五、书面表达
宜兴紫砂壶是中国特有的手工制造陶土工艺品。假如你的外国笔友史蒂文非常喜欢宜兴紫砂壶，想有更进一步的了解。请根据以下信息，写一封80词左右的邮件，向他简单介绍。
Dear Steven,
I am very glad to hear that you are interested in the Yixing Zisha Teapot. Let me tell you something about it.
Yours,
Li Hua
Exercise 7 of Unit 4 of 7B Assessment & Further study
宜兴紫砂壶是中国特有的手工制造陶土工艺品。假如你的外国笔友史蒂文非常喜欢宜兴紫砂壶，想有更进一步的了解。请根据以下信息，写一封80词左右的邮件，向他简单介绍。
Dear Steven,
I am very glad to hear that you are interested in the Yixing Zisha Teapot. Let me tell you something about it.
The Yixing Zisha Teapot is a special kind of teapot made in Yixing, China. It has a history of more than 600 years. It is very popular with Chinese artists, writers and tea-lovers.
The Yixing Zisha Teapot is made from zisha clay. This material makes the tea taste good. The teapot is made by hand. A good teapot usually takes a long time to make. Craftspeople are creative enough to make these teapots in different shapes and sizes.
The Yixing Zisha Teapot has strong local colour. It is a symbol of the spirit of Chinese craftspeople. As a fine example of traditional Chinese folk art, the Yixing Zisha Teapot is an important part of Chinese culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
Exercise 7 of Unit 4 of 7B Assessment & Further study
答案：Dear Steven,
I am very glad to hear that you are interested in the Yixing Zisha Teapot. Let me tell you something about it.
The Yixing Zisha Teapot is a special kind of teapot made in Yixing, China. It has a history of more than 600 years. It is very popular with Chinese artists, writers and tea-lovers.
The Yixing Zisha Teapot is made from zisha clay. This material makes the tea taste good. The teapot is made by hand. A good teapot usually takes a long time to make. Craftspeople are creative enough to make these teapots in different shapes and sizes.
The Yixing Zisha Teapot has strong local colour. It is a symbol of the spirit of Chinese craftspeople. As a fine example of traditional Chinese folk art, the Yixing Zisha Teapot is an important part of Chinese culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
I am very glad to hear that you are interested in the Yixing Zisha Teapot. Let me tell you something about it.
The Yixing Zisha Teapot is a special kind of teapot made in Yixing, China. It has a history of more than 600 years. It is very popular with Chinese artists, writers and tea-lovers.
The Yixing Zisha Teapot is made from zisha clay. This material makes the tea taste good. The teapot is made by hand. A good teapot usually takes a long time to make. Craftspeople are creative enough to make these teapots in different shapes and sizes.
The Yixing Zisha Teapot has strong local colour. It is a symbol of the spirit of Chinese craftspeople. As a fine example of traditional Chinese folk art, the Yixing Zisha Teapot is an important part of Chinese culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先明确写作目标是给外国笔友写一封介绍宜兴紫砂壶的邮件，题干给出的思维导图已经把写作内容划分为三个清晰的模块，我们可以顺着模块依次完成内容填充：1. 先写基础信息部分，把提示的“产自宜兴、拥有600多年历史”的核心信息写出，补充它在国内的受众让内容更饱满；2. 再写产品特色部分，围绕提示的“紫砂泥为原料、全手工制作、造型各异”几个要点展开，补充材质优势、手工制作的特点，逻辑更通顺；3. 最后写文化价值部分，点明它承载的中国匠人精神、属于传统民间艺术的属性，完成内容输出。最后通读全文调整语句衔接，保证语气符合给笔友写信的友好风格，规避语法错误即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 填充基础信息段：承接开篇引入，点明宜兴紫砂壶产自中国宜兴，拥有超过600年的历史，深受国内艺术家、文人以及茶饮爱好者的喜爱，完成第一部分要点输出。
2. 填充特色介绍段：说明紫砂壶以紫砂泥为原料，该材质能让冲泡的茶口感更佳；所有紫砂壶均为手工制作，一把优质壶往往需要耗费大量时间，匠人可以设计出不同造型、不同尺寸的作品，覆盖全部特色类提示要点。
3. 填充文化价值段：点明紫砂壶带有浓郁的地方特色，是中国匠人精神的象征，作为中国传统民间工艺的优秀代表，是中国文化的重要组成部分，完成全部内容写作。
最终整合得到完整邮件内容，语句流畅自然，符合写作要求。
【答案】
Dear Steven,
I am very glad to hear that you are interested in the Yixing Zisha Teapot. Let me tell you something about it.
The Yixing Zisha Teapot is a special kind of teapot made in Yixing, China. It has a history of more than 600 years. It is very popular with Chinese artists, writers and tea-lovers.
The Yixing Zisha Teapot is made from zisha clay. This material makes the tea taste good. The teapot is made by hand. A good teapot usually takes a long time to make. Craftspeople are creative enough to make these teapots in different shapes and sizes.
The Yixing Zisha Teapot has strong local colour. It is a symbol of the spirit of Chinese craftspeople. As a fine example of traditional Chinese folk art, the Yixing Zisha Teapot is an important part of Chinese culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作，传统文化介绍，要点类书面表达
【点评】
本题属于七年级的提示类应用文写作，所有核心写作要点都通过思维导图给出，降低了写作的构思难度，既考察学生的英语语句组织能力，也引导学生了解中国传统非遗文化。写作时按照“基础信息-产品特色-文化价值”的逻辑顺序展开，不遗漏提示要点，保证语句通顺就可以拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道书面表达题，首先明确写作目标是给外国笔友写一封介绍宜兴紫砂壶的邮件，题干给出的思维导图已经把写作内容划分为三个清晰的模块，我们可以顺着模块依次完成内容填充：1. 先写基础信息部分，把提示的“产自宜兴、拥有600多年历史”的核心信息写出，补充它在国内的受众让内容更饱满；2. 再写产品特色部分，围绕提示的“紫砂泥为原料、全手工制作、造型各异”几个要点展开，补充材质优势、手工制作的特点，逻辑更通顺；3. 最后写文化价值部分，点明它承载的中国匠人精神、属于传统民间艺术的属性，完成内容输出。最后通读全文调整语句衔接，保证语气符合给笔友写信的友好风格，规避语法错误即可。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 填充基础信息段：承接开篇引入，点明宜兴紫砂壶产自中国宜兴，拥有超过600年的历史，深受国内艺术家、文人以及茶饮爱好者的喜爱，完成第一部分要点输出。
2. 填充特色介绍段：说明紫砂壶以紫砂泥为原料，该材质能让冲泡的茶口感更佳；所有紫砂壶均为手工制作，一把优质壶往往需要耗费大量时间，匠人可以设计出不同造型、不同尺寸的作品，覆盖全部特色类提示要点。
3. 填充文化价值段：点明紫砂壶带有浓郁的地方特色，是中国匠人精神的象征，作为中国传统民间工艺的优秀代表，是中国文化的重要组成部分，完成全部内容写作。
最终整合得到完整邮件内容，语句流畅自然，符合写作要求。
【答案】
Dear Steven,
I am very glad to hear that you are interested in the Yixing Zisha Teapot. Let me tell you something about it.
The Yixing Zisha Teapot is a special kind of teapot made in Yixing, China. It has a history of more than 600 years. It is very popular with Chinese artists, writers and tea-lovers.
The Yixing Zisha Teapot is made from zisha clay. This material makes the tea taste good. The teapot is made by hand. A good teapot usually takes a long time to make. Craftspeople are creative enough to make these teapots in different shapes and sizes.
The Yixing Zisha Teapot has strong local colour. It is a symbol of the spirit of Chinese craftspeople. As a fine example of traditional Chinese folk art, the Yixing Zisha Teapot is an important part of Chinese culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作，传统文化介绍，要点类书面表达
【点评】
本题属于七年级的提示类应用文写作，所有核心写作要点都通过思维导图给出，降低了写作的构思难度，既考察学生的英语语句组织能力，也引导学生了解中国传统非遗文化。写作时按照“基础信息-产品特色-文化价值”的逻辑顺序展开，不遗漏提示要点，保证语句通顺就可以拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6