八、书面表达。(共10分)
你在英文校刊上看到征稿启事。请根据征稿要求,用英语写一篇短文投稿,不少于80词(已给出的文章开头不计入总词数)。
Your favourite season at school
Different seasons give us different feelings. We would like you to share your ideas about your favourite season at school. You need to write about:
★ What does the school look like during that season?
★ What do you often do at school in that season?
★ What kind of activity would you like your school to hold in that season?
My favourite season at school is
你在英文校刊上看到征稿启事。请根据征稿要求,用英语写一篇短文投稿,不少于80词(已给出的文章开头不计入总词数)。
Your favourite season at school
Different seasons give us different feelings. We would like you to share your ideas about your favourite season at school. You need to write about:
★ What does the school look like during that season?
★ What do you often do at school in that season?
★ What kind of activity would you like your school to hold in that season?
My favourite season at school is
答案:One possible version:
My favourite season at school is spring. With colourful flowers and green leaves around, our school looks like a beautiful garden. We can always enjoy the fresh air and hear birds sing.
In my free time, I often read under the trees and relax in the warm sunshine. I also like doing sports at school as the weather is neither too hot nor too cold.
I hope a spring sports meeting will be held. Students can both have fun and develop team spirit through different games.
Spring, full of new life and energy, is my favourite season at school.
My favourite season at school is spring. With colourful flowers and green leaves around, our school looks like a beautiful garden. We can always enjoy the fresh air and hear birds sing.
In my free time, I often read under the trees and relax in the warm sunshine. I also like doing sports at school as the weather is neither too hot nor too cold.
I hope a spring sports meeting will be held. Students can both have fun and develop team spirit through different games.
Spring, full of new life and energy, is my favourite season at school.
解析:
【分析】
首先拿到这道书面表达题,第一步先审题,明确题目要求必须覆盖三个核心要点:①你所选的季节里校园的样貌;②该季节你在校常开展的活动;③你希望学校在该季节举办的特色活动,同时要求总词数不少于80词,给定的开头不计入词数。接下来我们可以优先选择场景素材多、容易展开的季节(比如春季)作为写作对象,按照“开篇点题→描写校园景色→叙述日常活动→提出期待的活动→收尾升华”的逻辑顺次填充内容,全程注意使用符合日常表达的一般现在时,保证逻辑连贯,不要遗漏任何指定要点即可完成写作。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 补全给定的半句话开头,直接点明自己最喜欢的校园季节是春季,开门见山点题。
2. 对应第一个写作要求,描写春季校园的外观:用细节描写出校园里繁花盛开、树叶翠绿,像美丽花园,还能呼吸新鲜空气、听鸟鸣的画面,让场景更生动。
3. 对应第二个写作要求,结合春季气温舒适的特点,写出自己常做的事:空闲时在树下读书、晒暖融融的阳光,还会在校做运动,贴合季节特征。
4. 对应第三个写作要求,提出希望学校举办春季运动会的想法,同时说明该活动的好处:既能让学生玩得开心,还能培养团队精神,内容更充实。
5. 最后收尾总结,点明春天充满新生机和活力,呼应开头的主题,最后检查全文,确认所有要点都覆盖、词数达标、没有语法错误即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite season at school is spring. With colourful flowers and green leaves around, our school looks like a beautiful garden. We can always enjoy the fresh air and hear birds sing.
In my free time, I often read under the trees and relax in the warm sunshine. I also like doing sports at school as the weather is neither too hot nor too cold.
I hope a spring sports meeting will be held. Students can both have fun and develop team spirit through different games.
Spring, full of new life and energy, is my favourite season at school.
【知识点】
提纲类书面表达;季节场景描写;英语语篇连贯
【点评】
本题是贴近学生校园生活的话题类写作,指定要点清晰,写作门槛较低,同学们写作时要注意不要遗漏题干给出的三个核心要求,适当加入细节描写可以避免内容空洞,让文章更有感染力,同时注意控制词数满足不少于80词的要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道书面表达题,第一步先审题,明确题目要求必须覆盖三个核心要点:①你所选的季节里校园的样貌;②该季节你在校常开展的活动;③你希望学校在该季节举办的特色活动,同时要求总词数不少于80词,给定的开头不计入词数。接下来我们可以优先选择场景素材多、容易展开的季节(比如春季)作为写作对象,按照“开篇点题→描写校园景色→叙述日常活动→提出期待的活动→收尾升华”的逻辑顺次填充内容,全程注意使用符合日常表达的一般现在时,保证逻辑连贯,不要遗漏任何指定要点即可完成写作。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:
1. 补全给定的半句话开头,直接点明自己最喜欢的校园季节是春季,开门见山点题。
2. 对应第一个写作要求,描写春季校园的外观:用细节描写出校园里繁花盛开、树叶翠绿,像美丽花园,还能呼吸新鲜空气、听鸟鸣的画面,让场景更生动。
3. 对应第二个写作要求,结合春季气温舒适的特点,写出自己常做的事:空闲时在树下读书、晒暖融融的阳光,还会在校做运动,贴合季节特征。
4. 对应第三个写作要求,提出希望学校举办春季运动会的想法,同时说明该活动的好处:既能让学生玩得开心,还能培养团队精神,内容更充实。
5. 最后收尾总结,点明春天充满新生机和活力,呼应开头的主题,最后检查全文,确认所有要点都覆盖、词数达标、没有语法错误即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite season at school is spring. With colourful flowers and green leaves around, our school looks like a beautiful garden. We can always enjoy the fresh air and hear birds sing.
In my free time, I often read under the trees and relax in the warm sunshine. I also like doing sports at school as the weather is neither too hot nor too cold.
I hope a spring sports meeting will be held. Students can both have fun and develop team spirit through different games.
Spring, full of new life and energy, is my favourite season at school.
【知识点】
提纲类书面表达;季节场景描写;英语语篇连贯
【点评】
本题是贴近学生校园生活的话题类写作,指定要点清晰,写作门槛较低,同学们写作时要注意不要遗漏题干给出的三个核心要求,适当加入细节描写可以避免内容空洞,让文章更有感染力,同时注意控制词数满足不少于80词的要求。
【难度系数】
0.7