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十二、书面表达。(共6分)
实验学校的 Alan 感觉冷而且头疼,他请假去看医生,同学 Amy 告诉他去医院的路线。在医院,医生检查后告诉他,他只是感冒,暂时不需要吃药。请发挥你的想象,根据提示编写一段对话。
要求:1. 条理清晰,意思连贯,包含提示中的所有要点;
2. 语句通顺,无语法错误;
3. 不少于 50 词,已给出的内容不计入总词数。
(At school)

Alan: Amy, can you tell me

Amy: Well.

(In the hospital)
Doctor:

Alan:

Doctor:

Alan:

Doctor:

Alan: OK, I get it. Thank you.

答案:(At school)
Alan: Amy, can you tell me the way to the hospital? I feel cold and have a headache. I need to see a doctor.
Amy: Well. Go straight and turn right at the first crossing. Then you can see the hospital on your left.
(In the hospital)
Doctor: What's the matter with you?
Alan: I feel cold and have a headache.
Doctor: Let me check. Open your mouth and say "Ah".
Alan: Ah... Do I need to take some medicine?
Doctor: You just have a cold. You don't need to take medicine now. Drink more water and have a good rest.
Alan: OK, I get it. Thank you.
解析:
【分析】
首先,我们需要明确对话分为学校和医院两个场景,要覆盖题目所有要点:Alan感冒头疼要去看医生、Amy告知去医院的路线、医生检查后诊断为感冒且无需吃药。
第一步,学校场景中,Alan开口要先问路,同时说明自己的症状和去医院的原因,让对话更合理自然;Amy的路线描述要清晰具体,使用常见的指路句型,比如“Go straight”“turn right”等,让路线易懂。
第二步,医院场景中,医生先主动询问病情,Alan重复症状,医生安排检查动作,Alan接着询问是否需要吃药,最后医生给出诊断结果、无需吃药的结论以及护理建议,结尾Alan表达感谢,符合就医的真实对话逻辑。整个对话要保证语句通顺,无语法错误,满足词数要求。
【解析】
1. 学校场景对话设计:
Alan的话:既要提出问路请求,又要说明自身症状和就医需求,所以写成“Amy, can you tell me the way to the hospital? I feel cold and have a headache. I need to see a doctor.”,清晰传达信息,符合语境。
Amy的话:用简洁明了的指路用语,“Go straight and turn right at the first crossing. Then you can see the hospital on your left.”,使用常见的指路指令,让路线清晰易懂。
2. 医院场景对话设计:
医生先询问病情:“What's the matter with you?”是就医场景常用的询问语。
Alan重复症状:“I feel cold and have a headache.”呼应之前的表述,保持连贯。
医生安排检查:“Let me check. Open your mouth and say 'Ah'.”符合医生检查的常规动作。
Alan询问用药:“Ah... Do I need to take some medicine?”贴合患者的担忧,自然过渡到后续诊断。
医生给出诊断和建议:“You just have a cold. You don't need to take medicine now. Drink more water and have a good rest.”既回应了Alan的问题,又给出合理的护理建议,符合题目要求。
最后Alan的感谢语“OK, I get it. Thank you.”完成对话收尾,符合日常交际礼仪。
【答案】
(At school)
Alan: Amy, can you tell me the way to the hospital? I feel cold and have a headache. I need to see a doctor.
Amy: Well. Go straight and turn right at the first crossing. Then you can see the hospital on your left.
(In the hospital)
Doctor: What's the matter with you?
Alan: I feel cold and have a headache.
Doctor: Let me check. Open your mouth and say "Ah".
Alan: Ah... Do I need to take some medicine?
Doctor: You just have a cold. You don't need to take medicine now. Drink more water and have a good rest.
Alan: OK, I get it. Thank you.
【知识点】
1. 问路指路用语
2. 就医交际用语
3. 日常健康表达
【点评】
本对话完整覆盖题目所有要点,分学校、医院两个场景展开,逻辑清晰,语句通顺自然,符合日常交际和就医场景的语言习惯,语法正确,满足词数要求,能够很好地完成书面表达任务。
【难度系数】
0.8
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