十一、书面表达。(共7分)
周日,Nancy想去动物园,但是她不知道怎么走,所以她向警察问路。首先,她坐地铁到动物园站下车。然后,她沿着街道一直走,在交通灯处左转。最后,她看见动物园就在她的右侧。请根据以上内容写一篇短文,不少于50词。
周日,Nancy想去动物园,但是她不知道怎么走,所以她向警察问路。首先,她坐地铁到动物园站下车。然后,她沿着街道一直走,在交通灯处左转。最后,她看见动物园就在她的右侧。请根据以上内容写一篇短文,不少于50词。
答案:One possible version: It's Sunday. Nancy wants to go to the zoo, but she doesn't know the way. So she asks a policeman for help. And the policeman tells her how to get there. First, she takes the metro and gets off at Zoo Station. Then, she walks along the street and turns left at the traffic lights. Finally, she can see the zoo on her right.
解析:
【分析】
首先要明确写作任务:以Nancy周日去动物园问路并按路线前往为内容写短文,不少于50词。解题思路如下:1. 开篇交代时间(周日)和Nancy的出行目的与困境(想去动物园但不知路);2. 写她的解决办法——向警察问路;3. 用first、then、finally这些顺序副词,依次清晰描述前往动物园的三步路线;4. 最后检查内容是否完整、语法是否正确,确保字数达标。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入:用“It's Sunday.”点明时间,接着说明Nancy的需求和困境:“Nancy wants to go to the zoo, but she doesn't know the way.”
2. 描述解决方式:写出她向警察求助的动作:“So she asks a policeman for help. And the policeman tells her how to get there.”
3. 分步骤写路线:
第一步:“First, she takes the metro and gets off at Zoo Station.”(坐地铁到动物园站下车)
第二步:“Then, she walks along the street and turns left at the traffic lights.”(沿街道走,红绿灯处左转)
第三步:“Finally, she can see the zoo on her right.”(看到动物园在右侧)
4. 整体语句通顺,逻辑清晰,满足字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version: It's Sunday. Nancy wants to go to the zoo, but she doesn't know the way. So she asks a policeman for help. And the policeman tells her how to get there. First, she takes the metro and gets off at Zoo Station. Then, she walks along the street and turns left at the traffic lights. Finally, she can see the zoo on her right.
【知识点】
问路与指路表达;顺序副词使用;一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,以清晰的逻辑顺序展开内容,用first、then、finally等顺序副词明确呈现出行路线,语言简洁准确,符合英语书面表达的基本要求,能很好地完成写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.8
首先要明确写作任务:以Nancy周日去动物园问路并按路线前往为内容写短文,不少于50词。解题思路如下:1. 开篇交代时间(周日)和Nancy的出行目的与困境(想去动物园但不知路);2. 写她的解决办法——向警察问路;3. 用first、then、finally这些顺序副词,依次清晰描述前往动物园的三步路线;4. 最后检查内容是否完整、语法是否正确,确保字数达标。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入:用“It's Sunday.”点明时间,接着说明Nancy的需求和困境:“Nancy wants to go to the zoo, but she doesn't know the way.”
2. 描述解决方式:写出她向警察求助的动作:“So she asks a policeman for help. And the policeman tells her how to get there.”
3. 分步骤写路线:
第一步:“First, she takes the metro and gets off at Zoo Station.”(坐地铁到动物园站下车)
第二步:“Then, she walks along the street and turns left at the traffic lights.”(沿街道走,红绿灯处左转)
第三步:“Finally, she can see the zoo on her right.”(看到动物园在右侧)
4. 整体语句通顺,逻辑清晰,满足字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version: It's Sunday. Nancy wants to go to the zoo, but she doesn't know the way. So she asks a policeman for help. And the policeman tells her how to get there. First, she takes the metro and gets off at Zoo Station. Then, she walks along the street and turns left at the traffic lights. Finally, she can see the zoo on her right.
【知识点】
问路与指路表达;顺序副词使用;一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,以清晰的逻辑顺序展开内容,用first、then、finally等顺序副词明确呈现出行路线,语言简洁准确,符合英语书面表达的基本要求,能很好地完成写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.8