十一、书面表达。(共5分)
你家离学校远吗?你是如何到学校的呢?你的父母又是如何去上班的呢?在周末,你们一家人经常去哪里?又是如何去的呢?假设你是 Tom,请你根据所给图片,结合实际情况,写一写你和家人的出行方式。不少于5句话。

你家离学校远吗?你是如何到学校的呢?你的父母又是如何去上班的呢?在周末,你们一家人经常去哪里?又是如何去的呢?假设你是 Tom,请你根据所给图片,结合实际情况,写一写你和家人的出行方式。不少于5句话。
One possible version:
Hello, I'm Tom. I live far from school. So I usually go to school by bus. Sometimes I go to school by bike. My father goes to work by car. My mother goes to work on foot. At weekends, we often have a picnic in the park. We often fly kites and have a good time.
答案:One possible version:
Hello, I'm Tom. I live far from school. So I usually go to school by bus. Sometimes I go to school by bike. My father goes to work by car. My mother goes to work on foot. At weekends, we often have a picnic in the park. We often fly kites and have a good time.
Hello, I'm Tom. I live far from school. So I usually go to school by bus. Sometimes I go to school by bike. My father goes to work by car. My mother goes to work on foot. At weekends, we often have a picnic in the park. We often fly kites and have a good time.
解析:
【分析】
首先,我们需要明确写作任务:以Tom的身份,介绍自己家与学校的距离、自身上学的出行方式,父母上班的出行方式,以及周末一家人的出行目的地和活动。解题思路如下:
1. 开头先进行自我介绍,点明身份;
2. 说明家与学校的距离,结合图片中的自行车、公交车,描述自己上学的出行方式;
3. 合理设定父母的上班出行方式,使内容符合实际;
4. 结合图片里的野餐、放风筝场景,描述周末一家人的出行目的地和活动,确保内容丰富且符合要求,句子数量不少于5句。
【解析】
1. 开篇自我介绍:Hello, I'm Tom. 明确身份,开启全文;
2. 介绍上学相关情况:I live far from school. So I usually go to school by bus. Sometimes I go to school by bike. 先说明家离学校远,再结合图片中的公交车和自行车,给出两种上学的出行方式;
3. 介绍父母上班的出行方式:My father goes to work by car. My mother goes to work on foot. 合理设定父母的通勤方式,符合日常实际;
4. 描述周末活动:At weekends, we often have a picnic in the park. We often fly kites and have a good time. 结合图片里的野餐、放风筝场景,说明周末的出行目的地和活动,使内容完整充实。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, I'm Tom. I live far from school. So I usually go to school by bus. Sometimes I go to school by bike. My father goes to work by car. My mother goes to work on foot. At weekends, we often have a picnic in the park. We often fly kites and have a good time.
【知识点】
出行方式表达;一般现在时运用;日常活动描述
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求,结合图片元素,层次清晰地介绍了自己上学、父母上班的出行方式,以及周末家庭的出行活动。语言简洁通顺,符合小学英语书面表达的要求,内容完整且符合实际,能很好地完成写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.8
首先,我们需要明确写作任务:以Tom的身份,介绍自己家与学校的距离、自身上学的出行方式,父母上班的出行方式,以及周末一家人的出行目的地和活动。解题思路如下:
1. 开头先进行自我介绍,点明身份;
2. 说明家与学校的距离,结合图片中的自行车、公交车,描述自己上学的出行方式;
3. 合理设定父母的上班出行方式,使内容符合实际;
4. 结合图片里的野餐、放风筝场景,描述周末一家人的出行目的地和活动,确保内容丰富且符合要求,句子数量不少于5句。
【解析】
1. 开篇自我介绍:Hello, I'm Tom. 明确身份,开启全文;
2. 介绍上学相关情况:I live far from school. So I usually go to school by bus. Sometimes I go to school by bike. 先说明家离学校远,再结合图片中的公交车和自行车,给出两种上学的出行方式;
3. 介绍父母上班的出行方式:My father goes to work by car. My mother goes to work on foot. 合理设定父母的通勤方式,符合日常实际;
4. 描述周末活动:At weekends, we often have a picnic in the park. We often fly kites and have a good time. 结合图片里的野餐、放风筝场景,说明周末的出行目的地和活动,使内容完整充实。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, I'm Tom. I live far from school. So I usually go to school by bus. Sometimes I go to school by bike. My father goes to work by car. My mother goes to work on foot. At weekends, we often have a picnic in the park. We often fly kites and have a good time.
【知识点】
出行方式表达;一般现在时运用;日常活动描述
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求,结合图片元素,层次清晰地介绍了自己上学、父母上班的出行方式,以及周末家庭的出行活动。语言简洁通顺,符合小学英语书面表达的要求,内容完整且符合实际,能很好地完成写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.8