八、书面表达
星光镇近年来发生了翻天覆地的变化,请你根据以下提示,以 “Changes in Starlight Town” 为题写一篇文章,介绍这座小城在住房、交通、文化教育等方面发生的变化,90 词左右。

星光镇近年来发生了翻天覆地的变化,请你根据以下提示,以 “Changes in Starlight Town” 为题写一篇文章,介绍这座小城在住房、交通、文化教育等方面发生的变化,90 词左右。
答案:One possible version:
Changes in Starlight Town
Great changes have taken place in Starlight Town over the years.
In the past, most people lived in old, broken houses. Now, tall buildings stand everywhere. The streets, once narrow and muddy, have become wide and clean. Transport has also improved greatly. People could only take buses or ride bikes to get around before, but now they can choose the underground or high - speed trains. To enrich cultural life, the government has built a new art centre and more libraries. At school, students can use computers and other modern tools to help them learn.
The citizens there are proud of these changes. Their lives are not only happier but also filled with more hope for the future.
Changes in Starlight Town
Great changes have taken place in Starlight Town over the years.
In the past, most people lived in old, broken houses. Now, tall buildings stand everywhere. The streets, once narrow and muddy, have become wide and clean. Transport has also improved greatly. People could only take buses or ride bikes to get around before, but now they can choose the underground or high - speed trains. To enrich cultural life, the government has built a new art centre and more libraries. At school, students can use computers and other modern tools to help them learn.
The citizens there are proud of these changes. Their lives are not only happier but also filled with more hope for the future.
解析:
【解析】
这是一篇介绍城镇变化的话题作文,需根据提示从住房、交通、文化教育三个维度,对比过去与现在的差异来写作。写作时先总起小镇发生巨大变化,再分述各领域的变化,最后总结居民的感受,注意一般过去时与一般现在时的切换运用,控制字数在要求范围内。
【答案】
One possible version:
Changes in Starlight Town
Great changes have taken place in Starlight Town over the years.
In the past, most people lived in old, broken houses. Now, tall buildings stand everywhere. The streets, once narrow and muddy, have become wide and clean. Transport has also improved greatly. People could only take buses or ride bikes to get around before, but now they can choose the underground or high - speed trains. To enrich cultural life, the government has built a new art centre and more libraries. At school, students can use computers and other modern tools to help them learn.
The citizens there are proud of these changes. Their lives are not only happier but also filled with more hope for the future.
【知识点】
过去现在时态运用、城镇变化类写作、话题作文结构搭建
【点评】
本文结构清晰,采用总-分-总的写作框架,全面覆盖了住房、交通、文化教育三个方面的变化,通过鲜明的今昔对比展现小镇的发展,语言流畅自然,符合词数要求,能很好地传递出居民对小镇变化的自豪之情。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇介绍城镇变化的话题作文,需根据提示从住房、交通、文化教育三个维度,对比过去与现在的差异来写作。写作时先总起小镇发生巨大变化,再分述各领域的变化,最后总结居民的感受,注意一般过去时与一般现在时的切换运用,控制字数在要求范围内。
【答案】
One possible version:
Changes in Starlight Town
Great changes have taken place in Starlight Town over the years.
In the past, most people lived in old, broken houses. Now, tall buildings stand everywhere. The streets, once narrow and muddy, have become wide and clean. Transport has also improved greatly. People could only take buses or ride bikes to get around before, but now they can choose the underground or high - speed trains. To enrich cultural life, the government has built a new art centre and more libraries. At school, students can use computers and other modern tools to help them learn.
The citizens there are proud of these changes. Their lives are not only happier but also filled with more hope for the future.
【知识点】
过去现在时态运用、城镇变化类写作、话题作文结构搭建
【点评】
本文结构清晰,采用总-分-总的写作框架,全面覆盖了住房、交通、文化教育三个方面的变化,通过鲜明的今昔对比展现小镇的发展,语言流畅自然,符合词数要求,能很好地传递出居民对小镇变化的自豪之情。
【难度系数】
0.6