十一、（南京溧水区）书面表达。（共 5 分）
今天是周日，Mike 一家正在做什么呢？上午 10 点，妈妈正在厨房做午饭，Mike 在帮忙洗蔬菜，爸爸在洗车，Helen 在冰箱里找果汁。下午 2 点，爸爸妈妈在做生日蛋糕，因为明天是 Tim 的生日，Tim 在玩游戏。请你根据以上内容，帮助 Mike 记录这美好的一天。
（参考词汇：kitchen，wash）
要求：1. 涵盖所提供的全部信息，可适当地添加内容；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数 40 左右，已给部分不计入总词数。
Hello, I'm Mike. Today is Sunday. It's ten o'clock in the morning.
It's two o'clock in the afternoon now.
We have a happy day.
今天是周日，Mike 一家正在做什么呢？上午 10 点，妈妈正在厨房做午饭，Mike 在帮忙洗蔬菜，爸爸在洗车，Helen 在冰箱里找果汁。下午 2 点，爸爸妈妈在做生日蛋糕，因为明天是 Tim 的生日，Tim 在玩游戏。请你根据以上内容，帮助 Mike 记录这美好的一天。
（参考词汇：kitchen，wash）
要求：1. 涵盖所提供的全部信息，可适当地添加内容；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数 40 左右，已给部分不计入总词数。
Hello, I'm Mike. Today is Sunday. It's ten o'clock in the morning.
My mother is cooking lunch in the kitchen. I am washing the vegetables. I want to cook vegetable soup. My father is cleaning his car. Helen is thirsty. She is looking for some juice in the fridge.
It's two o'clock in the afternoon now.
My parents are making the birthday cake. Because tomorrow is Tim's birthday. What about Tim? He is playing games.
We have a happy day.
答案：One possible version:
Hello, I'm Mike. Today is Sunday. It's ten o'clock in the morning. My mother is cooking lunch in the kitchen. I am washing the vegetables. I want to cook vegetable soup. My father is cleaning his car. Helen is thirsty. She is looking for some juice in the fridge.
It's two o'clock in the afternoon now. My parents are making the birthday cake. Because tomorrow is Tim's birthday. What about Tim? He is playing games.
We have a happy day.
Hello, I'm Mike. Today is Sunday. It's ten o'clock in the morning. My mother is cooking lunch in the kitchen. I am washing the vegetables. I want to cook vegetable soup. My father is cleaning his car. Helen is thirsty. She is looking for some juice in the fridge.
It's two o'clock in the afternoon now. My parents are making the birthday cake. Because tomorrow is Tim's birthday. What about Tim? He is playing games.
We have a happy day.
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇情景类书面表达，需要用现在进行时描述周日不同时间Mike一家的活动。解题思路如下：
1. 确定时态：题目描述的是具体时间点正在进行的动作，所以要用现在进行时，结构为“am/is/are + 动词现在分词”。
2. 梳理信息：先整理上午10点的活动：妈妈在厨房做午饭、Mike洗蔬菜、爸爸洗车、Helen找果汁；再整理下午2点的活动：爸妈做生日蛋糕（因为明天是Tim的生日）、Tim玩游戏。
3. 补充细节：为了让内容更连贯自然，可以适当添加合理细节，比如Mike洗蔬菜时说明想做蔬菜汤，Helen找果汁时说明她口渴了，使内容更生动。
4. 组织语言：按照时间顺序，先写上午的活动，再写下午的活动，注意语句通顺，衔接自然，控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
步骤1：确定时态基调
根据题目中“正在做什么”“上午10点”“下午2点”这些提示，全文主要使用现在进行时，体现动作正在进行的状态。
步骤2：撰写上午的活动内容
结合题目信息和补充细节，依次描述家庭成员的动作：
妈妈：My mother is cooking lunch in the kitchen.（点明地点kitchen，符合参考词汇要求）
Mike：I am washing the vegetables. I want to cook vegetable soup.（使用wash，补充合理想法）
爸爸：My father is cleaning his car.
Helen：Helen is thirsty. She is looking for some juice in the fridge.（补充口渴的原因，让找果汁的行为更合理）
步骤3：撰写下午的活动内容
先说明时间，再描述活动，同时点明做蛋糕的原因：
爸妈：My parents are making the birthday cake. Because tomorrow is Tim's birthday.
Tim：What about Tim? He is playing games.（用过渡句使内容衔接更自然）
步骤4：收尾
用题目给出的“We have a happy day.”收尾，呼应主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, I'm Mike. Today is Sunday. It's ten o'clock in the morning. My mother is cooking lunch in the kitchen. I am washing the vegetables. I want to cook vegetable soup. My father is cleaning his car. Helen is thirsty. She is looking for some juice in the fridge.
It's two o'clock in the afternoon now. My parents are making the birthday cake. Because tomorrow is Tim's birthday. What about Tim? He is playing games.
We have a happy day.
【知识点】
现在进行时用法、日常活动表达、情景写作
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖了所有给定信息，合理补充的细节让内容更生动连贯。准确运用现在进行时描述不同时间的活动，语言通顺自然，符合词数要求，是一篇规范的情景类写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇情景类书面表达，需要用现在进行时描述周日不同时间Mike一家的活动。解题思路如下：
1. 确定时态：题目描述的是具体时间点正在进行的动作，所以要用现在进行时，结构为“am/is/are + 动词现在分词”。
2. 梳理信息：先整理上午10点的活动：妈妈在厨房做午饭、Mike洗蔬菜、爸爸洗车、Helen找果汁；再整理下午2点的活动：爸妈做生日蛋糕（因为明天是Tim的生日）、Tim玩游戏。
3. 补充细节：为了让内容更连贯自然，可以适当添加合理细节，比如Mike洗蔬菜时说明想做蔬菜汤，Helen找果汁时说明她口渴了，使内容更生动。
4. 组织语言：按照时间顺序，先写上午的活动，再写下午的活动，注意语句通顺，衔接自然，控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
步骤1：确定时态基调
根据题目中“正在做什么”“上午10点”“下午2点”这些提示，全文主要使用现在进行时，体现动作正在进行的状态。
步骤2：撰写上午的活动内容
结合题目信息和补充细节，依次描述家庭成员的动作：
妈妈：My mother is cooking lunch in the kitchen.（点明地点kitchen，符合参考词汇要求）
Mike：I am washing the vegetables. I want to cook vegetable soup.（使用wash，补充合理想法）
爸爸：My father is cleaning his car.
Helen：Helen is thirsty. She is looking for some juice in the fridge.（补充口渴的原因，让找果汁的行为更合理）
步骤3：撰写下午的活动内容
先说明时间，再描述活动，同时点明做蛋糕的原因：
爸妈：My parents are making the birthday cake. Because tomorrow is Tim's birthday.
Tim：What about Tim? He is playing games.（用过渡句使内容衔接更自然）
步骤4：收尾
用题目给出的“We have a happy day.”收尾，呼应主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, I'm Mike. Today is Sunday. It's ten o'clock in the morning. My mother is cooking lunch in the kitchen. I am washing the vegetables. I want to cook vegetable soup. My father is cleaning his car. Helen is thirsty. She is looking for some juice in the fridge.
It's two o'clock in the afternoon now. My parents are making the birthday cake. Because tomorrow is Tim's birthday. What about Tim? He is playing games.
We have a happy day.
【知识点】
现在进行时用法、日常活动表达、情景写作
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖了所有给定信息，合理补充的细节让内容更生动连贯。准确运用现在进行时描述不同时间的活动，语言通顺自然，符合词数要求，是一篇规范的情景类写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.7