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假如你最喜欢的艺术形式是英文电影,请根据表格内容,写一篇100词左右的英语短文。

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[思路点拨]
① 体裁:说明文。② 时态:一般现在时。
③ 人称:以第一人称为主。④ 首先说明自己最喜欢英文电影,其次重点陈述喜欢英文电影的理由,最后叙述存在的问题及希望。
[写作提纲]

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假如你最喜欢的艺术形式是英文电影,请根据表格内容,写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
(续表)
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:说明文。② 时态:一般现在时。
③ 人称:以第一人称为主。④ 首先说明自己最喜欢英文电影,其次重点陈述喜欢英文电影的理由,最后叙述存在的问题及希望。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案:One possible version:
Of all the art forms, I like films best, especially English films. I can learn a lot from them.
Firstly, I can learn many English words, and practise listening and speaking skills by watching English films. Secondly, a number of English films are educational. Thirdly, I like some famous actors in the films.
But I also have some problems. As a Grade 9 student, I have a lot of things to do every day, so I don't have time to see the films. What's more, I can't achieve a balance between study and hobbies.
In my spare time, I hope I can do something I like. Of course I must do well in all my subjects at school.
Of all the art forms, I like films best, especially English films. I can learn a lot from them.
Firstly, I can learn many English words, and practise listening and speaking skills by watching English films. Secondly, a number of English films are educational. Thirdly, I like some famous actors in the films.
But I also have some problems. As a Grade 9 student, I have a lot of things to do every day, so I don't have time to see the films. What's more, I can't achieve a balance between study and hobbies.
In my spare time, I hope I can do something I like. Of course I must do well in all my subjects at school.
解析:
【分析】本题要求写一篇100词左右的英语说明文,需遵循一般现在时、第一人称的要求,结构分为四部分:①开篇点明最喜欢的艺术形式是英文电影;②分点说明喜欢英文电影的理由(学习英语技能、影片有教育意义、喜爱片中演员);③阐述存在的问题(学业繁忙无时间、难平衡学习与爱好);④表达希望(兼顾学业与爱好)。写作时需紧扣提纲,语言通顺,符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】根据上述思路,先总起说明喜好,再用“Firstly/Secondly/Thirdly”分述理由,接着用“But”引出问题,最后用“In my spare time”表达希望,确保词数达标,时态正确,人称统一。
【答案】Of all the art forms, I like films best, especially English films. I can learn a lot from them. Firstly, I can learn many English words, and practise listening and speaking skills by watching English films. Secondly, a number of English films are educational. Thirdly, I like some famous actors in the films. But I also have some problems. As a Grade 9 student, I have a lot of things to do every day, so I don't have time to see the films. What's more, I can't achieve a balance between study and hobbies. In my spare time, I hope I can do something I like. Of course I must do well in all my subjects at school.
【知识点】英语说明文写作、一般现在时、英语写作逻辑
【点评】本篇短文紧扣题目要求,结构清晰,层次分明,内容贴合学生身份,语言流畅,符合英语写作规范,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】根据上述思路,先总起说明喜好,再用“Firstly/Secondly/Thirdly”分述理由,接着用“But”引出问题,最后用“In my spare time”表达希望,确保词数达标,时态正确,人称统一。
【答案】Of all the art forms, I like films best, especially English films. I can learn a lot from them. Firstly, I can learn many English words, and practise listening and speaking skills by watching English films. Secondly, a number of English films are educational. Thirdly, I like some famous actors in the films. But I also have some problems. As a Grade 9 student, I have a lot of things to do every day, so I don't have time to see the films. What's more, I can't achieve a balance between study and hobbies. In my spare time, I hope I can do something I like. Of course I must do well in all my subjects at school.
【知识点】英语说明文写作、一般现在时、英语写作逻辑
【点评】本篇短文紧扣题目要求,结构清晰,层次分明,内容贴合学生身份,语言流畅,符合英语写作规范,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.7