八、[2025 常州市武进区期中]书面表达。(共 10 分)
新学期转眼已过去两个月,相信初入新校园的你已渐渐熟悉这里的一切。假设你是 Jack,作为阳光中学的学生代表,你很荣幸参与了中英友好交流项目。现在,你想通过这封邮件,向你的英国笔友 Daniel 回信,和他分享你的校园日常。
注意事项:
1. 回复的邮件须包括所有要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯。
2. 回复邮件的词数不少于 70,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Daniel,
I am very glad to hear from you. I study at Sunshine Middle School now.
I like my school very much.
Yours,
Jack
新学期转眼已过去两个月,相信初入新校园的你已渐渐熟悉这里的一切。假设你是 Jack,作为阳光中学的学生代表,你很荣幸参与了中英友好交流项目。现在,你想通过这封邮件,向你的英国笔友 Daniel 回信,和他分享你的校园日常。
注意事项:
1. 回复的邮件须包括所有要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯。
2. 回复邮件的词数不少于 70,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Daniel,
I am very glad to hear from you. I study at Sunshine Middle School now.
I like my school very much.
Yours,
Jack
答案：One possible version:
Dear Daniel,
I am very glad to hear from you. I study at Sunshine Middle School now. I wear glasses. I like reading and sports. I often play football after school.
Our school is big and clean. The library and classroom buildings are modern. They are the perfect places for us to study. Moreover, we have many kind teachers. They really care about us. Our classmates are friendly too. We help each other all the time.
Our after-school activities are great fun! We enjoy ourselves in different clubs.
I like my school very much.
Yours,
Jack
Dear Daniel,
I am very glad to hear from you. I study at Sunshine Middle School now. I wear glasses. I like reading and sports. I often play football after school.
Our school is big and clean. The library and classroom buildings are modern. They are the perfect places for us to study. Moreover, we have many kind teachers. They really care about us. Our classmates are friendly too. We help each other all the time.
Our after-school activities are great fun! We enjoy ourselves in different clubs.
I like my school very much.
Yours,
Jack
解析：
【分析】本题为英文书信写作题，要求以Jack的身份给英国笔友Daniel回信分享校园日常。解题思路：首先明确书信结构，开头已给出，中间需覆盖所有给定要点：自我介绍（外貌、爱好）、学校情况（规模、建筑）、老师特点、同学相处、课后活动；其次要保证语句通顺、意思连贯，词数符合要求，使用合适的书信语气。
【解析】写作时，先承接开头介绍自身情况（对应Introduction部分：外貌、爱好）；接着描述学校（对应School部分：大而干净，建筑）；再介绍老师（对应Teachers部分：友善、关心学生）；然后说明同学间的相处（对应Classmates部分：友好、互助）；最后提及课后活动（对应After-school activities部分），确保所有要点都包含，语言自然连贯，符合初中英语写作规范。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Daniel,
I am very glad to hear from you. I study at Sunshine Middle School now. I wear glasses. I like reading and sports. I often play football after school.
Our school is big and clean. The library and classroom buildings are modern. They are the perfect places for us to study. Moreover, we have many kind teachers. They really care about us. Our classmates are friendly too. We help each other all the time.
Our after-school activities are great fun! We enjoy ourselves in different clubs.
I like my school very much.
Yours,
Jack
【知识点】英语书信写作；校园话题表达
【点评】本题围绕校园生活话题，考查学生英文书信写作能力，要求涵盖所有给定要点，语言通顺连贯，贴近学生实际生活，是初中英语常考题型。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时，先承接开头介绍自身情况（对应Introduction部分：外貌、爱好）；接着描述学校（对应School部分：大而干净，建筑）；再介绍老师（对应Teachers部分：友善、关心学生）；然后说明同学间的相处（对应Classmates部分：友好、互助）；最后提及课后活动（对应After-school activities部分），确保所有要点都包含，语言自然连贯，符合初中英语写作规范。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Daniel,
I am very glad to hear from you. I study at Sunshine Middle School now. I wear glasses. I like reading and sports. I often play football after school.
Our school is big and clean. The library and classroom buildings are modern. They are the perfect places for us to study. Moreover, we have many kind teachers. They really care about us. Our classmates are friendly too. We help each other all the time.
Our after-school activities are great fun! We enjoy ourselves in different clubs.
I like my school very much.
Yours,
Jack
【知识点】英语书信写作；校园话题表达
【点评】本题围绕校园生活话题，考查学生英文书信写作能力，要求涵盖所有给定要点，语言通顺连贯，贴近学生实际生活，是初中英语常考题型。
【难度系数】0.5