七、书面表达(共1小题;满分25分)(2025·江苏镇江丹阳期末)
71. 小小行动铸就美好世界。今年夏天,学校将组织暑期成长营活动,你作为学生代表将在开营仪式上作"For a better world"的主题演讲。请你根据下图提示,完成一篇演讲稿。
【要求】1.参考上图,根据提示完成演讲稿。
2.不少于90词,开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.语义通顺,条理清楚,体现演讲稿特征,书写规范。
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning! It is truly an honour to stand here and make a speech. Today I want to share
Thank you!
71. 小小行动铸就美好世界。今年夏天,学校将组织暑期成长营活动,你作为学生代表将在开营仪式上作"For a better world"的主题演讲。请你根据下图提示,完成一篇演讲稿。
【要求】1.参考上图,根据提示完成演讲稿。
2.不少于90词,开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.语义通顺,条理清楚,体现演讲稿特征,书写规范。
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning! It is truly an honour to stand here and make a speech. Today I want to share
Thank you!
答案：71. One possible version:
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning! It is truly an honour to stand here and make a speech. Today I want to share some advice on what we can do for a better world.
First, everyone can do some charity work. We can give a helping hand by offering our old clothes or the clothes we seldom wear to those who are poor.
Second, we can protect the environment by walking or riding a bike to school. Third, we should be a person who has good manners. We should behave politely. For example, we shouldn't throw garbage on the ground. At last, we should take care of our body. Only when we are healthy, can we help make the world become a better place.
Thank you!
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning! It is truly an honour to stand here and make a speech. Today I want to share some advice on what we can do for a better world.
First, everyone can do some charity work. We can give a helping hand by offering our old clothes or the clothes we seldom wear to those who are poor.
Second, we can protect the environment by walking or riding a bike to school. Third, we should be a person who has good manners. We should behave politely. For example, we shouldn't throw garbage on the ground. At last, we should take care of our body. Only when we are healthy, can we help make the world become a better place.
Thank you!
解析：
【解析】
这是一篇主题为"For a better world"的演讲稿，写作可按以下步骤完成：
1. 开篇承接给定开头，点明本次演讲的核心主题：分享我们能为建设更美好世界所做的力所能及的事。
2. 结合插图提示的三个核心方向展开论述：
① 围绕"give a helping hand"，说明可以通过捐赠旧衣物等方式帮扶贫困群体，参与公益慈善；
② 围绕"protect the environment"，列举绿色出行、不乱扔垃圾等日常环保行动；
③ 围绕"good manners"，说明在公共场合举止文明、礼貌待人的重要性，补充说明保持自身健康才能更好地助力世界变美好的逻辑。
3. 保证全文语义连贯，符合演讲稿口语化、条理清晰的特征，词数满足不少于90词的要求，避开真实人名、校名等敏感信息，最后衔接给定的结尾致谢部分。
参考范文：
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning! It is truly an honour to stand here and make a speech. Today I want to share some advice on what we can do for a better world.
First, everyone can do some charity work. We can give a helping hand by offering our old clothes or the clothes we seldom wear to those who are poor.
Second, we can protect the environment by walking or riding a bike to school. Third, we should be a person who has good manners. We should behave politely. For example, we shouldn't throw garbage on the ground. At last, we should take care of our body. Only when we are healthy, can we help make the world become a better place.
Thank you!
【答案】
参考范文如上，符合题目所有要求的同类合理演讲稿均可得分。
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作；话题类书面表达；日常英语表达
【点评】
本题围绕暑期成长营的演讲场景设置写作任务，引导学生结合提示要点输出内容，既考查学生的英语语言组织能力，也引导学生树立从小事做起共建美好世界的意识。解题时需要注意紧扣插图给出的三个核心写作方向，保证演讲稿的格式和语体特征，避免内容偏题，同时满足词数和信息合规的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇主题为"For a better world"的演讲稿，写作可按以下步骤完成：
1. 开篇承接给定开头，点明本次演讲的核心主题：分享我们能为建设更美好世界所做的力所能及的事。
2. 结合插图提示的三个核心方向展开论述：
① 围绕"give a helping hand"，说明可以通过捐赠旧衣物等方式帮扶贫困群体，参与公益慈善；
② 围绕"protect the environment"，列举绿色出行、不乱扔垃圾等日常环保行动；
③ 围绕"good manners"，说明在公共场合举止文明、礼貌待人的重要性，补充说明保持自身健康才能更好地助力世界变美好的逻辑。
3. 保证全文语义连贯，符合演讲稿口语化、条理清晰的特征，词数满足不少于90词的要求，避开真实人名、校名等敏感信息，最后衔接给定的结尾致谢部分。
参考范文：
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning! It is truly an honour to stand here and make a speech. Today I want to share some advice on what we can do for a better world.
First, everyone can do some charity work. We can give a helping hand by offering our old clothes or the clothes we seldom wear to those who are poor.
Second, we can protect the environment by walking or riding a bike to school. Third, we should be a person who has good manners. We should behave politely. For example, we shouldn't throw garbage on the ground. At last, we should take care of our body. Only when we are healthy, can we help make the world become a better place.
Thank you!
【答案】
参考范文如上，符合题目所有要求的同类合理演讲稿均可得分。
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作；话题类书面表达；日常英语表达
【点评】
本题围绕暑期成长营的演讲场景设置写作任务，引导学生结合提示要点输出内容，既考查学生的英语语言组织能力，也引导学生树立从小事做起共建美好世界的意识。解题时需要注意紧扣插图给出的三个核心写作方向，保证演讲稿的格式和语体特征，避免内容偏题，同时满足词数和信息合规的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6