素材积累 ＞＞
[开头句]
1. It was Friday evening, but Tim still didn't get home as usual. （场景引入,下同）
2. A surprising kidnapping case happened in the neighbourhood last Friday.
3. If you like short stories, maybe you have read O. Henry. （主题引入）
[中间句]
1. In this story, Johnsy and Sue are two best friends who share the same hobbies. （情节介绍）
2. His parents had to ask the police for help to save their son. （情节推进,下同）
3. The man hid Tim secretly and refused to show his whereabouts.
[结尾句]
1. In the end, the police caught the strong man and Tim was saved. （案件结局,下同）
2. Tim returned home safely, and his parents felt relaxed and thankful.
3. It makes me want to write novels myself! （感悟总结）
[名言警句]
1. A room without books is like a body without a soul.
一屋无书,犹如躯体无魂。
2. Reading brings us unknown friends.
阅读为我们带来素未谋面的朋友。
写作演练 ＞＞
根据以下提示展开合理想象,用英语写一个侦探故事,100词左右。
提示: 1. Tim, didn't get home, Friday evening; 2. strong man, kidnapping case; 3. ¥50,000, get their son back...
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:记叙文。② 时态:以一般过去时为主。③ 人称:以第三人称为主。④ 首先交代案件的受害者及案件发生的梗概,再写警察破案的过程,最后写案件的结局,100词左右。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
[开头句]
1. It was Friday evening, but Tim still didn't get home as usual. （场景引入,下同）
2. A surprising kidnapping case happened in the neighbourhood last Friday.
3. If you like short stories, maybe you have read O. Henry. （主题引入）
[中间句]
1. In this story, Johnsy and Sue are two best friends who share the same hobbies. （情节介绍）
2. His parents had to ask the police for help to save their son. （情节推进,下同）
3. The man hid Tim secretly and refused to show his whereabouts.
[结尾句]
1. In the end, the police caught the strong man and Tim was saved. （案件结局,下同）
2. Tim returned home safely, and his parents felt relaxed and thankful.
3. It makes me want to write novels myself! （感悟总结）
[名言警句]
1. A room without books is like a body without a soul.
一屋无书,犹如躯体无魂。
2. Reading brings us unknown friends.
阅读为我们带来素未谋面的朋友。
写作演练 ＞＞
根据以下提示展开合理想象,用英语写一个侦探故事,100词左右。
提示: 1. Tim, didn't get home, Friday evening; 2. strong man, kidnapping case; 3. ¥50,000, get their son back...
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:记叙文。② 时态:以一般过去时为主。③ 人称:以第三人称为主。④ 首先交代案件的受害者及案件发生的梗概,再写警察破案的过程,最后写案件的结局,100词左右。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Tim didn't get home after school last Friday evening. His parents were very worried about him and reported it to the police. They were told that Tim left with a strong man that afternoon. The police thought it was a kidnapping case.
At about 5:00 p. m. last Saturday, a man called Tim's parents and asked them to give him ¥50,000 to get their son back. They pretended to agree with him and then told the police about this at once. At about 10:00 a. m. yesterday, the police caught the kidnapper successfully when he came to get the money.
At last, Tim was saved. His parents were very grateful to the police.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案：写作专训
One possible version:
Tim didn't get home after school last Friday evening. His parents were very worried about him and reported it to the police. They were told that Tim left with a strong man that afternoon. The police thought it was a kidnapping case.
At about 5:00 p. m. last Saturday, a man called Tim's parents and asked them to give him ¥50,000 to get their son back. They pretended to agree with him and then told the police about this at once. At about 10:00 a. m. yesterday, the police caught the kidnapper successfully when he came to get the money.
At last, Tim was saved. His parents were very grateful to the police.
One possible version:
Tim didn't get home after school last Friday evening. His parents were very worried about him and reported it to the police. They were told that Tim left with a strong man that afternoon. The police thought it was a kidnapping case.
At about 5:00 p. m. last Saturday, a man called Tim's parents and asked them to give him ¥50,000 to get their son back. They pretended to agree with him and then told the police about this at once. At about 10:00 a. m. yesterday, the police caught the kidnapper successfully when he came to get the money.
At last, Tim was saved. His parents were very grateful to the police.
解析：
【分析】
首先明确体裁为英语记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主，人称用第三人称。写作需按“案件背景→破案过程→案件结局”的逻辑展开：第一步，交代核心事件Tim周五晚上未回家，父母报警后确认是绑架案；第二步，结合提示中“壮汉索要5万赎金”的内容，写绑匪联系父母，父母假装同意并报警；第三步，写警察抓捕绑匪的过程；最后交代Tim获救的结局，确保内容连贯，涵盖所有提示要点，控制在100词左右。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开头：点明Tim周五晚上未回家，父母担心并报警，初步判断为绑架案；
2. 中间：描述绑匪（壮汉）联系父母索要5万元赎金，父母假装答应后立即告知警方；
3. 结尾：写警方在绑匪取钱时将其抓获，Tim成功获救，父母感谢警方。
注意使用一般过去时，语言简洁，逻辑清晰，符合100词左右的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Tim didn't get home after school last Friday evening. His parents were very worried about him and reported it to the police. They were told that Tim left with a strong man that afternoon. The police thought it was a kidnapping case.
At about 5:00 p. m. last Saturday, a man called Tim's parents and asked them to give him ¥50,000 to get their son back. They pretended to agree with him and then told the police about this at once. At about 10:00 a. m. yesterday, the police caught the kidnapper successfully when he came to get the money.
At last, Tim was saved. His parents were very grateful to the police.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用
【点评】
该作文严格遵循写作要求，逻辑清晰，完整涵盖所有提示要点，时态运用准确，语言简洁流畅，符合100词左右的篇幅要求，成功完成了侦探故事的写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.3
首先明确体裁为英语记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主，人称用第三人称。写作需按“案件背景→破案过程→案件结局”的逻辑展开：第一步，交代核心事件Tim周五晚上未回家，父母报警后确认是绑架案；第二步，结合提示中“壮汉索要5万赎金”的内容，写绑匪联系父母，父母假装同意并报警；第三步，写警察抓捕绑匪的过程；最后交代Tim获救的结局，确保内容连贯，涵盖所有提示要点，控制在100词左右。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开头：点明Tim周五晚上未回家，父母担心并报警，初步判断为绑架案；
2. 中间：描述绑匪（壮汉）联系父母索要5万元赎金，父母假装答应后立即告知警方；
3. 结尾：写警方在绑匪取钱时将其抓获，Tim成功获救，父母感谢警方。
注意使用一般过去时，语言简洁，逻辑清晰，符合100词左右的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Tim didn't get home after school last Friday evening. His parents were very worried about him and reported it to the police. They were told that Tim left with a strong man that afternoon. The police thought it was a kidnapping case.
At about 5:00 p. m. last Saturday, a man called Tim's parents and asked them to give him ¥50,000 to get their son back. They pretended to agree with him and then told the police about this at once. At about 10:00 a. m. yesterday, the police caught the kidnapper successfully when he came to get the money.
At last, Tim was saved. His parents were very grateful to the police.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用
【点评】
该作文严格遵循写作要求，逻辑清晰，完整涵盖所有提示要点，时态运用准确，语言简洁流畅，符合100词左右的篇幅要求，成功完成了侦探故事的写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.3