五、书面表达。
近期,你校将以"Be a student with good manners"为题,组织学生开展讨论。请根据以下要点提示,用英语写一篇 90 词左右的短文,表达自己的观点。已给出部分不计入总词数。
要点:1. 在学校:尊重老师;对同学友善,互相帮助;2. 在家里:尊敬长辈;爱家人,自己的事情自己做;3. 言谈举止:礼貌语言、餐桌礼仪;行走或者骑车时遵守交通规则;不在公共场所大声喧哗;不乱扔垃圾,保持环境干净。
Be a student with good manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
近期,你校将以"Be a student with good manners"为题,组织学生开展讨论。请根据以下要点提示,用英语写一篇 90 词左右的短文,表达自己的观点。已给出部分不计入总词数。
要点:1. 在学校:尊重老师;对同学友善,互相帮助;2. 在家里:尊敬长辈;爱家人,自己的事情自己做;3. 言谈举止:礼貌语言、餐桌礼仪;行走或者骑车时遵守交通规则;不在公共场所大声喧哗;不乱扔垃圾,保持环境干净。
Be a student with good manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
At school, we should respect our teachers. We should also be kind to our classmates and help each other.
At home, we should respect the elderly. Also, we should love family members and do things by ourselves.
Then, we should say “please” and “thank you” all the time. As for table manners, we should not start eating until everyone is ready. And we shouldn't talk with food in our mouths.
Besides, we should obey traffic rules when walking or riding bikes. Remember not to cross the street until the traffic light is green. In public, don't shout loudly.
What's more, to keep the environment clean, don't drop litter everywhere.
答案：五、One possible version:
Be a student with good manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
At school, we should respect our teachers. We should also be kind to our classmates and help each other.
At home, we should respect the elderly. Also, we should love family members and do things by ourselves.
Then, we should say “please” and “thank you” all the time. As for table manners, we should not start eating until everyone is ready. And we shouldn't talk with food in our mouths. Besides, we should obey traffic rules when walking or riding bikes. Remember not to cross the street until the traffic light is green. In public, don't shout loudly. What's more, to keep the environment clean, don't drop litter everywhere.
Take action now. Behave well!
Be a student with good manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
At school, we should respect our teachers. We should also be kind to our classmates and help each other.
At home, we should respect the elderly. Also, we should love family members and do things by ourselves.
Then, we should say “please” and “thank you” all the time. As for table manners, we should not start eating until everyone is ready. And we shouldn't talk with food in our mouths. Besides, we should obey traffic rules when walking or riding bikes. Remember not to cross the street until the traffic light is green. In public, don't shout loudly. What's more, to keep the environment clean, don't drop litter everywhere.
Take action now. Behave well!
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步先审题：明确写作主题是"Be a student with good manners"，文体是观点类短文，要用第一人称we、一般现在时书写，总词数90左右，已给出的开头不计入词数。接下来梳理所有给定的提示要点，把要点分成校园场景、家庭场景、公共言行规范三类，避免漏写得分点。后续写作可以按照三个场景的顺序依次展开内容，用合适的过渡词（如At school, At home, Besides等）串联不同部分，让行文逻辑清晰，写完所有要点后补充一句简短的行动呼吁收尾，最后检查语法错误、核对所有要点是否都覆盖，调整词数符合要求即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 审题定位：确定主题为倡导做有礼貌的学生，锁定人称用第一人称复数，时态为一般现在时，明确所有必写得分点，避免遗漏。
2. 搭建行文框架：
① 承接给定开头，先写校园礼仪部分：对应要点写出尊重老师、友善对待同学、互相帮助的内容；
② 接着写家庭礼仪部分：对应要点写出尊敬长辈、关爱家人、自己的事情独立完成的内容；
③ 最后写公共言行规范部分：依次覆盖礼貌用语使用、餐桌礼仪、出行遵守交通规则、公共场合不大声喧哗、不乱扔垃圾维护环境整洁的所有要点，用过渡词串联内容，让语句衔接自然。
3. 收尾补充简短的行动呼吁，通读全文修正语法错误，调整表达让语句通顺，控制总词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Be a student with good manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
At school, we should respect our teachers. We should also be kind to our classmates and help each other.
At home, we should respect the elderly. Also, we should love family members and do things by ourselves.
Then, we should say “please” and “thank you” all the time. As for table manners, we should not start eating until everyone is ready. And we shouldn't talk with food in our mouths. Besides, we should obey traffic rules when walking or riding bikes. Remember not to cross the street until the traffic light is green. In public, don't shout loudly. What's more, to keep the environment clean, don't drop litter everywhere.
Take action now. Behave well!
【知识点】
英语话题写作，文明礼仪类表达，写作衔接词使用
【点评】
本题是初中阶段非常典型的要点提示类书面表达，所有得分点都明确给出，学生不需要自行拓展太多内容，只需要把提示的所有要点用正确通顺的英语表达出来，适当加入过渡词避免内容零散，注意规避中式英语和基础语法错误，覆盖全部要点就可以拿到不错的分数，属于常规的基础写作题。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步先审题：明确写作主题是"Be a student with good manners"，文体是观点类短文，要用第一人称we、一般现在时书写，总词数90左右，已给出的开头不计入词数。接下来梳理所有给定的提示要点，把要点分成校园场景、家庭场景、公共言行规范三类，避免漏写得分点。后续写作可以按照三个场景的顺序依次展开内容，用合适的过渡词（如At school, At home, Besides等）串联不同部分，让行文逻辑清晰，写完所有要点后补充一句简短的行动呼吁收尾，最后检查语法错误、核对所有要点是否都覆盖，调整词数符合要求即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 审题定位：确定主题为倡导做有礼貌的学生，锁定人称用第一人称复数，时态为一般现在时，明确所有必写得分点，避免遗漏。
2. 搭建行文框架：
① 承接给定开头，先写校园礼仪部分：对应要点写出尊重老师、友善对待同学、互相帮助的内容；
② 接着写家庭礼仪部分：对应要点写出尊敬长辈、关爱家人、自己的事情独立完成的内容；
③ 最后写公共言行规范部分：依次覆盖礼貌用语使用、餐桌礼仪、出行遵守交通规则、公共场合不大声喧哗、不乱扔垃圾维护环境整洁的所有要点，用过渡词串联内容，让语句衔接自然。
3. 收尾补充简短的行动呼吁，通读全文修正语法错误，调整表达让语句通顺，控制总词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Be a student with good manners
It is very important to be a person with good manners in our daily life.
At school, we should respect our teachers. We should also be kind to our classmates and help each other.
At home, we should respect the elderly. Also, we should love family members and do things by ourselves.
Then, we should say “please” and “thank you” all the time. As for table manners, we should not start eating until everyone is ready. And we shouldn't talk with food in our mouths. Besides, we should obey traffic rules when walking or riding bikes. Remember not to cross the street until the traffic light is green. In public, don't shout loudly. What's more, to keep the environment clean, don't drop litter everywhere.
Take action now. Behave well!
【知识点】
英语话题写作，文明礼仪类表达，写作衔接词使用
【点评】
本题是初中阶段非常典型的要点提示类书面表达，所有得分点都明确给出，学生不需要自行拓展太多内容，只需要把提示的所有要点用正确通顺的英语表达出来，适当加入过渡词避免内容零散，注意规避中式英语和基础语法错误，覆盖全部要点就可以拿到不错的分数，属于常规的基础写作题。
【难度系数】
0.7