七、书面表达(共1小题;满分25分)(2025·江苏扬州仪征期末)
71. 社会在不断地发展,成绩不再是衡量一个好学生的唯一标准。你校英语社团开展了"We act, we improve"的主题讨论活动。请你写一篇短文,谈谈除了学习课本知识之外,我们还应该做些什么。提示如下:
【要求】1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥。
3. 词数90左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
We act, we improve
With the development of society, to learn well is not the only thing we students should do. To be good middle school students, I think we have a lot of things to do.
71. 社会在不断地发展,成绩不再是衡量一个好学生的唯一标准。你校英语社团开展了"We act, we improve"的主题讨论活动。请你写一篇短文,谈谈除了学习课本知识之外,我们还应该做些什么。提示如下:
【要求】1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥。
3. 词数90左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
We act, we improve
With the development of society, to learn well is not the only thing we students should do. To be good middle school students, I think we have a lot of things to do.
答案：71. One possible version:
We act, we improve
With the development of society, to learn well is not the only thing we students should do. To be good middle school students, I think we have a lot of things to do.
First, manners make the man. We should learn to behave politely. When we queue, we shouldn't push in before others. It's impolite to make much noise while eating or drinking. Second, we should care about the people in need. It's wonderful for us to work as volunteers. Moreover, it's kind of us to donate money to some charities. Third, it's our duty to understand the importance of protecting the environment. We must not drop litter carelessly. It's wise of us to go to school on foot or by bicycle.
The more we act, the more we will improve ourselves.
We act, we improve
With the development of society, to learn well is not the only thing we students should do. To be good middle school students, I think we have a lot of things to do.
First, manners make the man. We should learn to behave politely. When we queue, we shouldn't push in before others. It's impolite to make much noise while eating or drinking. Second, we should care about the people in need. It's wonderful for us to work as volunteers. Moreover, it's kind of us to donate money to some charities. Third, it's our duty to understand the importance of protecting the environment. We must not drop litter carelessly. It's wise of us to go to school on foot or by bicycle.
The more we act, the more we will improve ourselves.
解析：
【解析】
这是主题为"We act, we improve"的英语提示类书面表达，写作步骤如下：
1. 明确写作框架：开篇已给出，正文分三个核心模块展开，最后用总结句收尾。
2. 覆盖所有提示要点：
① 礼貌品行模块：列举2个行为示例，排队不插队、吃喝时不大声喧哗，说明要举止文明。
② 关爱他人模块：列举2个行为示例，参与志愿工作、为慈善机构捐款，说明要帮扶有需要的人。
③ 环保行动模块：列举2个行为示例，不随意乱扔垃圾、步行或骑自行车上学，说明要践行环保。
3. 控制词数在90左右，保证语法正确、上下文连贯，不出现真实个人信息，最后用"The more we act, the more we will improve ourselves."收尾升华主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
First, manners make the man. We should learn to behave politely. When we queue, we shouldn't push in before others. It's impolite to make much noise while eating or drinking. Second, we should care about the people in need. It's wonderful for us to work as volunteers. Moreover, it's kind of us to donate money to some charities. Third, it's our duty to understand the importance of protecting the environment. We must not drop litter carelessly. It's wise of us to go to school on foot or by bicycle.
The more we act, the more we will improve ourselves.
【知识点】
英语提示类书面表达；英语语句连贯表达；主题内容要点覆盖
【点评】
本题属于初中英语应用文写作题，要求学生紧扣给定思维导图的三个核心方向并补充对应示例完成短文，既考查学生的基础英语语法运用能力，也考查学生围绕主题组织内容、连贯行文的能力，需要学生准确覆盖所有提示要点，同时保证词数符合要求、表达自然通顺。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是主题为"We act, we improve"的英语提示类书面表达，写作步骤如下：
1. 明确写作框架：开篇已给出，正文分三个核心模块展开，最后用总结句收尾。
2. 覆盖所有提示要点：
① 礼貌品行模块：列举2个行为示例，排队不插队、吃喝时不大声喧哗，说明要举止文明。
② 关爱他人模块：列举2个行为示例，参与志愿工作、为慈善机构捐款，说明要帮扶有需要的人。
③ 环保行动模块：列举2个行为示例，不随意乱扔垃圾、步行或骑自行车上学，说明要践行环保。
3. 控制词数在90左右，保证语法正确、上下文连贯，不出现真实个人信息，最后用"The more we act, the more we will improve ourselves."收尾升华主题。
【答案】
One possible version:
First, manners make the man. We should learn to behave politely. When we queue, we shouldn't push in before others. It's impolite to make much noise while eating or drinking. Second, we should care about the people in need. It's wonderful for us to work as volunteers. Moreover, it's kind of us to donate money to some charities. Third, it's our duty to understand the importance of protecting the environment. We must not drop litter carelessly. It's wise of us to go to school on foot or by bicycle.
The more we act, the more we will improve ourselves.
【知识点】
英语提示类书面表达；英语语句连贯表达；主题内容要点覆盖
【点评】
本题属于初中英语应用文写作题，要求学生紧扣给定思维导图的三个核心方向并补充对应示例完成短文，既考查学生的基础英语语法运用能力，也考查学生围绕主题组织内容、连贯行文的能力，需要学生准确覆盖所有提示要点，同时保证词数符合要求、表达自然通顺。
【难度系数】
0.6