五、书面表达
随着世界的持续发展与进步，你的家乡在这三十年间也发生了日新月异的变迁。请根据表格所提供的信息，写一篇约90词的英语短文，向大家介绍家乡这些年的变化，并分享你从中获得的感悟。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the last 30 years.
Exercise 7 of Unit 1 of 8B Assessment & Further study
随着世界的持续发展与进步，你的家乡在这三十年间也发生了日新月异的变迁。请根据表格所提供的信息，写一篇约90词的英语短文，向大家介绍家乡这些年的变化，并分享你从中获得的感悟。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the last 30 years.
Exercise 7 of Unit 1 of 8B Assessment & Further study
答案：Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the last 30 years.
In the past, people lived in small, old houses. The roads were muddy and narrow.
Back then, people usually got around by bicycle or on foot. If they needed to travel far,
they had to take a long trip by coach. To make a living, most young people had to go to big
cities for more job chances.
Now there have been many changes. The citizens in my hometown have moved into
modern new houses or flats. The roads are clean and wide. It's convenient for us to get
around by high-speed train. Today, many young people return to work in our hometown
after finishing college.
I feel proud of these changes and hopeful about the future of our hometown.
In the past, people lived in small, old houses. The roads were muddy and narrow.
Back then, people usually got around by bicycle or on foot. If they needed to travel far,
they had to take a long trip by coach. To make a living, most young people had to go to big
cities for more job chances.
Now there have been many changes. The citizens in my hometown have moved into
modern new houses or flats. The roads are clean and wide. It's convenient for us to get
around by high-speed train. Today, many young people return to work in our hometown
after finishing college.
I feel proud of these changes and hopeful about the future of our hometown.
解析：
【分析】
首先，我们需要明确题目要求：介绍家乡30年的变迁，需覆盖表格给出的住房、道路、交通变化，还要自拟相关变化点，最后分享个人感悟，词数约90词，开头已给出。
解题步骤：1. 描述过去的情况：对应表格里破旧的房屋、泥泞狭窄的道路、自行车出行，再自拟过去年轻人外出务工的情况，注意使用一般过去时。2. 描述现在的变化：对应表格里的高楼、宽阔干净的道路、高铁出行，自拟年轻人返乡就业的情况，结合现在完成时和一般现在时来表达。3. 最后抒发对家乡变化的自豪和对未来的期待，完成短文。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，先用一般过去时描述过去的生活场景：住房是small, old houses，道路是muddy and narrow，出行方式为by bicycle or on foot，长途出行依赖coach，补充自拟的“年轻人外出务工”内容（go to big cities for job chances）。
2. 用Now转折，以现在完成时和一般现在时描述当下的变化：人们住进modern new houses or flats，道路变为clean and wide，出行可选择high-speed train，补充自拟的“年轻人返乡工作”内容（return to work after college）。
3. 最后用“I feel proud of... and hopeful about...”收尾，表达对家乡的情感，呼应主题。
短文逻辑清晰，时态运用准确，内容覆盖表格信息且补充的自拟内容合理，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the last 30 years.
In the past, people lived in small, old houses. The roads were muddy and narrow.
Back then, people usually got around by bicycle or on foot. If they needed to travel far,
they had to take a long trip by coach. To make a living, most young people had to go to big
cities for more job chances.
Now there have been many changes. The citizens in my hometown have moved into
modern new houses or flats. The roads are clean and wide. It's convenient for us to get
around by high-speed train. Today, many young people return to work in our hometown
after finishing college.
I feel proud of these changes and hopeful about the future of our hometown.
【知识点】
1. 时态（过去时与现在完成时）
2. 家乡变迁类书面表达
3. 英语短文写作
【点评】
本题考查学生对不同时态的运用能力，以及结合图片信息和生活实际组织语言、完成短文的能力。通过描述家乡的变迁，引导学生关注生活变化，培养观察力与语言表达能力，内容贴近生活，易于学生结合实际发挥。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们需要明确题目要求：介绍家乡30年的变迁，需覆盖表格给出的住房、道路、交通变化，还要自拟相关变化点，最后分享个人感悟，词数约90词，开头已给出。
解题步骤：1. 描述过去的情况：对应表格里破旧的房屋、泥泞狭窄的道路、自行车出行，再自拟过去年轻人外出务工的情况，注意使用一般过去时。2. 描述现在的变化：对应表格里的高楼、宽阔干净的道路、高铁出行，自拟年轻人返乡就业的情况，结合现在完成时和一般现在时来表达。3. 最后抒发对家乡变化的自豪和对未来的期待，完成短文。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，先用一般过去时描述过去的生活场景：住房是small, old houses，道路是muddy and narrow，出行方式为by bicycle or on foot，长途出行依赖coach，补充自拟的“年轻人外出务工”内容（go to big cities for job chances）。
2. 用Now转折，以现在完成时和一般现在时描述当下的变化：人们住进modern new houses or flats，道路变为clean and wide，出行可选择high-speed train，补充自拟的“年轻人返乡工作”内容（return to work after college）。
3. 最后用“I feel proud of... and hopeful about...”收尾，表达对家乡的情感，呼应主题。
短文逻辑清晰，时态运用准确，内容覆盖表格信息且补充的自拟内容合理，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the last 30 years.
In the past, people lived in small, old houses. The roads were muddy and narrow.
Back then, people usually got around by bicycle or on foot. If they needed to travel far,
they had to take a long trip by coach. To make a living, most young people had to go to big
cities for more job chances.
Now there have been many changes. The citizens in my hometown have moved into
modern new houses or flats. The roads are clean and wide. It's convenient for us to get
around by high-speed train. Today, many young people return to work in our hometown
after finishing college.
I feel proud of these changes and hopeful about the future of our hometown.
【知识点】
1. 时态（过去时与现在完成时）
2. 家乡变迁类书面表达
3. 英语短文写作
【点评】
本题考查学生对不同时态的运用能力，以及结合图片信息和生活实际组织语言、完成短文的能力。通过描述家乡的变迁，引导学生关注生活变化，培养观察力与语言表达能力，内容贴近生活，易于学生结合实际发挥。
【难度系数】
0.6