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Yuan Longping: father of hybrid rice
Yuan Longping was a great Chinese rice scientist. People call him the father of hybrid rice.
Yuan liked farming at an early age. When he grew up, he studied the science of farming. He had a dream. He wanted to grow more rice to feed people.
In 1964, he began to research hybrid rice. It was very difficult, but he never gave up. He worked hard and always stayed in the fields. Finally, he developed hybrid rice in 1973. Now hybrid rice grows in China and many other countries.
Yuan Longping was great because he worked hard all his life. I can learn a lot from him. He showed us that working hard can change the world.
小试身手
首先点明主人公，并介绍人物基本信息。
接着讲述主人公的成长经历与梦想。
介绍主人公的贡献：杂交水稻惠及世界。
结尾总结主人公为何伟大，以及我们从中得到的收获。
Yuan Longping: father of hybrid rice
Yuan Longping was a great Chinese rice scientist. People call him the father of hybrid rice.
Yuan liked farming at an early age. When he grew up, he studied the science of farming. He had a dream. He wanted to grow more rice to feed people.
In 1964, he began to research hybrid rice. It was very difficult, but he never gave up. He worked hard and always stayed in the fields. Finally, he developed hybrid rice in 1973. Now hybrid rice grows in China and many other countries.
Yuan Longping was great because he worked hard all his life. I can learn a lot from him. He showed us that working hard can change the world.
小试身手
首先点明主人公，并介绍人物基本信息。
接着讲述主人公的成长经历与梦想。
介绍主人公的贡献：杂交水稻惠及世界。
结尾总结主人公为何伟大，以及我们从中得到的收获。
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Yuan Longping: father of hybrid rice
Yuan Longping was a great Chinese rice scientist. People call him the father of hybrid rice.
Yuan loved farming when he was very young. When he grew up, he learned a lot about farming. He had a warm dream: he wanted to grow much more rice, so no one in the world would be hungry.
In 1964, he started to study hybrid rice. The work was really hard, but he never gave up. He worked in the fields almost every day. In 1973, he successfully developed hybrid rice. Now hybrid rice is planted in China and many other countries, it helps lots of people have enough food to eat.
Yuan Longping is great because he worked for his dream all his life. I learn from him that hard work can help us make our dream come true, and even change the world for the better.
Yuan Longping: father of hybrid rice
Yuan Longping was a great Chinese rice scientist. People call him the father of hybrid rice.
Yuan loved farming when he was very young. When he grew up, he learned a lot about farming. He had a warm dream: he wanted to grow much more rice, so no one in the world would be hungry.
In 1964, he started to study hybrid rice. The work was really hard, but he never gave up. He worked in the fields almost every day. In 1973, he successfully developed hybrid rice. Now hybrid rice is planted in China and many other countries, it helps lots of people have enough food to eat.
Yuan Longping is great because he worked for his dream all his life. I learn from him that hard work can help us make our dream come true, and even change the world for the better.
解析：
【分析】本题要求仿写人物介绍类英语短文，需严格遵循题目指定的四段结构展开：第一部分点明主人公袁隆平的核心身份；第二部分梳理其成长经历与最初的梦想；第三部分介绍他研究杂交水稻的过程、成果及国际影响；第四部分总结他的伟大之处及对我们的启示。仿写时需保留原文核心信息，同时符合英语表达习惯，语句通顺。
【解析】按照题目要求的结构，依次组织内容：
1. 点明主人公及基本信息：Yuan Longping was a great Chinese rice scientist. People call him the father of hybrid rice.
2. 成长经历与梦想：Yuan loved farming when he was very young. When he grew up, he learned a lot about farming. He had a warm dream: he wanted to grow much more rice, so no one in the world would be hungry.
3. 介绍贡献：In 1964, he started to study hybrid rice. The work was really hard, but he never gave up. He worked in the fields almost every day. In 1973, he successfully developed hybrid rice. Now hybrid rice is planted in China and many other countries, it helps lots of people have enough food to eat.
4. 结尾总结：Yuan Longping is great because he worked for his dream all his life. I learn from him that hard work can help us make our dream come true, and even change the world for the better.
【答案】Yuan Longping: father of hybrid rice
Yuan Longping was a great Chinese rice scientist. People call him the father of hybrid rice.
Yuan loved farming when he was very young. When he grew up, he learned a lot about farming. He had a warm dream: he wanted to grow much more rice, so no one in the world would be hungry.
In 1964, he started to study hybrid rice. The work was really hard, but he never gave up. He worked in the fields almost every day. In 1973, he successfully developed hybrid rice. Now hybrid rice is planted in China and many other countries, it helps lots of people have enough food to eat.
Yuan Longping is great because he worked for his dream all his life. I learn from him that hard work can help us make our dream come true, and even change the world for the better.
【知识点】英语人物介绍写作、英语应用文写作
【点评】本题为英语基础写作练习，考察学生对人物介绍类短文结构的掌握，要求学生按指定框架整合信息，同时考查英语语句的组织能力，有助于提升学生的英语表达与信息梳理能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照题目要求的结构，依次组织内容：
1. 点明主人公及基本信息：Yuan Longping was a great Chinese rice scientist. People call him the father of hybrid rice.
2. 成长经历与梦想：Yuan loved farming when he was very young. When he grew up, he learned a lot about farming. He had a warm dream: he wanted to grow much more rice, so no one in the world would be hungry.
3. 介绍贡献：In 1964, he started to study hybrid rice. The work was really hard, but he never gave up. He worked in the fields almost every day. In 1973, he successfully developed hybrid rice. Now hybrid rice is planted in China and many other countries, it helps lots of people have enough food to eat.
4. 结尾总结：Yuan Longping is great because he worked for his dream all his life. I learn from him that hard work can help us make our dream come true, and even change the world for the better.
【答案】Yuan Longping: father of hybrid rice
Yuan Longping was a great Chinese rice scientist. People call him the father of hybrid rice.
Yuan loved farming when he was very young. When he grew up, he learned a lot about farming. He had a warm dream: he wanted to grow much more rice, so no one in the world would be hungry.
In 1964, he started to study hybrid rice. The work was really hard, but he never gave up. He worked in the fields almost every day. In 1973, he successfully developed hybrid rice. Now hybrid rice is planted in China and many other countries, it helps lots of people have enough food to eat.
Yuan Longping is great because he worked for his dream all his life. I learn from him that hard work can help us make our dream come true, and even change the world for the better.
【知识点】英语人物介绍写作、英语应用文写作
【点评】本题为英语基础写作练习，考察学生对人物介绍类短文结构的掌握，要求学生按指定框架整合信息，同时考查英语语句的组织能力，有助于提升学生的英语表达与信息梳理能力。
【难度系数】0.6
孔子是中国古代伟大的思想家和教育家，他的思想影响了中国几千年。请以“Confucius：a great teacher”为题，用一般过去时写一篇短文，介绍孔子。
参考词汇：thinker(思想家)，educator(教育家)，idea(思想)
要求：条理清晰，语句通顺；书写规范，不少于50词。
Confucius：a great teacher
参考词汇：thinker(思想家)，educator(教育家)，idea(思想)
要求：条理清晰，语句通顺；书写规范，不少于50词。
Confucius：a great teacher
Confucius was a great Chinese thinker and educator. Confucius liked learning at an early age. When he grew up, he wanted to help people with his idea. He taught many students. He never gave up, even when life was hard. Confucius was great because he helped people learn and think. He showed us that learning never stops. His ideas are still important today.
答案：Confucius: a great teacher
Confucius was a great Chinese thinker and educator. Confucius liked learning at an early age. When he grew up, he wanted to help people with his idea. He taught many students. He never gave up, even when life was hard. Confucius was great because he helped people learn and think. He showed us that learning never stops. His ideas are still important today.
Confucius was a great Chinese thinker and educator. Confucius liked learning at an early age. When he grew up, he wanted to help people with his idea. He taught many students. He never gave up, even when life was hard. Confucius was great because he helped people learn and think. He showed us that learning never stops. His ideas are still important today.
解析：
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以“Confucius：a great teacher”为题，用一般过去时写作，需用到参考词汇thinker、educator、idea，要求条理清晰、语句通顺、不少于50词。解题思路：1. 开头直接点明孔子的身份，呼应主题；2. 介绍孔子的早年学习经历与成长后的志向，融入参考词汇；3. 阐述孔子的教育贡献，体现其作为教育家的特点；4. 结尾总结孔子的影响，升华主题，全程使用一般过去时确保时态正确。
【解析】
根据题目要求，结合参考词汇，围绕孔子的身份、经历、贡献及影响，用一般过去时组织内容，形成符合要求的短文，确保内容连贯、符合字数要求。
【答案】
Confucius: a great teacher
Confucius was a great Chinese thinker and educator. Confucius liked learning at an early age. When he grew up, he wanted to help people with his idea. He taught many students. He never gave up, even when life was hard. Confucius was great because he helped people learn and think. He showed us that learning never stops. His ideas are still important today.
【知识点】
一般过去时运用，英语短文写作，词汇运用
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语基础写作能力，要求结合指定时态、参考词汇介绍名人，注重内容的条理性与语言的准确性，是常见的英语写作题型，能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确题目要求：以“Confucius：a great teacher”为题，用一般过去时写作，需用到参考词汇thinker、educator、idea，要求条理清晰、语句通顺、不少于50词。解题思路：1. 开头直接点明孔子的身份，呼应主题；2. 介绍孔子的早年学习经历与成长后的志向，融入参考词汇；3. 阐述孔子的教育贡献，体现其作为教育家的特点；4. 结尾总结孔子的影响，升华主题，全程使用一般过去时确保时态正确。
【解析】
根据题目要求，结合参考词汇，围绕孔子的身份、经历、贡献及影响，用一般过去时组织内容，形成符合要求的短文，确保内容连贯、符合字数要求。
【答案】
Confucius: a great teacher
Confucius was a great Chinese thinker and educator. Confucius liked learning at an early age. When he grew up, he wanted to help people with his idea. He taught many students. He never gave up, even when life was hard. Confucius was great because he helped people learn and think. He showed us that learning never stops. His ideas are still important today.
【知识点】
一般过去时运用，英语短文写作，词汇运用
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语基础写作能力，要求结合指定时态、参考词汇介绍名人，注重内容的条理性与语言的准确性，是常见的英语写作题型，能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5