素材积累
[开头句]
1. Winter is my favourite season.
(点明喜好,下同)
2. Of all the seasons, I like summer best.
3. My favourite season is autumn.
[中间句]
1. I like summer because I can go swimming with my friends.
(解释原因)
2. A windy day is a perfect time to fly kites.
(描述活动,下同)
3. My friends and I love to have big snowball fights.
4. When autumn comes, it is time to harvest.
5. Bees and butterflies fly among the flowers in spring.
(描写景色)
[结尾句]
1. It often rains in summer, but I still love summer.
(表达态度)
2. Winter in Harbin is really great, and there are many fun activities to do. I love winter!
(总结特点)
3. Spring not only lets us enjoy the beauty of nature, but also gives us lots of fun and hope.
(点明意义)
[名言警句]
1. Make your whole year's plans in spring, and your day's plan early in the morning.
一年之计在于春,一日之计在于晨。
2. If winter comes, can spring be far behind?
如果冬天来了,春天还会远吗?
3. Every season is a journey; every journey transforms us. 每个季节都是一段旅程,每段旅程都改变我们。
写作演练
一年四季,景色不同,特点各异。在每个季节里,我们心中都有一份对自然的赞美与感悟。大自然如此美丽,哪一个抓住了你的心呢?请以“I love
提示:1. 你最喜欢哪个季节?2. 这个季节的气候和环境有什么特点?3. 你在这个季节会做些什么活动?
[思路点拨]
① 人称:第一、三人称;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先点明你自己最喜欢的季节并描述这个季节的气候和环境特点,再介绍在这个季节你会做哪些活动,最后回归主题。
[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]
I love
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
[开头句]
1. Winter is my favourite season.
(点明喜好,下同)
2. Of all the seasons, I like summer best.
3. My favourite season is autumn.
[中间句]
1. I like summer because I can go swimming with my friends.
(解释原因)
2. A windy day is a perfect time to fly kites.
(描述活动,下同)
3. My friends and I love to have big snowball fights.
4. When autumn comes, it is time to harvest.
5. Bees and butterflies fly among the flowers in spring.
(描写景色)
[结尾句]
1. It often rains in summer, but I still love summer.
(表达态度)
2. Winter in Harbin is really great, and there are many fun activities to do. I love winter!
(总结特点)
3. Spring not only lets us enjoy the beauty of nature, but also gives us lots of fun and hope.
(点明意义)
[名言警句]
1. Make your whole year's plans in spring, and your day's plan early in the morning.
一年之计在于春,一日之计在于晨。
2. If winter comes, can spring be far behind?
如果冬天来了,春天还会远吗?
3. Every season is a journey; every journey transforms us. 每个季节都是一段旅程,每段旅程都改变我们。
写作演练
一年四季,景色不同,特点各异。在每个季节里,我们心中都有一份对自然的赞美与感悟。大自然如此美丽,哪一个抓住了你的心呢?请以“I love
autumn
best”为题,根据以下提示和要求,用英语写一篇短文,描述你最喜欢的季节,词数90左右。提示:1. 你最喜欢哪个季节?2. 这个季节的气候和环境有什么特点?3. 你在这个季节会做些什么活动?
[思路点拨]
① 人称:第一、三人称;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先点明你自己最喜欢的季节并描述这个季节的气候和环境特点,再介绍在这个季节你会做哪些活动,最后回归主题。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
I love
autumn
bestMy favourite season is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. The leaves on the trees turn into different colours like red, yellow and orange. It looks like a beautiful painting.
I like to go for a walk in the park in autumn. I can enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.
I also like to pick up fallen leaves and make bookmarks with them.
Sometimes I go hiking with my family and have a picnic in the mountains.
Autumn is really a wonderful season.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案:One possible version:
I love autumn best
My favourite season is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. The leaves on the trees turn into different colours like red, yellow and orange. It looks like a beautiful painting.
I like to go for a walk in the park in autumn. I can enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. I also like to pick up fallen leaves and make bookmarks with them. Sometimes I go hiking with my family and have a picnic in the mountains.
Autumn is really a wonderful season.
I love autumn best
My favourite season is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. The leaves on the trees turn into different colours like red, yellow and orange. It looks like a beautiful painting.
I like to go for a walk in the park in autumn. I can enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. I also like to pick up fallen leaves and make bookmarks with them. Sometimes I go hiking with my family and have a picnic in the mountains.
Autumn is really a wonderful season.
解析:
【分析】
首先拿到这道写作题,第一步先选定自己熟悉、容易展开描写的季节,这里选择秋天作为写作对象,补全标题。接下来按照题目给出的三段式结构规划内容:第一段先直接点明自己最喜欢的季节,再按照提示的要点依次描述该季节的天气、天空状态、树叶的变化,用比喻让景色描写更生动;第二段围绕该季节的个人活动展开,按照给出的提示句式,依次写日常喜欢做的事、可以做的事、额外的爱好、偶尔进行的活动,内容贴合日常真实生活即可;最后第三段用总结句收尾,抒发对该季节的喜爱,呼应主题。全程注意使用一般现在时,控制总词数在90左右,避免出现语法错误。
【解析】
步骤1:补全标题,选定写作对象为autumn,得到标题I love autumn best。
步骤2:完成第一段写作:按照表格给出的提示句式,先点明自己最爱的季节,接着依次描述天气状态、天空样貌、树叶的色彩变化,最后用比喻收尾,完成景色部分的描写。
步骤3:完成第二段写作:按照活动相关的提示句式,依次介绍自己在秋季的休闲、爱好、家庭出行等各类活动,内容贴合日常实际。
步骤4:完成第三段收尾:按照提示的结尾句式,写出总结句,点明对秋季的赞美,收束全文。
最后通读全文检查语法错误,调整语句流畅度,确认词数符合要求。
【答案】
I love autumn best
My favourite season is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. The leaves on the trees turn into different colours like red, yellow and orange. It looks like a beautiful painting.
I like to go for a walk in the park in autumn. I can enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. I also like to pick up fallen leaves and make bookmarks with them. Sometimes I go hiking with my family and have a picnic in the mountains.
Autumn is really a wonderful season.
【知识点】
季节主题写作;一般现在时;景物描写
【点评】
本篇习作完全贴合题目给出的所有写作要点,严格遵循三段式的结构要求,逻辑清晰流畅,景色描写生动,活动内容贴近学生真实生活,用到了题干给出的全部提示句式,没有语法错误,词数符合要求,是一篇非常规范的基础英语写景短文,还可以适当加入积累的季节相关名言警句进一步提升作文的文采。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道写作题,第一步先选定自己熟悉、容易展开描写的季节,这里选择秋天作为写作对象,补全标题。接下来按照题目给出的三段式结构规划内容:第一段先直接点明自己最喜欢的季节,再按照提示的要点依次描述该季节的天气、天空状态、树叶的变化,用比喻让景色描写更生动;第二段围绕该季节的个人活动展开,按照给出的提示句式,依次写日常喜欢做的事、可以做的事、额外的爱好、偶尔进行的活动,内容贴合日常真实生活即可;最后第三段用总结句收尾,抒发对该季节的喜爱,呼应主题。全程注意使用一般现在时,控制总词数在90左右,避免出现语法错误。
【解析】
步骤1:补全标题,选定写作对象为autumn,得到标题I love autumn best。
步骤2:完成第一段写作:按照表格给出的提示句式,先点明自己最爱的季节,接着依次描述天气状态、天空样貌、树叶的色彩变化,最后用比喻收尾,完成景色部分的描写。
步骤3:完成第二段写作:按照活动相关的提示句式,依次介绍自己在秋季的休闲、爱好、家庭出行等各类活动,内容贴合日常实际。
步骤4:完成第三段收尾:按照提示的结尾句式,写出总结句,点明对秋季的赞美,收束全文。
最后通读全文检查语法错误,调整语句流畅度,确认词数符合要求。
【答案】
I love autumn best
My favourite season is autumn. The weather is cool and comfortable. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. The leaves on the trees turn into different colours like red, yellow and orange. It looks like a beautiful painting.
I like to go for a walk in the park in autumn. I can enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. I also like to pick up fallen leaves and make bookmarks with them. Sometimes I go hiking with my family and have a picnic in the mountains.
Autumn is really a wonderful season.
【知识点】
季节主题写作;一般现在时;景物描写
【点评】
本篇习作完全贴合题目给出的所有写作要点,严格遵循三段式的结构要求,逻辑清晰流畅,景色描写生动,活动内容贴近学生真实生活,用到了题干给出的全部提示句式,没有语法错误,词数符合要求,是一篇非常规范的基础英语写景短文,还可以适当加入积累的季节相关名言警句进一步提升作文的文采。
【难度系数】
0.7