七、书面表达(本题满分25分)
[2025南通市如皋市期末改编]生活中总有一些瞬间让我们明白生命的意义，学会做有用的人、积极生活。假如你是李华，请以“A Meaningful Moment in My Life”为题，写一篇短文分享一次让你感悟人生、变得积极向上的经历。
要点：
1. 讲述一次亲身经历；
2. 谈谈从中得到的人生感悟；
3. 说明这件事对你的积极影响。
要求：
1. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
A Meaningful Moment in My Life
Life is beautiful and meaningful.
[2025南通市如皋市期末改编]生活中总有一些瞬间让我们明白生命的意义，学会做有用的人、积极生活。假如你是李华，请以“A Meaningful Moment in My Life”为题，写一篇短文分享一次让你感悟人生、变得积极向上的经历。
要点：
1. 讲述一次亲身经历；
2. 谈谈从中得到的人生感悟；
3. 说明这件事对你的积极影响。
要求：
1. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
A Meaningful Moment in My Life
Life is beautiful and meaningful.
答案：One possible version:
A Meaningful Moment in My Life
Life is beautiful and meaningful. As a teenager, I once had a special moment that made me understand how to be a better person.
Last weekend, I took part in a volunteer activity to help clean the community garden. At first, I thought it would be tiring and boring. However, when I saw the garden become clean and elderly neighbours relax happily there, a strong sense of joy filled my heart.
This meaningful moment taught me that helping others can bring true happiness. It also encourages me to be a useful person. From then on, I decide to keep doing small acts of kindness and live a life full of love and meaning.
A Meaningful Moment in My Life
Life is beautiful and meaningful. As a teenager, I once had a special moment that made me understand how to be a better person.
Last weekend, I took part in a volunteer activity to help clean the community garden. At first, I thought it would be tiring and boring. However, when I saw the garden become clean and elderly neighbours relax happily there, a strong sense of joy filled my heart.
This meaningful moment taught me that helping others can bring true happiness. It also encourages me to be a useful person. From then on, I decide to keep doing small acts of kindness and live a life full of love and meaning.
解析：
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“A Meaningful Moment in My Life”为题，分享一次让自己感悟人生、积极向上的经历。解题思路：1. 紧扣题目给出的三个要点：讲述亲身经历、谈人生感悟、说明积极影响，选取贴近学生生活的素材（如社区志愿活动）；2. 结构安排：承接给定开头，中间叙述经历的过程与感受变化，结尾点明感悟与积极影响；3. 注意词数要求（90左右），避免出现真实姓名、校名等信息，语言符合初中生水平。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 确定素材：选取参加社区花园清洁的志愿活动，符合学生身份；2. 内容组织：先承接开头引出特殊瞬间，再具体叙述经历（起初的想法、看到成果的感受），最后点明感悟（帮助他人带来快乐）和积极影响（坚持做善事）；3. 语言调整：使用简单复合句，控制词数，确保语法正确，无真实信息。
【答案】One possible version:
A Meaningful Moment in My Life
Life is beautiful and meaningful. As a teenager, I once had a special moment that made me understand how to be a better person.
Last weekend, I took part in a volunteer activity to help clean the community garden. At first, I thought it would be tiring and boring. However, when I saw the garden become clean and elderly neighbours relax happily there, a strong sense of joy filled my heart.
This meaningful moment taught me that helping others can bring true happiness. It also encourages me to be a useful person. From then on, I decide to keep doing small acts of kindness and live a life full of love and meaning.
【知识点】英语书面表达、记叙文写作、话题作文
【点评】本文紧扣主题，要点完整，经历真实具体，感悟积极深刻，语言流畅自然，结构清晰，符合题目各项要求，是一篇优秀的初中生书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：1. 确定素材：选取参加社区花园清洁的志愿活动，符合学生身份；2. 内容组织：先承接开头引出特殊瞬间，再具体叙述经历（起初的想法、看到成果的感受），最后点明感悟（帮助他人带来快乐）和积极影响（坚持做善事）；3. 语言调整：使用简单复合句，控制词数，确保语法正确，无真实信息。
【答案】One possible version:
A Meaningful Moment in My Life
Life is beautiful and meaningful. As a teenager, I once had a special moment that made me understand how to be a better person.
Last weekend, I took part in a volunteer activity to help clean the community garden. At first, I thought it would be tiring and boring. However, when I saw the garden become clean and elderly neighbours relax happily there, a strong sense of joy filled my heart.
This meaningful moment taught me that helping others can bring true happiness. It also encourages me to be a useful person. From then on, I decide to keep doing small acts of kindness and live a life full of love and meaning.
【知识点】英语书面表达、记叙文写作、话题作文
【点评】本文紧扣主题，要点完整，经历真实具体，感悟积极深刻，语言流畅自然，结构清晰，符合题目各项要求，是一篇优秀的初中生书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5