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假设你是李兵,你校试行在课间播放音乐的方案。你们班同学对此进行了讨论,看法不一。大多数同学赞同,而部分同学反对。请你根据表格中所提供的信息,给你们的校长写一封信介绍大家的观点,同时谈谈自己的看法。

[思路点拨]
① 体裁:应用文;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 人称:以第三人称为主;④ 首先介绍赞同者的观点及原因,然后介绍反对者的观点及原因,最后陈述自己的观点。
[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]
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假设你是李兵,你校试行在课间播放音乐的方案。你们班同学对此进行了讨论,看法不一。大多数同学赞同,而部分同学反对。请你根据表格中所提供的信息,给你们的校长写一封信介绍大家的观点,同时谈谈自己的看法。
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:应用文;② 时态:一般现在时;③ 人称:以第三人称为主;④ 首先介绍赞同者的观点及原因,然后介绍反对者的观点及原因,最后陈述自己的观点。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
One possible version:
Dear Headmaster,
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.
Most students agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
However, some students disagree. They doubt whether they can get expected results by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, some students are still lost in music in class, which has a bad effect on students.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I disagree.
Yours sincerely,
Li Bing
Yours sincerely,
Li Bing
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案:One possible version:
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.
Most students agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
However, some students disagree. They doubt whether they can get expected results by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, some students are still lost in music in class, which has a bad effect on students.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I disagree.
Yours sincerely,
Li Bing
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.
Most students agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
However, some students disagree. They doubt whether they can get expected results by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, some students are still lost in music in class, which has a bad effect on students.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I disagree.
Yours sincerely,
Li Bing
解析:
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题,要求以李兵的身份给校长写信,介绍班级对课间播放音乐方案的不同观点并阐述自身看法。解题思路:首先确定书信格式(称呼、正文、落款);其次分三部分写作:赞同者的观点及原因、反对者的观点及原因、自己的观点;最后注意时态为一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主,符合题目要求。
【解析】
1. 开头点明写信目的:说明班级就课间播放音乐方案展开讨论,所有同学都表达了观点;
2. 阐述赞同者的观点:听音乐能让人开心、帮助放松、提高学习效率;
3. 阐述反对者的观点:课间时间短,听音乐达不到预期效果,部分同学上课仍沉浸在音乐中影响学习;
4. 表达自身观点:需要安静而非音乐带来的噪音,因此反对课间播放音乐;
5. 遵循英语书信格式,使用正确的时态和人称,语言流畅自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.
Most students agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
However, some students disagree. They doubt whether they can get expected results by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, some students are still lost in music in class, which has a bad effect on students.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I disagree.
Yours sincerely,
Li Bing
【知识点】
英语应用文写作,书信格式,观点表达
【点评】
范文符合题目要求,结构清晰,分点阐述不同观点,书信格式规范,语言流畅准确,时态和人称使用恰当,完整完成了介绍班级观点及表达自身看法的任务。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作题,要求以李兵的身份给校长写信,介绍班级对课间播放音乐方案的不同观点并阐述自身看法。解题思路:首先确定书信格式(称呼、正文、落款);其次分三部分写作:赞同者的观点及原因、反对者的观点及原因、自己的观点;最后注意时态为一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主,符合题目要求。
【解析】
1. 开头点明写信目的:说明班级就课间播放音乐方案展开讨论,所有同学都表达了观点;
2. 阐述赞同者的观点:听音乐能让人开心、帮助放松、提高学习效率;
3. 阐述反对者的观点:课间时间短,听音乐达不到预期效果,部分同学上课仍沉浸在音乐中影响学习;
4. 表达自身观点:需要安静而非音乐带来的噪音,因此反对课间播放音乐;
5. 遵循英语书信格式,使用正确的时态和人称,语言流畅自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Headmaster,
We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.
Most students agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more, music can help them improve the study efficiency.
However, some students disagree. They doubt whether they can get expected results by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, some students are still lost in music in class, which has a bad effect on students.
I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by music. So I disagree.
Yours sincerely,
Li Bing
【知识点】
英语应用文写作,书信格式,观点表达
【点评】
范文符合题目要求,结构清晰,分点阐述不同观点,书信格式规范,语言流畅准确,时态和人称使用恰当,完整完成了介绍班级观点及表达自身看法的任务。
【难度系数】
0.5