十三、书面表达。(共6分)
今天是十一月十九日,是 Ben 的生日, Lisa、苏玲、王涛等正在他家里给他过生日。请你用现在进行时写一写 Ben 生日现场的场景。不少于5句话。
提示词: have a party; watch a film; play games; sing a song
今天是十一月十九日,是 Ben 的生日, Lisa、苏玲、王涛等正在他家里给他过生日。请你用现在进行时写一写 Ben 生日现场的场景。不少于5句话。
提示词: have a party; watch a film; play games; sing a song
One possible version: Today is the nineteenth of November. It's Ben's birthday. Ben is very happy. He has a party at home, and his friends come to his party. Look! Lisa is watching a film with Su Ling. Ben and Wang Tao are playing games. Susan is singing an English song. How happy they are!
答案：One possible version: Today is the nineteenth of November. It's Ben's birthday. Ben is very happy. He has a party at home, and his friends come to his party. Look! Lisa is watching a film with Su Ling. Ben and Wang Tao are playing games. Susan is singing an English song. How happy they are!
解析：
【分析】
首先，我们需要明确写作核心要求：使用现在进行时描述Ben的生日现场，语句不少于5句，且要融入给定提示词。第一步，先点明背景信息：说明今天的日期是十一月十九日，是Ben的生日，他在家举办生日派对，朋友们都来参加。第二步，运用现在进行时（主语+am/is/are+动词ing形式）的结构，将提示词"watch a film""play games""sing a song"合理分配给不同人物，分别描述他们正在进行的动作。最后，用感叹句烘托派对的欢乐氛围，保证内容连贯、语句数量达标。
【解析】
1. 开篇铺垫场景：先写出日期和Ben的生日事件，说明他在家举办派对，朋友到场，为后续动作描述做铺垫。
2. 引出实时动作：用"Look!"引导出正在发生的行为，严格遵循现在进行时结构创作句子：
结合提示词"watch a film"，创作句子：Lisa is watching a film with Su Ling.
结合提示词"play games"，创作句子：Ben and Wang Tao are playing games.
结合提示词"sing a song"，创作句子：Susan is singing an English song.
3. 收尾烘托氛围：用感叹句"How happy they are!"强化派对的欢乐感。
4. 整合所有内容，确保语句通顺逻辑清晰，满足不少于5句的要求。
【答案】
One possible version: Today is the nineteenth of November. It's Ben's birthday. Ben is very happy. He has a party at home, and his friends come to his party. Look! Lisa is watching a film with Su Ling. Ben and Wang Tao are playing games. Susan is singing an English song. How happy they are!
【知识点】
现在进行时用法，情景写作，生日场景表达
【点评】
本题聚焦现在进行时的实际运用，同时考查学生根据提示信息构建场景、组织连贯语句的写作能力。给定提示词降低了创作难度，要求学生能准确掌握现在进行时结构，合理安排人物动作，生动呈现生日派对的欢乐氛围。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们需要明确写作核心要求：使用现在进行时描述Ben的生日现场，语句不少于5句，且要融入给定提示词。第一步，先点明背景信息：说明今天的日期是十一月十九日，是Ben的生日，他在家举办生日派对，朋友们都来参加。第二步，运用现在进行时（主语+am/is/are+动词ing形式）的结构，将提示词"watch a film""play games""sing a song"合理分配给不同人物，分别描述他们正在进行的动作。最后，用感叹句烘托派对的欢乐氛围，保证内容连贯、语句数量达标。
【解析】
1. 开篇铺垫场景：先写出日期和Ben的生日事件，说明他在家举办派对，朋友到场，为后续动作描述做铺垫。
2. 引出实时动作：用"Look!"引导出正在发生的行为，严格遵循现在进行时结构创作句子：
结合提示词"watch a film"，创作句子：Lisa is watching a film with Su Ling.
结合提示词"play games"，创作句子：Ben and Wang Tao are playing games.
结合提示词"sing a song"，创作句子：Susan is singing an English song.
3. 收尾烘托氛围：用感叹句"How happy they are!"强化派对的欢乐感。
4. 整合所有内容，确保语句通顺逻辑清晰，满足不少于5句的要求。
【答案】
One possible version: Today is the nineteenth of November. It's Ben's birthday. Ben is very happy. He has a party at home, and his friends come to his party. Look! Lisa is watching a film with Su Ling. Ben and Wang Tao are playing games. Susan is singing an English song. How happy they are!
【知识点】
现在进行时用法，情景写作，生日场景表达
【点评】
本题聚焦现在进行时的实际运用，同时考查学生根据提示信息构建场景、组织连贯语句的写作能力。给定提示词降低了创作难度，要求学生能准确掌握现在进行时结构，合理安排人物动作，生动呈现生日派对的欢乐氛围。
【难度系数】
0.7