五、书面表达
假设你是李明,你的英国笔友杰克对中国古代历史十分感兴趣。他本想去西安参观兵马俑,却因事务繁忙,无法亲自前往。请你根据下方流程图,写一封90词左右的邮件向他推荐兵马俑的线上游览项目。开头和结尾已为你给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,
Since you’re too busy to visit the Emperor Qin Shihuang’s Terracotta Army Museum in person, I’d like to ___
I believe you'll enjoy this special way to explore the Emperor Qin Shihuang's Terracotta Army Museum. Try it soon and tell me what you think!
Yours, Li Ming
Exercise 7 of Unit 3 of 8B Assessment & Further study
假设你是李明,你的英国笔友杰克对中国古代历史十分感兴趣。他本想去西安参观兵马俑,却因事务繁忙,无法亲自前往。请你根据下方流程图,写一封90词左右的邮件向他推荐兵马俑的线上游览项目。开头和结尾已为你给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
Since you’re too busy to visit the Emperor Qin Shihuang’s Terracotta Army Museum in person, I’d like to ___
I believe you'll enjoy this special way to explore the Emperor Qin Shihuang's Terracotta Army Museum. Try it soon and tell me what you think!
Yours, Li Ming
Exercise 7 of Unit 3 of 8B Assessment & Further study
答案:Dear Jack,
Since you're too busy to visit the Emperor Qin Shihuang's Terracotta Army Museum
in person, I'd like to recommend a digital tour of it to you.
The Terracotta Army Museum rests in Xi'an, the central part of Shaanxi Province. It
is a must-see for Chinese history lovers. There are thousands of clay soldiers from the Qin
Dynasty. It's amazing because you cannot imagine how people built them in ancient times.
The digital tour provides lots of information about these clay soldiers, including high-
quality three-D images and video tours. You can also zoom in on the artworks to see every
detail. What's more, there are interesting introductions to these clay soldiers. It feels like
you are there in person. The digital tour is convenient, saves you plenty of time, and offers
you an amazing experience.
I believe you'll enjoy this special way to explore the Emperor Qin Shihuang's
Terracotta Army Museum. Try it soon and tell me what you think!
Yours,
Li Ming
Since you're too busy to visit the Emperor Qin Shihuang's Terracotta Army Museum
in person, I'd like to recommend a digital tour of it to you.
The Terracotta Army Museum rests in Xi'an, the central part of Shaanxi Province. It
is a must-see for Chinese history lovers. There are thousands of clay soldiers from the Qin
Dynasty. It's amazing because you cannot imagine how people built them in ancient times.
The digital tour provides lots of information about these clay soldiers, including high-
quality three-D images and video tours. You can also zoom in on the artworks to see every
detail. What's more, there are interesting introductions to these clay soldiers. It feels like
you are there in person. The digital tour is convenient, saves you plenty of time, and offers
you an amazing experience.
I believe you'll enjoy this special way to explore the Emperor Qin Shihuang's
Terracotta Army Museum. Try it soon and tell me what you think!
Yours,
Li Ming
解析:
【分析】
首先,我们要明确这是一封给笔友的推荐邮件,需严格按照流程图的四个要点完成写作:
1. 第一步:承接开头,直接点明要推荐“数字兵马俑”线上游览项目,回应杰克无法亲自前往的情况。
2. 第二步:介绍兵马俑概况,要涵盖位置(西安,陕西中部)和特色(秦代陶俑数量众多,古代建造工艺令人惊叹,是历史爱好者必看景点),让杰克对兵马俑有基础了解。
3. 第三步:描述线上游览的功能和优势,功能可写3D图像、视频游览、放大看细节、趣味讲解;优势突出便捷、节省时间、身临其境的体验。
4. 第四步:呼应结尾的邀请,保持邮件友好的语气。
整体要控制词数在要求范围内,语言要符合邮件的非正式友好风格,贴合笔友间的交流。
【解析】
1. 开头承接:根据题目给出的开头,自然引出推荐的线上项目,用“I'd like to recommend a digital tour of it to you.”直接点明推荐内容。
2. 兵马俑概况:用“The Terracotta Army Museum rests in Xi'an, the central part of Shaanxi Province.”说明位置,接着介绍特色“It is a must-see for Chinese history lovers. There are thousands of clay soldiers from the Qin Dynasty. It's amazing because you cannot imagine how people built them in ancient times.”,让内容充实。
3. 线上游览部分:详细说明功能“The digital tour provides lots of information about these clay soldiers, including high-quality three-D images and video tours. You can also zoom in on the artworks to see every detail. What's more, there are interesting introductions to these clay soldiers.”,再点明优势“It feels like you are there in person. The digital tour is convenient, saves you plenty of time, and offers you an amazing experience.”,覆盖功能和优势两个要点。
4. 结尾呼应题目给出的内容,保持语气自然友好。
【答案】
Dear Jack,
Since you're too busy to visit the Emperor Qin Shihuang's Terracotta Army Museum
in person, I'd like to recommend a digital tour of it to you.
The Terracotta Army Museum rests in Xi'an, the central part of Shaanxi Province. It
is a must-see for Chinese history lovers. There are thousands of clay soldiers from the Qin
Dynasty. It's amazing because you cannot imagine how people built them in ancient times.
The digital tour provides lots of information about these clay soldiers, including high-
quality three-D images and video tours. You can also zoom in on the artworks to see every
detail. What's more, there are interesting introductions to these clay soldiers. It feels like
you are there in person. The digital tour is convenient, saves you plenty of time, and offers
you an amazing experience.
I believe you'll enjoy this special way to explore the Emperor Qin Shihuang's
Terracotta Army Museum. Try it soon and tell me what you think!
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
邮件写作、介绍类书面表达、历史文化主题写作
【点评】
这篇邮件严格按照题目要求和流程图要点完成,内容完整,逻辑清晰,语言流畅自然,符合笔友间交流的友好语气。既准确介绍了兵马俑的相关信息,又详细说明了线上游览的优势,很好地完成了推荐任务,词数也符合要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先,我们要明确这是一封给笔友的推荐邮件,需严格按照流程图的四个要点完成写作:
1. 第一步:承接开头,直接点明要推荐“数字兵马俑”线上游览项目,回应杰克无法亲自前往的情况。
2. 第二步:介绍兵马俑概况,要涵盖位置(西安,陕西中部)和特色(秦代陶俑数量众多,古代建造工艺令人惊叹,是历史爱好者必看景点),让杰克对兵马俑有基础了解。
3. 第三步:描述线上游览的功能和优势,功能可写3D图像、视频游览、放大看细节、趣味讲解;优势突出便捷、节省时间、身临其境的体验。
4. 第四步:呼应结尾的邀请,保持邮件友好的语气。
整体要控制词数在要求范围内,语言要符合邮件的非正式友好风格,贴合笔友间的交流。
【解析】
1. 开头承接:根据题目给出的开头,自然引出推荐的线上项目,用“I'd like to recommend a digital tour of it to you.”直接点明推荐内容。
2. 兵马俑概况:用“The Terracotta Army Museum rests in Xi'an, the central part of Shaanxi Province.”说明位置,接着介绍特色“It is a must-see for Chinese history lovers. There are thousands of clay soldiers from the Qin Dynasty. It's amazing because you cannot imagine how people built them in ancient times.”,让内容充实。
3. 线上游览部分:详细说明功能“The digital tour provides lots of information about these clay soldiers, including high-quality three-D images and video tours. You can also zoom in on the artworks to see every detail. What's more, there are interesting introductions to these clay soldiers.”,再点明优势“It feels like you are there in person. The digital tour is convenient, saves you plenty of time, and offers you an amazing experience.”,覆盖功能和优势两个要点。
4. 结尾呼应题目给出的内容,保持语气自然友好。
【答案】
Dear Jack,
Since you're too busy to visit the Emperor Qin Shihuang's Terracotta Army Museum
in person, I'd like to recommend a digital tour of it to you.
The Terracotta Army Museum rests in Xi'an, the central part of Shaanxi Province. It
is a must-see for Chinese history lovers. There are thousands of clay soldiers from the Qin
Dynasty. It's amazing because you cannot imagine how people built them in ancient times.
The digital tour provides lots of information about these clay soldiers, including high-
quality three-D images and video tours. You can also zoom in on the artworks to see every
detail. What's more, there are interesting introductions to these clay soldiers. It feels like
you are there in person. The digital tour is convenient, saves you plenty of time, and offers
you an amazing experience.
I believe you'll enjoy this special way to explore the Emperor Qin Shihuang's
Terracotta Army Museum. Try it soon and tell me what you think!
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
邮件写作、介绍类书面表达、历史文化主题写作
【点评】
这篇邮件严格按照题目要求和流程图要点完成,内容完整,逻辑清晰,语言流畅自然,符合笔友间交流的友好语气。既准确介绍了兵马俑的相关信息,又详细说明了线上游览的优势,很好地完成了推荐任务,词数也符合要求。
【难度系数】
0.6