写作演练＞＞
你们或多或少都有零用钱，但是你们思考过应该怎样理智地花零用钱吗？请根据提示，以“How to spend your pocket money wisely”为题，给出你的合理建议，词数80左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。
② 人称:第二人称。
③ 根据图示信息依次给出你的具体建议。
[写作提纲]
要点描述
第二段 First, make a list ... Write down ...
第三段 Second, help others ... people in need
. do something useful ...
第四段 Third, save as much as you can ... won’t have enough money ...
[妙笔生花]
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
你们或多或少都有零用钱，但是你们思考过应该怎样理智地花零用钱吗？请根据提示，以“How to spend your pocket money wisely”为题，给出你的合理建议，词数80左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。
② 人称:第二人称。
③ 根据图示信息依次给出你的具体建议。
[写作提纲]
要点描述
第二段 First, make a list ... Write down ...
第三段 Second, help others ... people in need
. do something useful ...第四段 Third, save as much as you can ... won’t have enough money ...
[妙笔生花]
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list.
When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited.
Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others.
We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world.
You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can.
If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案：One possible version：
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list. When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited. Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others. We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world. You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can. If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list. When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited. Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others. We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world. You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can. If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
解析：
【分析】
首先审题明确：题目要求以“How to spend your pocket money wisely”为题，写关于理智花零用钱的建议，需使用一般现在时、第二人称，根据给出的写作提纲（三个要点：列清单、帮助他人、存钱）补充内容，开头已给出，需补三段对应三个要点，最后衔接结尾的存钱相关表述，确保内容合理、符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 确定时态与人称：根据提示，采用一般现在时、第二人称，符合题目要求；
2. 处理第一个要点（First）：围绕“列清单”，具体说明拿到零花钱后，写下真正需要的物品及价格再购买，避免盲目消费；
3. 处理第二个要点（Second）：围绕“帮助他人”，说明用零花钱帮助有需要的人做有用的事，传递善意；
4. 处理第三个要点（Third）：围绕“存钱”，说明不要很快花完零花钱，避免急需时无钱可用；
5. 衔接结尾的存钱相关内容，完成整篇作文，确保逻辑连贯、语言通顺。
【答案】
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list. When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited. Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others. We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world. You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can. If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
【知识点】
英语写作、一般现在时、要点式写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，严格按照提纲的三个要点依次展开，时态人称正确，语言简洁明了，符合写作要求，是一篇合格的建议类范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
首先审题明确：题目要求以“How to spend your pocket money wisely”为题，写关于理智花零用钱的建议，需使用一般现在时、第二人称，根据给出的写作提纲（三个要点：列清单、帮助他人、存钱）补充内容，开头已给出，需补三段对应三个要点，最后衔接结尾的存钱相关表述，确保内容合理、符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 确定时态与人称：根据提示，采用一般现在时、第二人称，符合题目要求；
2. 处理第一个要点（First）：围绕“列清单”，具体说明拿到零花钱后，写下真正需要的物品及价格再购买，避免盲目消费；
3. 处理第二个要点（Second）：围绕“帮助他人”，说明用零花钱帮助有需要的人做有用的事，传递善意；
4. 处理第三个要点（Third）：围绕“存钱”，说明不要很快花完零花钱，避免急需时无钱可用；
5. 衔接结尾的存钱相关内容，完成整篇作文，确保逻辑连贯、语言通顺。
【答案】
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list. When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited. Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others. We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world. You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can. If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
【知识点】
英语写作、一般现在时、要点式写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，严格按照提纲的三个要点依次展开，时态人称正确，语言简洁明了，符合写作要求，是一篇合格的建议类范文。
【难度系数】
0.3