素材积累＞＞
[开头句]
1. As we grow up, we must think of what we will do in our lives. （引出话题,下同）
2. There are many great role models around us in our lives.
[中间句]
1. He held fast to his dream and overcame all kinds of difficulties. （人物行为,下同）
2. For over 60 years, Fan chose to leave city life behind and work in Dunhuang, deep in the desert.
[结尾句]
1. We should learn from him and live a valuable and meaningful life. （总结建议）
2. I imagine myself to be just like her when I grow up. （表达理想）
[名言警句]
1. Live in the moment, love your life. 活在当下,热爱生活。
2. Hope is the thing with feathers. 希望是长着羽毛的生灵。
写作演练＞＞
最近,你校将举办题为“The person who has influenced me most”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。内容需包括人物介绍、你的经历及感受。
注意:1. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、条理清
楚,书写规范;2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;3. 词数90左右,演讲稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:应用文。② 时态:一般现在时和一般过去时。③ 人称:第一人称和第三人称;④ 包含所给出的写作要点,注意语句的连贯性,保证词汇和语法的正确使用。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
The person who has influenced me most
Good afternoon, everyone! It's a great honour for me to speak here. In my junior school life, many people have helped me.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
[开头句]
1. As we grow up, we must think of what we will do in our lives. （引出话题,下同）
2. There are many great role models around us in our lives.
[中间句]
1. He held fast to his dream and overcame all kinds of difficulties. （人物行为,下同）
2. For over 60 years, Fan chose to leave city life behind and work in Dunhuang, deep in the desert.
[结尾句]
1. We should learn from him and live a valuable and meaningful life. （总结建议）
2. I imagine myself to be just like her when I grow up. （表达理想）
[名言警句]
1. Live in the moment, love your life. 活在当下,热爱生活。
2. Hope is the thing with feathers. 希望是长着羽毛的生灵。
写作演练＞＞
最近,你校将举办题为“The person who has influenced me most”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。内容需包括人物介绍、你的经历及感受。
注意:1. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、条理清
楚,书写规范;2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;3. 词数90左右,演讲稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:应用文。② 时态:一般现在时和一般过去时。③ 人称:第一人称和第三人称;④ 包含所给出的写作要点,注意语句的连贯性,保证词汇和语法的正确使用。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
The person who has influenced me most
Good afternoon, everyone! It's a great honour for me to speak here. In my junior school life, many people have helped me.
But the person who has influenced me most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice.
I still remember that once I failed an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me.
She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案：One possible version：
The person who has influenced me most
Good afternoon, everyone! It's a great honour for me to speak here. In my junior school life, many people have helped me. But the person who has influenced me most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice.
I still remember that once I failed an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
The person who has influenced me most
Good afternoon, everyone! It's a great honour for me to speak here. In my junior school life, many people have helped me. But the person who has influenced me most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice.
I still remember that once I failed an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
解析：
【分析】
首先审题明确：本题要求写题为“The person who has influenced me most”的英语演讲稿，需包含人物介绍（外貌、性格）、相关经历、自身感受。解题思路：1. 选取身边有具体事例的人物（如老师）；2. 按结构写作：开头引出人物→介绍人物外貌与性格→叙述体现影响的具体经历→表达自身感受与总结；3. 注意语句连贯、符合演讲稿格式，控制词数，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头承接给定内容，引出核心人物：But the person who has influenced me most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
2. 介绍人物profile：Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She often helps me with my English.
3. 叙述具体经历：When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
4. 表达感受与总结：I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
【答案】
The person who has influenced me most
Good afternoon, everyone! It's a great honour for me to speak here. In my junior school life, many people have helped me. But the person who has influenced me most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice.
I still remember that once I failed an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、人物描写、英语写作结构
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，涵盖人物介绍、经历、感受三大要点，语言流畅自然，逻辑清晰，符合演讲稿的文体规范，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.3
首先审题明确：本题要求写题为“The person who has influenced me most”的英语演讲稿，需包含人物介绍（外貌、性格）、相关经历、自身感受。解题思路：1. 选取身边有具体事例的人物（如老师）；2. 按结构写作：开头引出人物→介绍人物外貌与性格→叙述体现影响的具体经历→表达自身感受与总结；3. 注意语句连贯、符合演讲稿格式，控制词数，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头承接给定内容，引出核心人物：But the person who has influenced me most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
2. 介绍人物profile：Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She often helps me with my English.
3. 叙述具体经历：When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
4. 表达感受与总结：I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
【答案】
The person who has influenced me most
Good afternoon, everyone! It's a great honour for me to speak here. In my junior school life, many people have helped me. But the person who has influenced me most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice.
I still remember that once I failed an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、人物描写、英语写作结构
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，涵盖人物介绍、经历、感受三大要点，语言流畅自然，逻辑清晰，符合演讲稿的文体规范，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.3