五、书面表达。
读书就像在心灵的土地上播种,让我们的内心世界变得更加丰富多彩。你们的英语校刊正在开展以"Enjoy reading"为主题的征文活动。请你围绕下图所示的三个问题写一篇 90 词左右的英语征文稿。
Reading plays an important part in our life.
读书就像在心灵的土地上播种,让我们的内心世界变得更加丰富多彩。你们的英语校刊正在开展以"Enjoy reading"为主题的征文活动。请你围绕下图所示的三个问题写一篇 90 词左右的英语征文稿。
Reading plays an important part in our life.
答案：五、One possible version:
Reading plays an important part in our life. We can get lots of knowledge through reading. Reading can open our eyes and help us make progress in many ways.
I read books before going to bed every day. I like reading all kinds of books. When I read, I like to copy down nice sentences. I also make reading notes and share my thoughts with my friends.
Reading is fun. It not only brings me pleasure but also develops my characteristics. I am not as shy as I used to be after reading Treasure Island. I care more about society and the world through Lu Xun's works. Reading has become a part of my life. Let's grow up with reading.
Reading plays an important part in our life. We can get lots of knowledge through reading. Reading can open our eyes and help us make progress in many ways.
I read books before going to bed every day. I like reading all kinds of books. When I read, I like to copy down nice sentences. I also make reading notes and share my thoughts with my friends.
Reading is fun. It not only brings me pleasure but also develops my characteristics. I am not as shy as I used to be after reading Treasure Island. I care more about society and the world through Lu Xun's works. Reading has become a part of my life. Let's grow up with reading.
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要明确核心要求：主题为Enjoy reading，必须覆盖思维导图给出的三个指定问题，词数控制在90词左右，作为校刊征文风格要积极真诚。接下来梳理写作思路：题目已经给出开篇总起句，接下来第一部分先回答阅读的重要性，点明阅读的价值；第二部分介绍自己日常的阅读习惯，比如阅读频率、阅读时的相关做法；第三部分结合实际体验讲阅读给自己带来的正向改变，最后收尾发出号召呼吁大家享受阅读，全程注意语法正确、语句衔接自然，不要遗漏任何给定要点。
【解析】
写作可按照三步有序完成：
1. 承接给定的总起句，阐述阅读的重要性：说明阅读能帮我们获取大量知识、开阔视野，在多方面助力个人成长进步，对应要点"What's the importance of reading?"。
2. 接着介绍个人阅读习惯：说明自己的阅读频率，比如每日睡前阅读，日常会摘抄优美句子、写读书笔记，还会和朋友分享阅读感悟，对应要点"What are your reading habits?"。
3. 最后分享阅读带来的改变：举例说明阅读不仅带来乐趣，还塑造了自身性格，比如读完《金银岛》后不再像从前害羞，读鲁迅作品后更关心社会和世界，最后发出倡议呼吁大家和阅读共同成长，对应要点"What are the changes after reading?"。
全程使用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主，描述过去的状态变化时适当使用一般过去时，保证内容连贯，符合校刊征文的语境要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Reading plays an important part in our life. We can get lots of knowledge through reading. Reading can open our eyes and help us make progress in many ways.
I read books before going to bed every day. I like reading all kinds of books. When I read, I like to copy down nice sentences. I also make reading notes and share my thoughts with my friends.
Reading is fun. It not only brings me pleasure but also develops my characteristics. I am not as shy as I used to be after reading Treasure Island. I care more about society and the world through Lu Xun's works. Reading has become a part of my life. Let's grow up with reading.
【知识点】
主题书面表达，一般现在时运用，写作要点整合
【点评】
本文完全覆盖了题目要求的三个核心问题，逻辑层次清晰，从阅读的意义到个人习惯再到自身改变层层递进，加入的具体阅读实例让内容更真实生动，语言流畅自然，符合校刊征文的积极风格，词数符合要求，收尾的倡议也很有感染力。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要明确核心要求：主题为Enjoy reading，必须覆盖思维导图给出的三个指定问题，词数控制在90词左右，作为校刊征文风格要积极真诚。接下来梳理写作思路：题目已经给出开篇总起句，接下来第一部分先回答阅读的重要性，点明阅读的价值；第二部分介绍自己日常的阅读习惯，比如阅读频率、阅读时的相关做法；第三部分结合实际体验讲阅读给自己带来的正向改变，最后收尾发出号召呼吁大家享受阅读，全程注意语法正确、语句衔接自然，不要遗漏任何给定要点。
【解析】
写作可按照三步有序完成：
1. 承接给定的总起句，阐述阅读的重要性：说明阅读能帮我们获取大量知识、开阔视野，在多方面助力个人成长进步，对应要点"What's the importance of reading?"。
2. 接着介绍个人阅读习惯：说明自己的阅读频率，比如每日睡前阅读，日常会摘抄优美句子、写读书笔记，还会和朋友分享阅读感悟，对应要点"What are your reading habits?"。
3. 最后分享阅读带来的改变：举例说明阅读不仅带来乐趣，还塑造了自身性格，比如读完《金银岛》后不再像从前害羞，读鲁迅作品后更关心社会和世界，最后发出倡议呼吁大家和阅读共同成长，对应要点"What are the changes after reading?"。
全程使用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主，描述过去的状态变化时适当使用一般过去时，保证内容连贯，符合校刊征文的语境要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Reading plays an important part in our life. We can get lots of knowledge through reading. Reading can open our eyes and help us make progress in many ways.
I read books before going to bed every day. I like reading all kinds of books. When I read, I like to copy down nice sentences. I also make reading notes and share my thoughts with my friends.
Reading is fun. It not only brings me pleasure but also develops my characteristics. I am not as shy as I used to be after reading Treasure Island. I care more about society and the world through Lu Xun's works. Reading has become a part of my life. Let's grow up with reading.
【知识点】
主题书面表达，一般现在时运用，写作要点整合
【点评】
本文完全覆盖了题目要求的三个核心问题，逻辑层次清晰，从阅读的意义到个人习惯再到自身改变层层递进，加入的具体阅读实例让内容更真实生动，语言流畅自然，符合校刊征文的积极风格，词数符合要求，收尾的倡议也很有感染力。
【难度系数】
0.6