四、书面表达。
作为新时代的中学生,我们肩负着守护地球家园的责任与使命。节约资源,保护环境,让我们以点滴行动践行环保理念:随手关灯、节约用纸、绿色出行、垃圾分类……共同绘就地球家园的生态画卷。请从以下几个角度写一篇短文分享你对低碳生活的看法。

参考词汇:碳排放 carbon emissions;垃圾箱 dustbin
注意:1. 词数 90 左右;2. 请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
作为新时代的中学生,我们肩负着守护地球家园的责任与使命。节约资源,保护环境,让我们以点滴行动践行环保理念:随手关灯、节约用纸、绿色出行、垃圾分类……共同绘就地球家园的生态画卷。请从以下几个角度写一篇短文分享你对低碳生活的看法。
参考词汇:碳排放 carbon emissions;垃圾箱 dustbin
注意:1. 词数 90 左右;2. 请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
One possible version:
The environment is very important to us. It's time for us students to live a low-carbon life.
A low-carbon life is all about cutting carbon emissions by saving resources in daily life. We can choose green travel, like taking buses or riding bikes instead of asking parents to drive us. We should turn off lights and other electrical appliances when leaving rooms to save electricity. Also, we should reuse both sides of paper and put rubbish into different dustbins properly. All these small acts not only protect the earth but also help us develop good habits.
Living a low-carbon life makes me feel proud. Let's take action right now for a greener world!
答案:One possible version:
The environment is very important to us. It's time for us students to live a low-carbon life.
A low-carbon life is all about cutting carbon emissions by saving resources in daily life. We can choose green travel, like taking buses or riding bikes instead of asking parents to drive us. We should turn off lights and other electrical appliances when leaving rooms to save electricity. Also, we should reuse both sides of paper and put rubbish into different dustbins properly. All these small acts not only protect the earth but also help us develop good habits.
Living a low-carbon life makes me feel proud. Let's take action right now for a greener world!
The environment is very important to us. It's time for us students to live a low-carbon life.
A low-carbon life is all about cutting carbon emissions by saving resources in daily life. We can choose green travel, like taking buses or riding bikes instead of asking parents to drive us. We should turn off lights and other electrical appliances when leaving rooms to save electricity. Also, we should reuse both sides of paper and put rubbish into different dustbins properly. All these small acts not only protect the earth but also help us develop good habits.
Living a low-carbon life makes me feel proud. Let's take action right now for a greener world!
解析:
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题,首先要明确核心写作要求:必须覆盖图中给出的三个设问角度,分别是为什么要践行低碳生活、日常可以落地的低碳行动、你对低碳生活的真实看法,词数控制在90左右,不能提及真实校名姓名。第一步先开篇引入,点明环境保护的重要性,顺理成章引出我们需要践行低碳生活,回应第一个“为什么”的问题;接下来主体部分结合题干提示的随手关灯、节约用纸、绿色出行、垃圾分类等方向,列举具体的日常做法,自然用上参考词汇碳排放、垃圾箱,回应第二个“我们能做什么”的问题;最后收尾部分表达自己对低碳生活的感受,发出环保呼吁,回应第三个“你怎么看待低碳生活”的问题,全程注意语句通顺、语法正确,控制总词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇段:先点明环境对人类的重要性,直接引出作为学生我们应当践行低碳生活,同时简单解释低碳生活的核心是通过节约日常资源减少碳排放,清晰回应第一个设问“为什么要过低碳生活”。
2. 主体段:结合中学生的日常场景,依次列举具体的低碳行动:出行选择乘坐公交、骑行代替家长开车接送;离开房间时随手关闭灯光和电器节约用电;纸张双面重复利用,将垃圾分类投入对应的垃圾箱,这些内容都贴合生活,也覆盖了题干给出的所有提示点,完整回应第二个设问“我们能为低碳生活做什么”。
3. 结尾段:说明这些小行动既可以保护地球也能帮助我们养成好习惯,表达自己践行低碳生活的自豪感,最后呼吁所有人立刻行动共建更绿色的世界,充分回应第三个设问“你对低碳生活的感受”。
【答案】
One possible version:
The environment is very important to us. It's time for us students to live a low-carbon life.
A low-carbon life is all about cutting carbon emissions by saving resources in daily life. We can choose green travel, like taking buses or riding bikes instead of asking parents to drive us. We should turn off lights and other electrical appliances when leaving rooms to save electricity. Also, we should reuse both sides of paper and put rubbish into different dustbins properly. All these small acts not only protect the earth but also help us develop good habits.
Living a low-carbon life makes me feel proud. Let's take action right now for a greener world!
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
环保主题表达
语篇逻辑构建
【点评】
本文完全紧扣题目给出的三个设问维度展开,结构清晰层次分明,内容全部贴合中学生的真实生活场景,自然融入了题干给出的参考词汇和提示的环保行为,词数符合要求,语句流畅没有语法错误,结尾的正向呼吁也贴合主题,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道书面表达题,首先要明确核心写作要求:必须覆盖图中给出的三个设问角度,分别是为什么要践行低碳生活、日常可以落地的低碳行动、你对低碳生活的真实看法,词数控制在90左右,不能提及真实校名姓名。第一步先开篇引入,点明环境保护的重要性,顺理成章引出我们需要践行低碳生活,回应第一个“为什么”的问题;接下来主体部分结合题干提示的随手关灯、节约用纸、绿色出行、垃圾分类等方向,列举具体的日常做法,自然用上参考词汇碳排放、垃圾箱,回应第二个“我们能做什么”的问题;最后收尾部分表达自己对低碳生活的感受,发出环保呼吁,回应第三个“你怎么看待低碳生活”的问题,全程注意语句通顺、语法正确,控制总词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇段:先点明环境对人类的重要性,直接引出作为学生我们应当践行低碳生活,同时简单解释低碳生活的核心是通过节约日常资源减少碳排放,清晰回应第一个设问“为什么要过低碳生活”。
2. 主体段:结合中学生的日常场景,依次列举具体的低碳行动:出行选择乘坐公交、骑行代替家长开车接送;离开房间时随手关闭灯光和电器节约用电;纸张双面重复利用,将垃圾分类投入对应的垃圾箱,这些内容都贴合生活,也覆盖了题干给出的所有提示点,完整回应第二个设问“我们能为低碳生活做什么”。
3. 结尾段:说明这些小行动既可以保护地球也能帮助我们养成好习惯,表达自己践行低碳生活的自豪感,最后呼吁所有人立刻行动共建更绿色的世界,充分回应第三个设问“你对低碳生活的感受”。
【答案】
One possible version:
The environment is very important to us. It's time for us students to live a low-carbon life.
A low-carbon life is all about cutting carbon emissions by saving resources in daily life. We can choose green travel, like taking buses or riding bikes instead of asking parents to drive us. We should turn off lights and other electrical appliances when leaving rooms to save electricity. Also, we should reuse both sides of paper and put rubbish into different dustbins properly. All these small acts not only protect the earth but also help us develop good habits.
Living a low-carbon life makes me feel proud. Let's take action right now for a greener world!
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
环保主题表达
语篇逻辑构建
【点评】
本文完全紧扣题目给出的三个设问维度展开,结构清晰层次分明,内容全部贴合中学生的真实生活场景,自然融入了题干给出的参考词汇和提示的环保行为,词数符合要求,语句流畅没有语法错误,结尾的正向呼吁也贴合主题,是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6