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假设你是李平,请根据下面的提示,写一封英语推荐信,向吴老师推荐你们班同学高飞为“阳光少年”,100词左右。

[思路点拨]
① 体裁:应用文。② 时态:一般现在时。③ 人称:以第三人称为主。④ 首先指出推荐信的目的,其次重点介绍推荐此人的原因,最后再次表达心愿。
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[妙笔生花]
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假设你是李平,请根据下面的提示,写一封英语推荐信,向吴老师推荐你们班同学高飞为“阳光少年”,100词左右。
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:应用文。② 时态:一般现在时。③ 人称:以第三人称为主。④ 首先指出推荐信的目的,其次重点介绍推荐此人的原因,最后再次表达心愿。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear Mr Wu,
I am writing to recommend Gao Fei as the Sunshine Teenager of our school.
He is a kind boy who gets on well with others. He is helpful too. He is ready to offer help to others. He usually goes to the nursing home to read some newspapers to the old people.
Besides, he isn't afraid of difficulties. Whenever he meets troubles, he tries to deal with them.
He not only works hard but also likes reading.
Also, he is so outgoing that he takes an active part in all kinds of school activities, such as playing football with classmates and joining lots of clubs.
I think Gao Fei is the most suitable person to be the Sunshine Teenager.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案:One possible version:
Dear Mr Wu,
I am writing to recommend Gao Fei as the Sunshine Teenager of our school.
He is a kind boy who gets on well with others. He is helpful too. He is ready to offer help to others. He usually goes to the nursing home to read some newspapers to the old people. Besides, he isn't afraid of difficulties. Whenever he meets troubles, he tries to deal with them. He not only works hard but also likes reading. Also, he is so outgoing that he takes an active part in all kinds of school activities, such as playing football with classmates and joining lots of clubs.
I think Gao Fei is the most suitable person to be the Sunshine Teenager.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
Dear Mr Wu,
I am writing to recommend Gao Fei as the Sunshine Teenager of our school.
He is a kind boy who gets on well with others. He is helpful too. He is ready to offer help to others. He usually goes to the nursing home to read some newspapers to the old people. Besides, he isn't afraid of difficulties. Whenever he meets troubles, he tries to deal with them. He not only works hard but also likes reading. Also, he is so outgoing that he takes an active part in all kinds of school activities, such as playing football with classmates and joining lots of clubs.
I think Gao Fei is the most suitable person to be the Sunshine Teenager.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
解析:
【分析】
这是一道英语应用文写作题,要求以李平的身份给吴老师写推荐信,推荐高飞为“阳光少年”。解题思路:1. 明确体裁为推荐信,时态用一般现在时,以第三人称介绍推荐对象;2. 正文分三部分:开头点明写信目的(推荐高飞),中间重点阐述推荐理由(结合具体事例:善良助人、关爱老人、勇于克服困难、努力学习、积极参与校园活动),结尾再次表达推荐心愿;3. 注意书信格式,控制词数在100词左右,语言通顺准确。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 遵循书信格式:开头称呼Dear Mr Wu,结尾署名Yours sincerely, Li Ping;2. 开头直接点明写信目的:I am writing to recommend Gao Fei as the Sunshine Teenager of our school.;3. 中间主体用具体事例说明推荐理由:① 性格善良乐于助人,如去养老院给老人读报;② 面对困难不退缩,努力克服;③ 学习努力、爱阅读,且外向积极参加各类校园活动(如踢足球、参加社团);4. 结尾总结,再次表达推荐意愿:I think Gao Fei is the most suitable person to be the Sunshine Teenager.;5. 使用合适连接词(besides, whenever等),确保语句连贯,符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mr Wu,
I am writing to recommend Gao Fei as the Sunshine Teenager of our school.
He is a kind boy who gets on well with others. He is helpful too. He is ready to offer help to others. He usually goes to the nursing home to read some newspapers to the old people. Besides, he isn't afraid of difficulties. Whenever he meets troubles, he tries to deal with them. He not only works hard but also likes reading. Also, he is so outgoing that he takes an active part in all kinds of school activities, such as playing football with classmates and joining lots of clubs.
I think Gao Fei is the most suitable person to be the Sunshine Teenager.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、书信格式
【点评】
该作文符合题目要求,结构清晰,理由充分且有具体事例支撑,语言流畅自然,准确运用了一般现在时和合适的连接词,完成了推荐任务,是一篇优秀的英语推荐信。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一道英语应用文写作题,要求以李平的身份给吴老师写推荐信,推荐高飞为“阳光少年”。解题思路:1. 明确体裁为推荐信,时态用一般现在时,以第三人称介绍推荐对象;2. 正文分三部分:开头点明写信目的(推荐高飞),中间重点阐述推荐理由(结合具体事例:善良助人、关爱老人、勇于克服困难、努力学习、积极参与校园活动),结尾再次表达推荐心愿;3. 注意书信格式,控制词数在100词左右,语言通顺准确。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 遵循书信格式:开头称呼Dear Mr Wu,结尾署名Yours sincerely, Li Ping;2. 开头直接点明写信目的:I am writing to recommend Gao Fei as the Sunshine Teenager of our school.;3. 中间主体用具体事例说明推荐理由:① 性格善良乐于助人,如去养老院给老人读报;② 面对困难不退缩,努力克服;③ 学习努力、爱阅读,且外向积极参加各类校园活动(如踢足球、参加社团);4. 结尾总结,再次表达推荐意愿:I think Gao Fei is the most suitable person to be the Sunshine Teenager.;5. 使用合适连接词(besides, whenever等),确保语句连贯,符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mr Wu,
I am writing to recommend Gao Fei as the Sunshine Teenager of our school.
He is a kind boy who gets on well with others. He is helpful too. He is ready to offer help to others. He usually goes to the nursing home to read some newspapers to the old people. Besides, he isn't afraid of difficulties. Whenever he meets troubles, he tries to deal with them. He not only works hard but also likes reading. Also, he is so outgoing that he takes an active part in all kinds of school activities, such as playing football with classmates and joining lots of clubs.
I think Gao Fei is the most suitable person to be the Sunshine Teenager.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、书信格式
【点评】
该作文符合题目要求,结构清晰,理由充分且有具体事例支撑,语言流畅自然,准确运用了一般现在时和合适的连接词,完成了推荐任务,是一篇优秀的英语推荐信。
【难度系数】
0.6