七、书面表达(共1小题;满分25分)
71. 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter将来中国旅行,想了解中国的日常礼仪。请根据以下要点,给Peter写一封电子邮件。
【要求】1. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥。
2. 语言通顺、语法正确。
3. 词数100左右(邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Peter,
Yours,
Li Hua
71. 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter将来中国旅行,想了解中国的日常礼仪。请根据以下要点,给Peter写一封电子邮件。
【要求】1. 包含所有要点,可适当发挥。
2. 语言通顺、语法正确。
3. 词数100左右(邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Peter,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案：71. One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear you'll come to China. Let me tell you some Chinese daily manners.
When meeting people, we usually shake hands and greet each other politely. We often ask "How are you?" or talk about the weather to start a conversation.
In public places, it's important to wait in line. Don't push others. Also, keep your voice down—talking loudly is not polite.
At the dinner table, don't waste food. Wait for the host to pick up chopsticks first before you start eating. It's also polite to let elders eat first.
I hope these tips can help you. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear you'll come to China. Let me tell you some Chinese daily manners.
When meeting people, we usually shake hands and greet each other politely. We often ask "How are you?" or talk about the weather to start a conversation.
In public places, it's important to wait in line. Don't push others. Also, keep your voice down—talking loudly is not polite.
At the dinner table, don't waste food. Wait for the host to pick up chopsticks first before you start eating. It's also polite to let elders eat first.
I hope these tips can help you. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：
【解析】
这是一篇提示类应用文电子邮件写作，写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇点明写信目的：得知对方即将来中国旅行，引出要介绍中国日常礼仪的主题。
2. 分模块覆盖所有要点：
见面礼仪部分：说明见面通常握手、礼貌问候，常用问候语或聊天气开启对话；
公共场合礼仪部分：说明公共场合要排队、不推挤、低声交谈，大声喧哗是不礼貌的行为；
用餐礼仪部分：说明用餐不要浪费食物，要等主人先动筷，礼让长辈先用餐。
3. 结尾送上祝愿，表达期待见面的心情，符合邮件的交际逻辑，全文控制词数在100左右，语言通顺符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear you'll come to China. Let me tell you some Chinese daily manners.
When meeting people, we usually shake hands and greet each other politely. We often ask "How are you?" or talk about the weather to start a conversation.
In public places, it's important to wait in line. Don't push others. Also, keep your voice down—talking loudly is not polite.
At the dinner table, don't waste food. Wait for the host to pick up chopsticks first before you start eating. It's also polite to let elders eat first.
I hope these tips can help you. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文电子邮件写作，日常交际用语，中国文化礼仪表达
【点评】
本题是提纲类应用文写作，要求学生围绕给定的三类中国日常礼仪完成邮件写作，需要学生准确覆盖所有要点，合理组织行文逻辑，兼顾语言准确性和交际得体性，同时注意词数要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇提示类应用文电子邮件写作，写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇点明写信目的：得知对方即将来中国旅行，引出要介绍中国日常礼仪的主题。
2. 分模块覆盖所有要点：
见面礼仪部分：说明见面通常握手、礼貌问候，常用问候语或聊天气开启对话；
公共场合礼仪部分：说明公共场合要排队、不推挤、低声交谈，大声喧哗是不礼貌的行为；
用餐礼仪部分：说明用餐不要浪费食物，要等主人先动筷，礼让长辈先用餐。
3. 结尾送上祝愿，表达期待见面的心情，符合邮件的交际逻辑，全文控制词数在100左右，语言通顺符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear you'll come to China. Let me tell you some Chinese daily manners.
When meeting people, we usually shake hands and greet each other politely. We often ask "How are you?" or talk about the weather to start a conversation.
In public places, it's important to wait in line. Don't push others. Also, keep your voice down—talking loudly is not polite.
At the dinner table, don't waste food. Wait for the host to pick up chopsticks first before you start eating. It's also polite to let elders eat first.
I hope these tips can help you. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文电子邮件写作，日常交际用语，中国文化礼仪表达
【点评】
本题是提纲类应用文写作，要求学生围绕给定的三类中国日常礼仪完成邮件写作，需要学生准确覆盖所有要点，合理组织行文逻辑，兼顾语言准确性和交际得体性，同时注意词数要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6