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十二、书面表达。(10 分)
以“My school day”为题,写一篇短文,介绍你在学校的一天。要求:语句通顺,不少于5句话。
My school day
I'm Tom. I'm a student. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have four lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. I like Maths and PE. I don't like Music. After school, I usually play football with my friends. I love my school day.





答案:My school day
I'm Tom. I'm a student. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have four lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. I like Maths and PE. I don't like Music. After school, I usually play football with my friends. I love my school day.
(仅供参考)
解析:
【分析】
这道题要求以"My school day"为题介绍自己的校园一日,解题时首先要明确写作逻辑:优先选用第一人称来叙述,按照时间先后顺序排布内容,首先开篇简单介绍自己的学生身份,接着依次说明上学的时间安排、每日的课程数量、自己对不同学科的喜好、放学后的常规活动,最后收尾表达对校园生活的感受,全程注意使用简单正确的句式,保证句子数量不少于5句,语句通顺没有语法错误即可符合要求。
【解析】
本篇参考范文按照时间线逻辑展开,步骤如下:
1. 开篇自我介绍,点明自身学生身份:I'm Tom. I'm a student.
2. 交代上学的时间范围:I go to school from Monday to Friday.
3. 介绍在校的课程排布:I have four lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.
4. 说明自己的学科喜好:I like Maths and PE. I don't like Music.
5. 补充放学后的课余活动:After school, I usually play football with my friends.
6. 收尾抒发对校园生活的喜爱:I love my school day.
全文语法正确,逻辑连贯,句子数量远多于5句,完全满足题目的各项要求。
【答案】
My school day
I'm Tom. I'm a student. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have four lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. I like Maths and PE. I don't like Music. After school, I usually play football with my friends. I love my school day.
(仅供参考)
【知识点】
英语命题写作、一般现在时运用、校园主题词汇
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰,按照日常时间顺序串联起校园生活的各个环节,用词简单贴合小学阶段的英语知识储备,没有复杂的长难句,语句通顺表意明确,完全符合题目的评分要求,同学们写作时也可以代入自己的真实校园经历替换对应内容,就能写出合格的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
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