五、书面表达
假如你是李明，为唤起大家对海洋塑料污染的关注，创作了一幅主题画作。请根据提示，写一篇90词左右的发言稿，向同学们介绍画作内容、阐述海洋生物的生存困境，并提出保护海洋的具体措施。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示：What is the painting about?
What problems are sea animals facing in the painting?
What can be done to help with the problem?
Dear classmates,
I'm Li Ming. Today, I want to introduce my painting to all of you. My painting shows ___
Li Ming
假如你是李明，为唤起大家对海洋塑料污染的关注，创作了一幅主题画作。请根据提示，写一篇90词左右的发言稿，向同学们介绍画作内容、阐述海洋生物的生存困境，并提出保护海洋的具体措施。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示：What is the painting about?
What problems are sea animals facing in the painting?
What can be done to help with the problem?
Dear classmates,
I'm Li Ming. Today, I want to introduce my painting to all of you. My painting shows ___
Li Ming
答案：Dear classmates,
I'm Li Ming. Today, I want to introduce my painting to all of you. My painting shows
a big whale swimming in the sea, but the sea is full of plastic waste like bottles and bags.
The poor whale looks so sad and helpless.
Many sea animals are facing the terrible plastic pollution in the ocean. Their homes are
destroyed by human rubbish. They have difficulty finding safe food and living spaces.
We must take action to help them right away. First, strict rules should be made to
control plastic pollution. What's more, as students, we can do our part by using cloth bags
instead of single-use plastic ones. Besides, plastic rubbish should be separated into different
groups. All these useful methods can help reduce plastic waste effectively.
Let's work together to protect the ocean. A clean ocean is a happy home for all sea
animals!
Li Ming
I'm Li Ming. Today, I want to introduce my painting to all of you. My painting shows
a big whale swimming in the sea, but the sea is full of plastic waste like bottles and bags.
The poor whale looks so sad and helpless.
Many sea animals are facing the terrible plastic pollution in the ocean. Their homes are
destroyed by human rubbish. They have difficulty finding safe food and living spaces.
We must take action to help them right away. First, strict rules should be made to
control plastic pollution. What's more, as students, we can do our part by using cloth bags
instead of single-use plastic ones. Besides, plastic rubbish should be separated into different
groups. All these useful methods can help reduce plastic waste effectively.
Let's work together to protect the ocean. A clean ocean is a happy home for all sea
animals!
Li Ming
解析：
【分析】
首先，我们需要明确发言稿的写作要求：先介绍画作内容，再阐述海洋生物的生存困境，最后提出具体保护措施。第一步，观察图片，描述核心元素：悲伤的鲸鱼在满是塑料垃圾的海洋里；第二步，从图片延伸，分析海洋生物面临的问题，比如栖息地被破坏、食物安全受威胁等；第三步，结合学生身份和实际情况，提出切实可行的措施，比如制定法规、使用布袋、垃圾分类等；最后注意语言连贯，控制词数，符合发言稿正式且有感染力的语气。
【解析】
1. 描述画作：紧扣图片内容，写出鲸鱼在充满塑料瓶、塑料袋等垃圾的海洋里，表情悲伤无助，让听众直观了解画作主题。
2. 阐述困境：从画作延伸到普遍的海洋生物生存问题，说明人类垃圾破坏了它们的家园，导致它们难以找到安全食物和生存空间，增强说服力。
3. 提出措施：分点给出具体可行的办法，从宏观的制定规则到学生可践行的使用布袋、垃圾分类，层次清晰，符合实际。
4. 收尾呼吁：呼应主题，号召大家共同保护海洋，强化情感共鸣。
【答案】
Dear classmates,
I'm Li Ming. Today, I want to introduce my painting to all of you. My painting shows
a big whale swimming in the sea, but the sea is full of plastic waste like bottles and bags.
The poor whale looks so sad and helpless.
Many sea animals are facing the terrible plastic pollution in the ocean. Their homes are
destroyed by human rubbish. They have difficulty finding safe food and living spaces.
We must take action to help them right away. First, strict rules should be made to
control plastic pollution. What's more, as students, we can do our part by using cloth bags
instead of single-use plastic ones. Besides, plastic rubbish should be separated into different
groups. All these useful methods can help reduce plastic waste effectively.
Let's work together to protect the ocean. A clean ocean is a happy home for all sea
animals!
Li Ming
【知识点】
环保主题写作、发言稿写作、海洋保护表达
【点评】
这篇发言稿紧扣题目要求，内容完整，逻辑清晰。先直观描述画作引入主题，再深入阐述海洋生物的生存困境，最后提出具体可操作的保护措施，语言流畅自然，富有感染力，符合发言稿的文体要求，能有效唤起大家对海洋塑料污染的关注。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们需要明确发言稿的写作要求：先介绍画作内容，再阐述海洋生物的生存困境，最后提出具体保护措施。第一步，观察图片，描述核心元素：悲伤的鲸鱼在满是塑料垃圾的海洋里；第二步，从图片延伸，分析海洋生物面临的问题，比如栖息地被破坏、食物安全受威胁等；第三步，结合学生身份和实际情况，提出切实可行的措施，比如制定法规、使用布袋、垃圾分类等；最后注意语言连贯，控制词数，符合发言稿正式且有感染力的语气。
【解析】
1. 描述画作：紧扣图片内容，写出鲸鱼在充满塑料瓶、塑料袋等垃圾的海洋里，表情悲伤无助，让听众直观了解画作主题。
2. 阐述困境：从画作延伸到普遍的海洋生物生存问题，说明人类垃圾破坏了它们的家园，导致它们难以找到安全食物和生存空间，增强说服力。
3. 提出措施：分点给出具体可行的办法，从宏观的制定规则到学生可践行的使用布袋、垃圾分类，层次清晰，符合实际。
4. 收尾呼吁：呼应主题，号召大家共同保护海洋，强化情感共鸣。
【答案】
Dear classmates,
I'm Li Ming. Today, I want to introduce my painting to all of you. My painting shows
a big whale swimming in the sea, but the sea is full of plastic waste like bottles and bags.
The poor whale looks so sad and helpless.
Many sea animals are facing the terrible plastic pollution in the ocean. Their homes are
destroyed by human rubbish. They have difficulty finding safe food and living spaces.
We must take action to help them right away. First, strict rules should be made to
control plastic pollution. What's more, as students, we can do our part by using cloth bags
instead of single-use plastic ones. Besides, plastic rubbish should be separated into different
groups. All these useful methods can help reduce plastic waste effectively.
Let's work together to protect the ocean. A clean ocean is a happy home for all sea
animals!
Li Ming
【知识点】
环保主题写作、发言稿写作、海洋保护表达
【点评】
这篇发言稿紧扣题目要求，内容完整，逻辑清晰。先直观描述画作引入主题，再深入阐述海洋生物的生存困境，最后提出具体可操作的保护措施，语言流畅自然，富有感染力，符合发言稿的文体要求，能有效唤起大家对海洋塑料污染的关注。
【难度系数】
0.6