写作演练＞＞
假设你是刘老师，你的学生王圆现在遇到了困难，他写信给你，希望你给他提供一些建议。请你根据表格中的信息给他写一封90词左右的回信。
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:应用文。② 时态:一般现在时。③ 人称:以第二人称为主。④ 首先描述问题，然后提出建议来解决问题，最后表达自己的希望。在写作中要注意表格中的信息，对省略号部分须作适当的补充。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
假设你是刘老师，你的学生王圆现在遇到了困难，他写信给你，希望你给他提供一些建议。请你根据表格中的信息给他写一封90词左右的回信。
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:应用文。② 时态:一般现在时。③ 人称:以第二人称为主。④ 首先描述问题，然后提出建议来解决问题，最后表达自己的希望。在写作中要注意表格中的信息，对省略号部分须作适当的补充。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
One possible version:
Dear Wang Yuan,
Dear Wang Yuan,
Thank you very much for your letter.
You say you have many hobbies and that you are often busy. You can't achieve a balance between schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not choose your hobbies according to the spare time you have?
You think that your parents are strict with you. You feel stressed. You want to get high marks in exams. I think you should talk to your parents about your stress. Make a list of all the homework and do part of it at school.
You are worried about your weight. Perhaps you should eat fewer snacks and do more exercise.
I hope you'll think my advice is worth taking.
Best wishes,
Mr Liu
Mr Liu
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
答案：写作专训
One possible version:
Dear Wang Yuan,
Thank you very much for your letter.
You say you have many hobbies and that you are often busy. You can't achieve a balance between schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not choose your hobbies according to the spare time you have?
You think that your parents are strict with you. You feel stressed. You want to get high marks in exams. I think you should talk to your parents about your stress. Make a list of all the homework and do part of it at school.
You are worried about your weight. Perhaps you should eat fewer snacks and do more exercise.
I hope you'll think my advice is worth taking.
Best wishes,
Mr Liu
One possible version:
Dear Wang Yuan,
Thank you very much for your letter.
You say you have many hobbies and that you are often busy. You can't achieve a balance between schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not choose your hobbies according to the spare time you have?
You think that your parents are strict with you. You feel stressed. You want to get high marks in exams. I think you should talk to your parents about your stress. Make a list of all the homework and do part of it at school.
You are worried about your weight. Perhaps you should eat fewer snacks and do more exercise.
I hope you'll think my advice is worth taking.
Best wishes,
Mr Liu
解析：
【分析】
本题是英语应用文书信写作题，身份为刘老师，收信人是学生王圆。解题思路：1. 遵循标准书信格式（称呼、正文、结尾、署名）；2. 先回应来信，再针对王圆提出的三个核心问题（学业与爱好失衡、父母严格带来的压力、体重问题）逐一给出合理建议；3. 时态采用一般现在时，以第二人称为主，补充细节使内容连贯，控制词数在90左右，最后表达对王圆的期望。
【解析】
1. 确定书信格式：开头用称呼Dear Wang Yuan，结尾用Best wishes及署名Mr Liu；2. 回应来信：Thank you very much for your letter.；3. 针对问题提建议：① 学业与爱好失衡：建议根据空余时间选择爱好；② 父母严格致压力大：建议和父母沟通压力，在学校完成部分作业；③ 体重问题：建议少吃零食、多运动；4. 收尾表达希望：I hope you'll think my advice is worth taking.；5. 检查时态、人称及词数，确保符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Wang Yuan,
Thank you very much for your letter.
You say you have many hobbies and that you are often busy. You can't achieve a balance between schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not choose your hobbies according to the spare time you have?
You think that your parents are strict with you. You feel stressed. You want to get high marks in exams. I think you should talk to your parents about your stress. Make a list of all the homework and do part of it at school.
You are worried about your weight. Perhaps you should eat fewer snacks and do more exercise.
I hope you'll think my advice is worth taking.
Best wishes,
Mr Liu
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类表达、应用文格式
【点评】
本题贴合学生生活实际，考察书信格式掌握、问题分析与建议表达能力，结构清晰，要求明确，能有效检验学生的英语应用文写作水平。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语应用文书信写作题，身份为刘老师，收信人是学生王圆。解题思路：1. 遵循标准书信格式（称呼、正文、结尾、署名）；2. 先回应来信，再针对王圆提出的三个核心问题（学业与爱好失衡、父母严格带来的压力、体重问题）逐一给出合理建议；3. 时态采用一般现在时，以第二人称为主，补充细节使内容连贯，控制词数在90左右，最后表达对王圆的期望。
【解析】
1. 确定书信格式：开头用称呼Dear Wang Yuan，结尾用Best wishes及署名Mr Liu；2. 回应来信：Thank you very much for your letter.；3. 针对问题提建议：① 学业与爱好失衡：建议根据空余时间选择爱好；② 父母严格致压力大：建议和父母沟通压力，在学校完成部分作业；③ 体重问题：建议少吃零食、多运动；4. 收尾表达希望：I hope you'll think my advice is worth taking.；5. 检查时态、人称及词数，确保符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Wang Yuan,
Thank you very much for your letter.
You say you have many hobbies and that you are often busy. You can't achieve a balance between schoolwork and your hobbies. Why not choose your hobbies according to the spare time you have?
You think that your parents are strict with you. You feel stressed. You want to get high marks in exams. I think you should talk to your parents about your stress. Make a list of all the homework and do part of it at school.
You are worried about your weight. Perhaps you should eat fewer snacks and do more exercise.
I hope you'll think my advice is worth taking.
Best wishes,
Mr Liu
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类表达、应用文格式
【点评】
本题贴合学生生活实际，考察书信格式掌握、问题分析与建议表达能力，结构清晰，要求明确，能有效检验学生的英语应用文写作水平。
【难度系数】
0.5