五、书面表达
你们班正举行“英语课堂三分钟演讲”的活动，假如你是李梅，请根据下面提示谈论你最喜欢的动物。 80 词左右。
My favourite animal
Looks
Food
Abilities
Qualities
Danger
...
你们班正举行“英语课堂三分钟演讲”的活动，假如你是李梅，请根据下面提示谈论你最喜欢的动物。 80 词左右。
My favourite animal
Looks
Food
Abilities
Qualities
Danger
...
答案：One possible version:
My favourite animal is the elephant. They are the largest land animals. They have two large tusks, a long nose and big ears. Elephants mostly eat grass, leaves and fruit. Elephants are kind and friendly. They live with their families and family members care for each other. Though they walk slowly, elephants can carry heavy things for people. They are also very clever and can remember things for many years.
Sadly, many elephants are in danger because of hunting and loss of living places. We must protect them to keep our world beautiful.
My favourite animal is the elephant. They are the largest land animals. They have two large tusks, a long nose and big ears. Elephants mostly eat grass, leaves and fruit. Elephants are kind and friendly. They live with their families and family members care for each other. Though they walk slowly, elephants can carry heavy things for people. They are also very clever and can remember things for many years.
Sadly, many elephants are in danger because of hunting and loss of living places. We must protect them to keep our world beautiful.
解析：
【解析】
这是一篇英语话题书面表达，要求以李梅的身份进行三分钟英语演讲，介绍自己最喜欢的动物。写作时需围绕提示的Looks（外貌）、Food（食物）、Abilities（能力）、Qualities（特质）、Danger（面临的危险）等要点展开，控制字数在80词左右，要保证内容完整、逻辑清晰、语言通顺自然，结尾可补充保护动物的倡议，让内容更充实。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite animal is the elephant. They are the largest land animals. They have two large tusks, a long nose and big ears. Elephants mostly eat grass, leaves and fruit. Elephants are kind and friendly. They live with their families and family members care for each other. Though they walk slowly, elephants can carry heavy things for people. They are also very clever and can remember things for many years.
Sadly, many elephants are in danger because of hunting and loss of living places. We must protect them to keep our world beautiful.
【知识点】
1. 动物类英语书面表达
2. 英语记叙文写作
3. 动物主题词汇运用
【点评】
本文结构清晰，完整覆盖了题目提示的所有写作要点，从大象的外貌、食物、能力、性格特质到面临的危险，内容充实连贯，语言表达流畅自然，结尾的保护倡议升华了主题，符合英语演讲的内容要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语话题书面表达，要求以李梅的身份进行三分钟英语演讲，介绍自己最喜欢的动物。写作时需围绕提示的Looks（外貌）、Food（食物）、Abilities（能力）、Qualities（特质）、Danger（面临的危险）等要点展开，控制字数在80词左右，要保证内容完整、逻辑清晰、语言通顺自然，结尾可补充保护动物的倡议，让内容更充实。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite animal is the elephant. They are the largest land animals. They have two large tusks, a long nose and big ears. Elephants mostly eat grass, leaves and fruit. Elephants are kind and friendly. They live with their families and family members care for each other. Though they walk slowly, elephants can carry heavy things for people. They are also very clever and can remember things for many years.
Sadly, many elephants are in danger because of hunting and loss of living places. We must protect them to keep our world beautiful.
【知识点】
1. 动物类英语书面表达
2. 英语记叙文写作
3. 动物主题词汇运用
【点评】
本文结构清晰，完整覆盖了题目提示的所有写作要点，从大象的外貌、食物、能力、性格特质到面临的危险，内容充实连贯，语言表达流畅自然，结尾的保护倡议升华了主题，符合英语演讲的内容要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6