五、书面表达
假如你是王宇,你的英国朋友Katie下个月要来中国旅行,请你根据以下提示给她写一封邮件,介绍受邀到中国家庭聚餐时应该遵循的礼仪。邮件须包括所有要点并适当发挥,90词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
| When meeting | At table | After the meal |
| --- | --- | --- |
| Arrive on time, or earlier; Bring a small gift. | Don't tap (轻敲) bowls with chopsticks; ... | ... |
Dear Katie,
I am happy that you will come to China soon. Now let me share some advice on manners for a family dinner in China with you.
I hope that you find my advice useful and have a good time in China.
Yours,
Wang Yu
假如你是王宇,你的英国朋友Katie下个月要来中国旅行,请你根据以下提示给她写一封邮件,介绍受邀到中国家庭聚餐时应该遵循的礼仪。邮件须包括所有要点并适当发挥,90词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
| When meeting | At table | After the meal |
| --- | --- | --- |
| Arrive on time, or earlier; Bring a small gift. | Don't tap (轻敲) bowls with chopsticks; ... | ... |
Dear Katie,
I am happy that you will come to China soon. Now let me share some advice on manners for a family dinner in China with you.
I hope that you find my advice useful and have a good time in China.
Yours,
Wang Yu
答案:One possible version:
Dear Katie,
I am happy that you will come to China soon. Now let me share some advice on manners for a family dinner in China with you.
First, you are supposed to arrive on time, or even a few minutes earlier. It is impolite to be late in China. It is also thoughtful to bring a small gift, such as flowers and fruit, to show your respect. Second, when you are at the table, don't tap bowls with chopsticks. It is considered noisy and impolite. Instead, it is polite to praise how tasty the food is. At last, before leaving, be sure to thank the family for their treat. You'd better not stay too long after the meal, for they might have other plans afterwards.
I hope that you find my advice useful and have a good time in China.
Yours,
Wang Yu
Dear Katie,
I am happy that you will come to China soon. Now let me share some advice on manners for a family dinner in China with you.
First, you are supposed to arrive on time, or even a few minutes earlier. It is impolite to be late in China. It is also thoughtful to bring a small gift, such as flowers and fruit, to show your respect. Second, when you are at the table, don't tap bowls with chopsticks. It is considered noisy and impolite. Instead, it is polite to praise how tasty the food is. At last, before leaving, be sure to thank the family for their treat. You'd better not stay too long after the meal, for they might have other plans afterwards.
I hope that you find my advice useful and have a good time in China.
Yours,
Wang Yu
解析:
【解析】
首先,邮件需紧扣中国家庭聚餐礼仪的三个时间节点展开:见面时要准时或提前到达,携带小礼物;用餐时不要用筷子敲碗,可适当夸赞食物美味;用餐后要感谢主人款待,不宜久留。写作时注意用First, Second, At last等衔接词串联内容,语言简洁地道,符合邮件格式和词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Katie,
I am happy that you will come to China soon. Now let me share some advice on manners for a family dinner in China with you.
First, you are supposed to arrive on time, or even a few minutes earlier. It is impolite to be late in China. It is also thoughtful to bring a small gift, such as flowers and fruit, to show your respect. Second, when you are at the table, don't tap bowls with chopsticks. It is considered noisy and impolite. Instead, it is polite to praise how tasty the food is. At last, before leaving, be sure to thank the family for their treat. You'd better not stay too long after the meal, for they might have other plans afterwards.
I hope that you find my advice useful and have a good time in China.
Yours,
Wang Yu
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、跨文化礼仪表达、情景交际用语
【点评】
本文结构清晰,用衔接词串联三个礼仪场景,完整覆盖所有要点并适当发挥,语言简洁地道,符合邮件写作规范和词数要求,能有效帮助外国朋友了解中国家庭聚餐礼仪。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先,邮件需紧扣中国家庭聚餐礼仪的三个时间节点展开:见面时要准时或提前到达,携带小礼物;用餐时不要用筷子敲碗,可适当夸赞食物美味;用餐后要感谢主人款待,不宜久留。写作时注意用First, Second, At last等衔接词串联内容,语言简洁地道,符合邮件格式和词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Katie,
I am happy that you will come to China soon. Now let me share some advice on manners for a family dinner in China with you.
First, you are supposed to arrive on time, or even a few minutes earlier. It is impolite to be late in China. It is also thoughtful to bring a small gift, such as flowers and fruit, to show your respect. Second, when you are at the table, don't tap bowls with chopsticks. It is considered noisy and impolite. Instead, it is polite to praise how tasty the food is. At last, before leaving, be sure to thank the family for their treat. You'd better not stay too long after the meal, for they might have other plans afterwards.
I hope that you find my advice useful and have a good time in China.
Yours,
Wang Yu
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、跨文化礼仪表达、情景交际用语
【点评】
本文结构清晰,用衔接词串联三个礼仪场景,完整覆盖所有要点并适当发挥,语言简洁地道,符合邮件写作规范和词数要求,能有效帮助外国朋友了解中国家庭聚餐礼仪。
【难度系数】
0.6