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同学们,你们有喜欢的玩具吗?请挑选一个你最喜欢的玩具进行描述吧!
要求:1. 语句通顺,表达明确;2. 不少于30个单词。
My
robot

My name is Sam. I have a robot. Look! My robot is tall. His head is small. But his eyes and mouth are big. Look at his nose.

It's big and blue. My robot can sing and dance. He can talk too. My brother and I like playing with him together. This is my robot. Do you like him?(答案不唯一)

答案:主题写作提优
My robot
My name is Sam. I have a robot.
Look! My robot is tall. His head is small.
But his eyes and mouth are big. Look at his nose.
It's big and blue. My robot can sing and dance. He can talk too. My brother and I like playing with him together.
This is my robot. Do you like him?
(答案不唯一)
解析:
【分析】
这是一道开放类英语小写作题,解题时首先第一步先确定你要描写的玩具,补全标题,优先选自己熟悉、会用相关英文词汇描述的玩具,比如机器人、玩具熊、洋娃娃这类常见玩具。接下来搭建写作逻辑:首先开篇点明自己拥有这个玩具,接着从外观外形、玩具的特殊功能、你平时和它的相处细节这几个维度依次展开,最后收尾表达你对这个玩具的喜爱,全程用学过的简单句型表达,保证语句通顺,很容易就能满足不少于30词的要求,不会出现跑题的问题。
【解析】
1. 补全标题:选择常见的玩具作为主题,比如My robot,契合写作要求。
2. 开篇引入:用简单的基础句型介绍自己,引出要描写的玩具:My name is Sam. I have a robot.
3. 外观描写:按照从整体到局部的顺序描述机器人的外形特征,逻辑清晰:Look! My robot is tall. His head is small. But his eyes and mouth are big. Look at his nose. It's big and blue.
4. 功能与情感表达:接着写机器人的特殊能力,再补充自己和家人和它玩耍的细节,自然传递喜爱的情绪:My robot can sing and dance. He can talk too. My brother and I like playing with him together.
5. 收尾互动:最后简单收尾,增加反问让内容更生动:This is my robot. Do you like him?
全文所用都是低年级常用的简单句型,语句通顺,字数远超30词,完全符合题干要求,也可替换为其他玩具,调整对应的外观、功能描述即可,答案不唯一。
【答案】
My robot
My name is Sam. I have a robot.
Look! My robot is tall. His head is small.
But his eyes and mouth are big. Look at his nose.
It's big and blue. My robot can sing and dance. He can talk too. My brother and I like playing with him together.
This is my robot. Do you like him?
(答案不唯一)
【知识点】
物品类英语写作;基础句型运用
【点评】
本题属于小学低年级的开放型写作题,没有唯一标准答案,引导学生结合自身生活经验描述熟悉的玩具,既锻炼学生的观察能力,也能巩固已学的基础英语表达,写作时按照“点明对象-细节描写-抒发喜爱”的逻辑展开,很容易满足题干的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.8
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