五、书面表达。
“赠人玫瑰，手留余香”。这不仅是付出，还是一种收获。暑假即将到来，为了让学生参加社会公益活动，做个对社会有担当的人，你校近期将以“I want to be a volunteer”为题举办一次演讲比赛。假如你是张华，请根据以下提示写一篇 90 词左右的英文演讲稿。
I want to be a volunteer
Hello, everyone. My name is Zhang Hua. I want to be a volunteer. I’m glad to make a speech here.
Thank you for listening!
“赠人玫瑰，手留余香”。这不仅是付出，还是一种收获。暑假即将到来，为了让学生参加社会公益活动，做个对社会有担当的人，你校近期将以“I want to be a volunteer”为题举办一次演讲比赛。假如你是张华，请根据以下提示写一篇 90 词左右的英文演讲稿。
I want to be a volunteer
Hello, everyone. My name is Zhang Hua. I want to be a volunteer. I’m glad to make a speech here.
I have good manners. I'm polite. I always obey traffic rules and never litter everywhere. In my free time, I like travelling and reading. I think they can lead me into a whole new world. Last month, I donated my books, clothes and food to those in need. Also, I gave my seat to the elderly on the bus. What's more, I helped the cleaners clean the park at weekends.
I think it is meaningful to help others. I know being an excellent volunteer is not an easy job. Also, I believe it is necessary for volunteers to be patient enough. I will try my best to make a difference to people around me.
I think it is meaningful to help others. I know being an excellent volunteer is not an easy job. Also, I believe it is necessary for volunteers to be patient enough. I will try my best to make a difference to people around me.
Thank you for listening!
答案：五、One possible version:
I want to be a volunteer
Hello, everyone. My name is Zhang Hua. I want to be a volunteer. I'm glad to make a speech here.
I have good manners. I'm polite. I always obey traffic rules and never litter everywhere. In my free time, I like travelling and reading. I think they can lead me into a whole new world. Last month, I donated my books, clothes and food to those in need. Also, I gave my seat to the elderly on the bus. What's more, I helped the cleaners clean the park at weekends.
I think it is meaningful to help others. I know being an excellent volunteer is not an easy job. Also, I believe it is necessary for volunteers to be patient enough. I will try my best to make a difference to people around me.
Thank you for listening!
I want to be a volunteer
Hello, everyone. My name is Zhang Hua. I want to be a volunteer. I'm glad to make a speech here.
I have good manners. I'm polite. I always obey traffic rules and never litter everywhere. In my free time, I like travelling and reading. I think they can lead me into a whole new world. Last month, I donated my books, clothes and food to those in need. Also, I gave my seat to the elderly on the bus. What's more, I helped the cleaners clean the park at weekends.
I think it is meaningful to help others. I know being an excellent volunteer is not an easy job. Also, I believe it is necessary for volunteers to be patient enough. I will try my best to make a difference to people around me.
Thank you for listening!
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇主题为“我想成为一名志愿者”的英语演讲稿写作题，解题时首先要理清所有给定的提示要点，避免漏写：第一步先承接开头，介绍自身的优秀品质，把有礼貌、遵守交通规则、从不乱扔垃圾的内容自然表述出来；第二步介绍自己的爱好旅游和阅读，补充合理的喜欢理由，比如这两个爱好能帮自己开阔视野、见识更广阔的世界；第三步描述自己过往做过的公益相关事迹，注意上个月发生的动作要使用一般过去时，准确翻译捐书、衣物食物给有需要的人、公交让座、周末帮清洁工打扫公园的内容；最后补充至少两点感悟，比如帮助他人很有意义、做志愿者需要足够耐心，表达自己想要成为志愿者的决心，最后控制总词数符合要求，行文用合适的衔接词串联，保证语气符合演讲稿的真诚感。
【解析】
1. 确定文体与时态：本文是演讲稿，使用第一人称写作，介绍个人品质、爱好、观点感悟使用一般现在时，描述上个月发生的过往事迹使用一般过去时。
2. 逐点覆盖所有提示信息：
① 品质部分：说明自己懂礼貌，一直遵守交通规则，从不随处乱扔垃圾；
② 爱好部分：说明空闲时间喜欢旅游和阅读，给出理由：这两个爱好能带领自己进入全新的世界，拓宽眼界；
③ 过往事迹部分：表述上个月自己给有需要的人捐赠了书籍、衣服和食物，在公交车上给老人让座，周末还会帮助清洁工打扫公园；
④ 感悟部分：写出至少两点感悟，比如帮助他人是很有意义的事，成为优秀的志愿者并不容易，志愿者需要足够有耐心，自己会尽全力为身边的人带来积极的影响。
3. 使用合适的衔接词如In my free time、What's more等串联内容，保证行文流畅，检查拼写和语法错误，符合演讲稿的表达风格。
【答案】
I have good manners. I'm polite. I always obey traffic rules and never litter everywhere. In my free time, I like travelling and reading. I think they can lead me into a whole new world. Last month, I donated my books, clothes and food to those in need. Also, I gave my seat to the elderly on the bus. What's more, I helped the cleaners clean the park at weekends.
I think it is meaningful to help others. I know being an excellent volunteer is not an easy job. Also, I believe it is necessary for volunteers to be patient enough. I will try my best to make a difference to people around me.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作，一般过去时应用，提纲类作文要点覆盖
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部提示要点，逻辑层次清晰，衔接自然流畅，时态使用准确，既清晰展现了自身适合成为志愿者的特质和过往公益经历，也合理表达了自己的公益感悟，语气真诚贴合演讲场景，符合题目的所有要求。同学们写作时要注意区分不同时间的动作对应的时态，不要遗漏给定要点，适当添加衔接词让行文更连贯。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇主题为“我想成为一名志愿者”的英语演讲稿写作题，解题时首先要理清所有给定的提示要点，避免漏写：第一步先承接开头，介绍自身的优秀品质，把有礼貌、遵守交通规则、从不乱扔垃圾的内容自然表述出来；第二步介绍自己的爱好旅游和阅读，补充合理的喜欢理由，比如这两个爱好能帮自己开阔视野、见识更广阔的世界；第三步描述自己过往做过的公益相关事迹，注意上个月发生的动作要使用一般过去时，准确翻译捐书、衣物食物给有需要的人、公交让座、周末帮清洁工打扫公园的内容；最后补充至少两点感悟，比如帮助他人很有意义、做志愿者需要足够耐心，表达自己想要成为志愿者的决心，最后控制总词数符合要求，行文用合适的衔接词串联，保证语气符合演讲稿的真诚感。
【解析】
1. 确定文体与时态：本文是演讲稿，使用第一人称写作，介绍个人品质、爱好、观点感悟使用一般现在时，描述上个月发生的过往事迹使用一般过去时。
2. 逐点覆盖所有提示信息：
① 品质部分：说明自己懂礼貌，一直遵守交通规则，从不随处乱扔垃圾；
② 爱好部分：说明空闲时间喜欢旅游和阅读，给出理由：这两个爱好能带领自己进入全新的世界，拓宽眼界；
③ 过往事迹部分：表述上个月自己给有需要的人捐赠了书籍、衣服和食物，在公交车上给老人让座，周末还会帮助清洁工打扫公园；
④ 感悟部分：写出至少两点感悟，比如帮助他人是很有意义的事，成为优秀的志愿者并不容易，志愿者需要足够有耐心，自己会尽全力为身边的人带来积极的影响。
3. 使用合适的衔接词如In my free time、What's more等串联内容，保证行文流畅，检查拼写和语法错误，符合演讲稿的表达风格。
【答案】
I have good manners. I'm polite. I always obey traffic rules and never litter everywhere. In my free time, I like travelling and reading. I think they can lead me into a whole new world. Last month, I donated my books, clothes and food to those in need. Also, I gave my seat to the elderly on the bus. What's more, I helped the cleaners clean the park at weekends.
I think it is meaningful to help others. I know being an excellent volunteer is not an easy job. Also, I believe it is necessary for volunteers to be patient enough. I will try my best to make a difference to people around me.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作，一般过去时应用，提纲类作文要点覆盖
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部提示要点，逻辑层次清晰，衔接自然流畅，时态使用准确，既清晰展现了自身适合成为志愿者的特质和过往公益经历，也合理表达了自己的公益感悟，语气真诚贴合演讲场景，符合题目的所有要求。同学们写作时要注意区分不同时间的动作对应的时态，不要遗漏给定要点，适当添加衔接词让行文更连贯。
【难度系数】
0.6