写作演练＞＞
成长是生命的主旋律。生命中总有一些对我们帮助很大、影响至深的人。最近，我校电视台将举办主题为“The person who has influenced me most”的英语演讲比赛。谁是对你影响最大的人？请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参
加比赛，词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:演讲稿。② 时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。③ 人称:以第三人称为主。
④ 首先介绍对我们来说影响至深的人物,接着介绍其长相、性格品质和事迹,最后点明对自己的影响。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
The person who has influenced me most
Good afternoon, everyone! It's a great honor for me to speak here.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
成长是生命的主旋律。生命中总有一些对我们帮助很大、影响至深的人。最近，我校电视台将举办主题为“The person who has influenced me most”的英语演讲比赛。谁是对你影响最大的人？请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参
加比赛，词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:演讲稿。② 时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。③ 人称:以第三人称为主。
④ 首先介绍对我们来说影响至深的人物,接着介绍其长相、性格品质和事迹,最后点明对自己的影响。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
The person who has influenced me most
Good afternoon, everyone! It's a great honor for me to speak here.
In my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the person who has influenced me most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful. She has long hair. And she is kind. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice.
I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam. I was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案：One possible version:
The person who has influenced me most
Good afternoon, everyone! It's a great honor for me to speak here.
In my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the person who has influenced me most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful. She has long hair. And she is kind. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice.
I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam. I was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
The person who has influenced me most
Good afternoon, everyone! It's a great honor for me to speak here.
In my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the person who has influenced me most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful. She has long hair. And she is kind. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice.
I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam. I was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
解析：
【分析】本题为英语演讲稿写作题，主题是“对自己影响最大的人”，要求按照“介绍核心人物→描述其外貌、性格与事迹→点明对自己的影响”的思路写作，时态以一般现在时（介绍、影响）和一般过去时（具体事例）为主，人称以第三人称为主，词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，需紧扣主题，内容具体，情感真实。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 确定核心人物（如英语老师Miss Lee），点明其是影响最大的人；2. 描述人物外貌（long hair）与性格（kind）；3. 列举具体事例（如考试失利时老师鼓励、提供学习方法，帮助自己进步）；4. 点明人物对自己的影响（感恩，助力未来发展）；5. 语言需符合演讲稿亲切正式的风格，控制词数，确保时态正确、语句通顺。
【答案】One possible version:
The person who has influenced me most
Good afternoon, everyone! It's a great honor for me to speak here.
In my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the person who has influenced me most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful. She has long hair. And she is kind. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice.
I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam. I was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
【知识点】英语演讲稿写作、人物介绍类书面表达、时态运用
【点评】本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，按照给定思路展开，事例具体生动，情感真挚，语言流畅自然，符合演讲稿的要求，准确表达了对老师的感激与敬意，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 确定核心人物（如英语老师Miss Lee），点明其是影响最大的人；2. 描述人物外貌（long hair）与性格（kind）；3. 列举具体事例（如考试失利时老师鼓励、提供学习方法，帮助自己进步）；4. 点明人物对自己的影响（感恩，助力未来发展）；5. 语言需符合演讲稿亲切正式的风格，控制词数，确保时态正确、语句通顺。
【答案】One possible version:
The person who has influenced me most
Good afternoon, everyone! It's a great honor for me to speak here.
In my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the person who has influenced me most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful. She has long hair. And she is kind. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice.
I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam. I was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
That's all for my speech. Thank you!
【知识点】英语演讲稿写作、人物介绍类书面表达、时态运用
【点评】本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，按照给定思路展开，事例具体生动，情感真挚，语言流畅自然，符合演讲稿的要求，准确表达了对老师的感激与敬意，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6