十二、书面表达。(共5分)
请根据思维导图,介绍一个对你来说重要的日子。
要求:1. 短文必须包含思维导图中的所有提示;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 不少于6句话。
请根据思维导图,介绍一个对你来说重要的日子。
要求:1. 短文必须包含思维导图中的所有提示;
2. 语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 不少于6句话。
答案：One possible version:
There are many important days for me in a year. One of them is the Spring Festival. At the Spring Festival, I can get together with my family. We usually have a big dinner at home. I like eating jiaozi on that day. I also visit my friends and relatives. I am very happy to see them. I like the Spring Festival.
There are many important days for me in a year. One of them is the Spring Festival. At the Spring Festival, I can get together with my family. We usually have a big dinner at home. I like eating jiaozi on that day. I also visit my friends and relatives. I am very happy to see them. I like the Spring Festival.
解析：
【分析】
首先，我们需要明确题目要求：要介绍一个对自己重要的日子，必须包含思维导图的三个核心要点——What（是什么日子）、Why（为什么重要）、What do you do（当天做什么），且短文不少于6句话。
思考步骤：1. 先选定一个熟悉的重要日子，比如春节（Spring Festival），这类节日有丰富的活动，容易展开内容；2. 开篇先引出这个日子，说明它是自己重要的日子之一；3. 阐述原因，比如能和家人团聚，带来快乐；4. 详细描述当天的活动，比如吃年夜饭、吃饺子、拜访亲友等，丰富内容；5. 结尾表达对这个日子的喜爱，确保句子数量达标，语句通顺。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：先用句子"There are many important days for me in a year. One of them is the Spring Festival."点明要介绍的重要日子，回应思维导图的"What?"；
2. 说明原因：通过"At the Spring Festival, I can get together with my family."解释这个日子重要的原因，回应"Why?"；
3. 描述活动：用"We usually have a big dinner at home. I like eating jiaozi on that day. I also visit my friends and relatives."等句子详细介绍当天的行为，回应"What do you do?"；
4. 收尾抒情：用"I am very happy to see them. I like the Spring Festival."表达自己的感受，完成短文，同时满足不少于6句话的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
There are many important days for me in a year. One of them is the Spring Festival. At the Spring Festival, I can get together with my family. We usually have a big dinner at home. I like eating jiaozi on that day. I also visit my friends and relatives. I am very happy to see them. I like the Spring Festival.
【知识点】
节日类英语写作；一般现在时运用；英语语篇组织
【点评】
本文严格围绕思维导图的三个要点展开，内容充实，逻辑清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，既满足了题目对内容和句式数量的要求，又生动地表达了对春节的喜爱之情，是一篇符合要求的范文，适合学生参考学习。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们需要明确题目要求：要介绍一个对自己重要的日子，必须包含思维导图的三个核心要点——What（是什么日子）、Why（为什么重要）、What do you do（当天做什么），且短文不少于6句话。
思考步骤：1. 先选定一个熟悉的重要日子，比如春节（Spring Festival），这类节日有丰富的活动，容易展开内容；2. 开篇先引出这个日子，说明它是自己重要的日子之一；3. 阐述原因，比如能和家人团聚，带来快乐；4. 详细描述当天的活动，比如吃年夜饭、吃饺子、拜访亲友等，丰富内容；5. 结尾表达对这个日子的喜爱，确保句子数量达标，语句通顺。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入：先用句子"There are many important days for me in a year. One of them is the Spring Festival."点明要介绍的重要日子，回应思维导图的"What?"；
2. 说明原因：通过"At the Spring Festival, I can get together with my family."解释这个日子重要的原因，回应"Why?"；
3. 描述活动：用"We usually have a big dinner at home. I like eating jiaozi on that day. I also visit my friends and relatives."等句子详细介绍当天的行为，回应"What do you do?"；
4. 收尾抒情：用"I am very happy to see them. I like the Spring Festival."表达自己的感受，完成短文，同时满足不少于6句话的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
There are many important days for me in a year. One of them is the Spring Festival. At the Spring Festival, I can get together with my family. We usually have a big dinner at home. I like eating jiaozi on that day. I also visit my friends and relatives. I am very happy to see them. I like the Spring Festival.
【知识点】
节日类英语写作；一般现在时运用；英语语篇组织
【点评】
本文严格围绕思维导图的三个要点展开，内容充实，逻辑清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，既满足了题目对内容和句式数量的要求，又生动地表达了对春节的喜爱之情，是一篇符合要求的范文，适合学生参考学习。
【难度系数】
0.7