要点非常明确,核心考察学生对今昔对比类表达的掌握,学生只需要按照学习、生活、行为的顺序梳理要点,补充少量合理细节,注意演讲稿的格式规范,就可以完成一篇合格的作文,需要注意不要遗漏表格给出的任意提示点,避免不必要的要点扣分。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道题首先要明确写作要求:这是一篇主题班会的英语演讲稿,要求以Simon的身份介绍自己一年来的变化与成长,词数控制在100词左右。首先第一步梳理所有表格给出的提示要点,确保没有遗漏:学习、生活、行为三个维度的今昔对比,以及九年级的未来展望。第二步确定写作逻辑:用清晰的连接词分点介绍三个维度的变化,先讲过去的状态,再转折讲现在的改变,补充合理的细节让内容充实,最后收尾写未来的期许,加上演讲稿必备的致谢收尾。第三步选择合适的表达:描述过去的旧习惯用used to do的固定结构,非常贴合今昔对比的主题,对应不同时间场景匹配对应的时态,保证语法正确,语句通顺。
【解析】
1. 文体与时态确定:本文为发言稿,使用第一人称叙事,描述过去的习惯用一般过去时/used to do结构,描述当前的状态用一般现在时,描述未来展望用一般将来时。
2. 要点逐一落实:
① 学习板块:先点明过去的问题“做作业粗心,功课不好”,用used to be careless with my homework and was bad at my lessons表达,转折后写现在的状态“认真听讲,对所有课程越来越喜欢”,对应表达为listen carefully in class, am more and more interested in all my lessons。
② 生活板块:先写过去的业余安排“大部分业余时间听音乐,玩电脑游戏”,用used to spend most of my free time listening to music and playing computer games表达,转折后写现在的安排是阅读,补充合理原因“阅读能开阔视野、放松身心”,让内容更饱满。
③ 行为板块:先写过去的不当行为“乱扔垃圾,公共场所大声喧哗”,转折后写现在的改变:举止礼貌,通过回收废弃物等方式保护环境。
④ 收尾部分:补充对九年级的展望,最后加上演讲稿的标准致谢语,符合场景要求。
3. 用First、Second、Third这类逻辑连接词串联内容,让文章条理清晰,调整语句流畅度,把总词数控制在要求范围内。
【答案】
One possible version
Hello, everyone. I'm Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
First, I used to be careless with my homework and was bad at my lessons. But now I listen carefully in class. I am more and more interested in all my lessons. Second, I used to spend most of my free time listening to music and playing computer games. But now I try to spend my free time reading because it can broaden my horizons and make me relaxed. Third, in the past I often dropped litter everywhere and shouted loudly in public places. Now, I behave politely. I always recycle the waste to protect the environment.
I believe I will be better in Grade 9.
Thanks for your listening!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作
used to do结构
时态综合运用
【点评】
本题属于提示类应用文写作,给出的要点非常明确,核心考察学生对今昔对比类表达的掌握,学生只需要按照学习、生活、行为的顺序梳理要点,补充少量合理细节,注意演讲稿的格式规范,就可以完成一篇合格的作文,需要注意不要遗漏表格给出的任意提示点,避免不必要的要点扣分。
【难度系数】
0.6