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英语课上,老师让同学们通过查询百科全书写一篇英语短文介绍一位名人。假如你对巴勃罗·毕加索(Pablo Picasso)很感兴趣,下面表格中是你在百科全书(encyclopedia)上找到的有关他的信息。请你根据表格中的提示内容,写一篇英语短文介绍巴勃罗·毕加索。
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[思路点拨]
① 体裁:说明文;② 时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主;③ 人称:以第三人称为主;④ 首先引入主题,然后详细介绍毕加索的生平,最后表达个人观点和理解。
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英语课上,老师让同学们通过查询百科全书写一篇英语短文介绍一位名人。假如你对巴勃罗·毕加索(Pablo Picasso)很感兴趣,下面表格中是你在百科全书(encyclopedia)上找到的有关他的信息。请你根据表格中的提示内容,写一篇英语短文介绍巴勃罗·毕加索。
提示内容:
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:说明文;② 时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主;③ 人称:以第三人称为主;④ 首先引入主题,然后详细介绍毕加索的生平,最后表达个人观点和理解。
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[妙笔生花]
I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him.
Pablo Picasso was a famous Spanish painter and sculptor. He was born on October 25th, 1881.
He was very interested in drawing when he was a little boy. With the help of his father, he showed great talent for drawing.
He became a painter when he was only thirteen.
He created lots of wonderful works of art in his life.
I think Pablo Picasso is a great person. We all should learn from him and try our best to achieve our dreams.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案:One possible version:
I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him.
Pablo Picasso was a famous Spanish painter and sculptor. He was born on October 25th, 1881. He was very interested in drawing when he was a little boy. With the help of his father, he showed great talent for drawing. He became a painter when he was only thirteen.
He created lots of wonderful works of art in his life. I think Pablo Picasso is a great person. We all should learn from him and try our best to achieve our dreams.
I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him.
Pablo Picasso was a famous Spanish painter and sculptor. He was born on October 25th, 1881. He was very interested in drawing when he was a little boy. With the help of his father, he showed great talent for drawing. He became a painter when he was only thirteen.
He created lots of wonderful works of art in his life. I think Pablo Picasso is a great person. We all should learn from him and try our best to achieve our dreams.
解析:
【分析】
首先明确写作要求:体裁为说明文,时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。写作思路分四步:1. 开头引入主题,说明从百科全书中了解到毕加索,引出介绍;2. 介绍毕加索的基本信息:身份(西班牙著名画家、雕塑家)、出生日期;3. 讲述他的绘画天赋与成长经历:从小热爱绘画,在父亲帮助下展现绘画天赋,13岁成为画家;4. 提及他的艺术成就,最后表达个人观点,评价他的伟大并传递学习感悟。
【解析】
按照写作思路组织内容:
1. 开头:说明从百科了解毕加索,引出介绍;
2. 基本信息:介绍毕加索是西班牙著名画家、雕塑家,出生日期;
3. 成长经历:讲述他从小对绘画的兴趣,父亲的帮助,13岁成为画家;
4. 艺术成就与个人观点:提及他创作大量优秀作品,评价他伟大,表达向他学习追梦的感悟。
【答案】
One possible version:
I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him.
Pablo Picasso was a famous Spanish painter and sculptor. He was born on October 25th, 1881. He was very interested in drawing when he was a little boy. With the help of his father, he showed great talent for drawing. He became a painter when he was only thirteen.
He created lots of wonderful works of art in his life. I think Pablo Picasso is a great person. We all should learn from him and try our best to achieve our dreams.
【知识点】
英语人物介绍写作、时态运用、说明文写作
【点评】
该作文符合题目要求,结构清晰,层次分明,涵盖了毕加索的核心信息,语言准确流畅,是一篇规范的人物介绍类英语短文,适合学生学习参考。
【难度系数】
0.3
首先明确写作要求:体裁为说明文,时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。写作思路分四步:1. 开头引入主题,说明从百科全书中了解到毕加索,引出介绍;2. 介绍毕加索的基本信息:身份(西班牙著名画家、雕塑家)、出生日期;3. 讲述他的绘画天赋与成长经历:从小热爱绘画,在父亲帮助下展现绘画天赋,13岁成为画家;4. 提及他的艺术成就,最后表达个人观点,评价他的伟大并传递学习感悟。
【解析】
按照写作思路组织内容:
1. 开头:说明从百科了解毕加索,引出介绍;
2. 基本信息:介绍毕加索是西班牙著名画家、雕塑家,出生日期;
3. 成长经历:讲述他从小对绘画的兴趣,父亲的帮助,13岁成为画家;
4. 艺术成就与个人观点:提及他创作大量优秀作品,评价他伟大,表达向他学习追梦的感悟。
【答案】
One possible version:
I read about Pablo Picasso in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him.
Pablo Picasso was a famous Spanish painter and sculptor. He was born on October 25th, 1881. He was very interested in drawing when he was a little boy. With the help of his father, he showed great talent for drawing. He became a painter when he was only thirteen.
He created lots of wonderful works of art in his life. I think Pablo Picasso is a great person. We all should learn from him and try our best to achieve our dreams.
【知识点】
英语人物介绍写作、时态运用、说明文写作
【点评】
该作文符合题目要求,结构清晰,层次分明,涵盖了毕加索的核心信息,语言准确流畅,是一篇规范的人物介绍类英语短文,适合学生学习参考。
【难度系数】
0.3