七、书面表达
七彩云南欢迎世界各地的朋友。假如你是一位导游，请选择或自拟两个你印象深刻的景点，向外国朋友介绍美丽的云南。包含所有要点，80词左右。
|景点|介绍|
|----|----|
|Lugu Lake|high up in the mountains
quiet and beautiful
a place to go for a boat ride|
|Yulong Snow Mountain|5,596 metres high
look like a Chinese dragon
snow on the top all year round
special lakes|
|Tiger - leaping Gorge (虎跳峡)|a very dangerous part of the Yangtze River
tigers leap to the other side of the river|
|...|...|
七彩云南欢迎世界各地的朋友。假如你是一位导游，请选择或自拟两个你印象深刻的景点，向外国朋友介绍美丽的云南。包含所有要点，80词左右。
|景点|介绍|
|----|----|
|Lugu Lake|high up in the mountains
quiet and beautiful
a place to go for a boat ride|
|Yulong Snow Mountain|5,596 metres high
look like a Chinese dragon
snow on the top all year round
special lakes|
|Tiger - leaping Gorge (虎跳峡)|a very dangerous part of the Yangtze River
tigers leap to the other side of the river|
|...|...|
答案：One possible version:
Yunnan Province is full of beautiful places. It has some of the most beautiful places on our earth. Among them, I will share two with you.
Yulong Snow Mountain is 5,596 metres high. It looks like a silver Chinese dragon in the sun. The top of it is covered with snow almost all year round. There are special lakes too. They are fantastic.
Lugu Lake lies high up in the mountains. It is quiet and beautiful as well. It is like a pearl (珍珠) shining among the mountains. People like to go there and have a boat ride.
Welcome to Yunnan! You will be interested in its beautiful views.
Yunnan Province is full of beautiful places. It has some of the most beautiful places on our earth. Among them, I will share two with you.
Yulong Snow Mountain is 5,596 metres high. It looks like a silver Chinese dragon in the sun. The top of it is covered with snow almost all year round. There are special lakes too. They are fantastic.
Lugu Lake lies high up in the mountains. It is quiet and beautiful as well. It is like a pearl (珍珠) shining among the mountains. People like to go there and have a boat ride.
Welcome to Yunnan! You will be interested in its beautiful views.
解析：
【解析】
1. 开篇引出云南美景众多，点明要介绍的两个景点；
2. 选取玉龙雪山和泸沽湖，结合题目给出的景点要点展开具体介绍，加入生动比喻丰富内容；
3. 结尾发出邀请呼应主题，控制词数在要求范围内，语言贴合导游的友好语气。
【答案】
One possible version:
Yunnan Province is full of beautiful places. It has some of the most beautiful places on our earth. Among them, I will share two with you.
Yulong Snow Mountain is 5,596 metres high. It looks like a silver Chinese dragon in the sun. The top of it is covered with snow almost all year round. There are special lakes too. They are fantastic.
Lugu Lake lies high up in the mountains. It is quiet and beautiful as well. It is like a pearl (珍珠) shining among the mountains. People like to go there and have a boat ride.
Welcome to Yunnan! You will be interested in its beautiful views.
【知识点】
导游词写作、景点英语表达、应用文写作
【点评】
范文结构清晰，开篇点题，中间紧扣题目要点介绍景点，运用比喻手法让描述更生动，语言自然流畅，符合导游的友好口吻，词数符合要求，能有效展现云南的魅力。
【难度系数】
0.6
1. 开篇引出云南美景众多，点明要介绍的两个景点；
2. 选取玉龙雪山和泸沽湖，结合题目给出的景点要点展开具体介绍，加入生动比喻丰富内容；
3. 结尾发出邀请呼应主题，控制词数在要求范围内，语言贴合导游的友好语气。
【答案】
One possible version:
Yunnan Province is full of beautiful places. It has some of the most beautiful places on our earth. Among them, I will share two with you.
Yulong Snow Mountain is 5,596 metres high. It looks like a silver Chinese dragon in the sun. The top of it is covered with snow almost all year round. There are special lakes too. They are fantastic.
Lugu Lake lies high up in the mountains. It is quiet and beautiful as well. It is like a pearl (珍珠) shining among the mountains. People like to go there and have a boat ride.
Welcome to Yunnan! You will be interested in its beautiful views.
【知识点】
导游词写作、景点英语表达、应用文写作
【点评】
范文结构清晰，开篇点题，中间紧扣题目要点介绍景点，运用比喻手法让描述更生动，语言自然流畅，符合导游的友好口吻，词数符合要求，能有效展现云南的魅力。
【难度系数】
0.6