旧物改造不仅环保，还能发挥我们的创造力。请以“I made a ... with old things”为题，用一般过去时写一篇小短文，介绍你的一次旧物改造经历。
要求：条理清晰，适当使用本单元核心词汇和感叹句。不少于50词。
I made a
要求：条理清晰，适当使用本单元核心词汇和感叹句。不少于50词。
I made a
toy robot
with old thingsLast Sunday, I found some old boxes and plastic bottles at home. I wanted to make something new.
First, I used a big cardboard box for the body. Then, I used two small boxes for the arms. I used plastic bottle caps for the eyes.
I painted the robot silver and blue. I made a cool toy robot! What a nice robot! I was very proud.
I learned that old things can have a new life. Don't throw them away!
答案：I made a toy robot with old things
Last Sunday, I found some old boxes and plastic bottles at home. I wanted to make something new. First, I used a big cardboard box for the body. Then, I used two small boxes for the arms. I used plastic bottle caps for the eyes. I painted the robot silver and blue. I made a cool toy robot! What a nice robot! I was very proud. I learned that old things can have a new life. Don't throw them away!
（答案不唯一）
Last Sunday, I found some old boxes and plastic bottles at home. I wanted to make something new. First, I used a big cardboard box for the body. Then, I used two small boxes for the arms. I used plastic bottle caps for the eyes. I painted the robot silver and blue. I made a cool toy robot! What a nice robot! I was very proud. I learned that old things can have a new life. Don't throw them away!
（答案不唯一）
解析：
【分析】
首先确定作文主题为旧物改造玩具机器人，需严格遵循题目要求：使用一般过去时，条理清晰，运用制作类核心词汇，加入感叹句，字数不少于50词。解题思路：1. 补全标题，明确改造物品；2. 开头点明时间与旧物材料；3. 按顺序描述制作步骤；4. 补充装饰细节；5. 表达感受与环保感悟，使用感叹句增强语气。
【解析】
1. 补全标题为“I made a toy robot with old things”；
2. 开头交代时间（Last Sunday）和旧物材料（old boxes, plastic bottles）；
3. 按制作顺序描述：用大纸箱做身体，小盒子做手臂，塑料瓶盖做眼睛；
4. 加入装饰（涂成银蓝色）；
5. 用感叹句（What a nice robot!）表达感受，最后点明旧物新用的感悟，符合一般过去时要求，字数达标。
【答案】
I made a toy robot with old things
Last Sunday, I found some old boxes and plastic bottles at home. I wanted to make something new. First, I used a big cardboard box for the body. Then, I used two small boxes for the arms. I used plastic bottle caps for the eyes. I painted the robot silver and blue. I made a cool toy robot! What a nice robot! I was very proud. I learned that old things can have a new life. Don't throw them away!
【知识点】
一般过去时、英语短文写作
【点评】
本文符合题目所有要求，采用一般过去时叙述旧物改造经历，条理清晰，运用了制作类核心词汇，加入感叹句增强语气，结尾点明旧物新用的环保感悟，内容完整充实。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先确定作文主题为旧物改造玩具机器人，需严格遵循题目要求：使用一般过去时，条理清晰，运用制作类核心词汇，加入感叹句，字数不少于50词。解题思路：1. 补全标题，明确改造物品；2. 开头点明时间与旧物材料；3. 按顺序描述制作步骤；4. 补充装饰细节；5. 表达感受与环保感悟，使用感叹句增强语气。
【解析】
1. 补全标题为“I made a toy robot with old things”；
2. 开头交代时间（Last Sunday）和旧物材料（old boxes, plastic bottles）；
3. 按制作顺序描述：用大纸箱做身体，小盒子做手臂，塑料瓶盖做眼睛；
4. 加入装饰（涂成银蓝色）；
5. 用感叹句（What a nice robot!）表达感受，最后点明旧物新用的感悟，符合一般过去时要求，字数达标。
【答案】
I made a toy robot with old things
Last Sunday, I found some old boxes and plastic bottles at home. I wanted to make something new. First, I used a big cardboard box for the body. Then, I used two small boxes for the arms. I used plastic bottle caps for the eyes. I painted the robot silver and blue. I made a cool toy robot! What a nice robot! I was very proud. I learned that old things can have a new life. Don't throw them away!
【知识点】
一般过去时、英语短文写作
【点评】
本文符合题目所有要求，采用一般过去时叙述旧物改造经历，条理清晰，运用了制作类核心词汇，加入感叹句增强语气，结尾点明旧物新用的环保感悟，内容完整充实。
【难度系数】
0.6