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四、书面表达
根据下列图示,用英语写一篇关于爱丽丝吃完蛋糕后的故事。须包括图示的主要内容,词数80左右。

爱丽丝
 └─ 吃掉蛋糕
   ├─ 迅速变大 → 有九英尺多高
   ├─ 大哭,到处是泪水
   ├─ 看见一把扇子 → 捡起 → 身体变小 → 在泪水中游动
   └─ 遇到一只老鼠 → ……
One possible version:

After Alice ate the cake, something strange happened.

She started to grow bigger and bigger, until she was over nine feet tall. She began to cry and soon there were her tears all around. Suddenly, she saw a


fan in the tears. She picked it up quickly. Strangely, she got small again. She had to swim in her own tears. On her way, she saw a mouse swimming near her. Alice tried to chat with it, but this made the mouse angry and it swam away on its own.

What should Alice do next?




答案:One possible version:
After Alice ate the cake, something strange happened.
She started to grow bigger and bigger, until she was over nine feet tall. She began to cry and soon there were her tears all around. Suddenly, she saw a
fan in the tears. She picked it up quickly. Strangely, she got small again. She had to swim in her own tears. On her way, she saw a mouse swimming near her. Alice tried to chat with it, but this made the mouse angry and it swam away on its own.
What should Alice do next?
解析:
【解析】
这是一道英语书面表达题,需结合《爱丽丝梦游仙境》的情节图示撰写短文。要遵循图示逻辑,依次叙述爱丽丝吃蛋糕后身体变大、大哭、发现扇子后变小在泪水中游动、遇到老鼠的过程,使用一般过去时,保证叙事连贯,涵盖所有关键情节并控制词数。
【答案】
One possible version:
After Alice ate the cake, something strange happened.
She started to grow bigger and bigger, until she was over nine feet tall. She began to cry and soon there were her tears all around. Suddenly, she saw a fan in the tears. She picked it up quickly. Strangely, she got small again. She had to swim in her own tears. On her way, she saw a mouse swimming near her. Alice tried to chat with it, but this made the mouse angry and it swam away on its own.
What should Alice do next?
【知识点】
英语叙事写作、故事情节整合、一般过去时运用
【点评】
范文完整涵盖图示所有关键情节,叙事逻辑清晰,语言表达流畅自然,符合词数要求,生动还原了爱丽丝的奇遇场景,结尾问句还能引发读者联想。
【难度系数】
0.6
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