八、书面表达。（共15分）
某英文网站正在开展以“榜样(role model)”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你心中的这位榜样是谁，他/她做了什么令人钦佩的事情，以及你从他/她身上学到了什么。
提示词语：difficulty，get through，challenge，spirit，never give up
内容提示：• Who is your role model?
• What did he/she do?
• What can you learn from him/her?
某英文网站正在开展以“榜样(role model)”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你心中的这位榜样是谁，他/她做了什么令人钦佩的事情，以及你从他/她身上学到了什么。
提示词语：difficulty，get through，challenge，spirit，never give up
内容提示：• Who is your role model?
• What did he/she do?
• What can you learn from him/her?
答案：One possible version:
I'm glad to talk about my role model.
He is Zhang Shun, an 89-year-old marathon runner. Marathon running is his lifelong dream. For years, Zhang Shun trained every morning in the park, and he filled over 30 notebooks with his running records. Even in his 80s, he still kept running.
In the 2022 Beijing Marathon, he faced difficulties but tried his best to get through the challenges, finally finishing the race.
From him, I can learn that age doesn't matter if we have a dream. The spirit of working hard and never giving up can help us achieve our dreams. Like Zhang, I will keep trying no matter what difficulties I face.
I'm glad to talk about my role model.
He is Zhang Shun, an 89-year-old marathon runner. Marathon running is his lifelong dream. For years, Zhang Shun trained every morning in the park, and he filled over 30 notebooks with his running records. Even in his 80s, he still kept running.
In the 2022 Beijing Marathon, he faced difficulties but tried his best to get through the challenges, finally finishing the race.
From him, I can learn that age doesn't matter if we have a dream. The spirit of working hard and never giving up can help us achieve our dreams. Like Zhang, I will keep trying no matter what difficulties I face.
解析：
【分析】
本题为英语主题征文写作，需围绕“榜样”主题，按要求完成三个核心内容：明确榜样人物、简述其令人钦佩的事迹、说明自身收获。写作时需结合给定提示词语，确保结构清晰、逻辑连贯，符合征文的语言要求。
【解析】
首先确定榜样为89岁马拉松选手张顺，开篇引出话题；接着介绍其身份与长期坚持训练的事迹（多年记录跑步数据，80多岁仍不放弃）；再结合2022北京马拉松的事例，说明他克服困难、挑战自我并完成比赛；最后点明从他身上学到的道理：年龄不影响追梦，努力与永不放弃的精神能助力实现梦想，呼应主题。写作中准确运用提示词语，覆盖所有内容要点，语言通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
I'm glad to talk about my role model.
He is Zhang Shun, an 89-year-old marathon runner. Marathon running is his lifelong dream. For years, Zhang Shun trained every morning in the park, and he filled over 30 notebooks with his running records. Even in his 80s, he still kept running.
In the 2022 Beijing Marathon, he faced difficulties but tried his best to get through the challenges, finally finishing the race.
From him, I can learn that age doesn't matter if we have a dream. The spirit of working hard and never giving up can help us achieve our dreams. Like Zhang, I will keep trying no matter what difficulties I face.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、英语应用文写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰，依次回应了所有内容提示，合理运用给定提示词语，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合征文的正式性要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语主题征文写作，需围绕“榜样”主题，按要求完成三个核心内容：明确榜样人物、简述其令人钦佩的事迹、说明自身收获。写作时需结合给定提示词语，确保结构清晰、逻辑连贯，符合征文的语言要求。
【解析】
首先确定榜样为89岁马拉松选手张顺，开篇引出话题；接着介绍其身份与长期坚持训练的事迹（多年记录跑步数据，80多岁仍不放弃）；再结合2022北京马拉松的事例，说明他克服困难、挑战自我并完成比赛；最后点明从他身上学到的道理：年龄不影响追梦，努力与永不放弃的精神能助力实现梦想，呼应主题。写作中准确运用提示词语，覆盖所有内容要点，语言通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
I'm glad to talk about my role model.
He is Zhang Shun, an 89-year-old marathon runner. Marathon running is his lifelong dream. For years, Zhang Shun trained every morning in the park, and he filled over 30 notebooks with his running records. Even in his 80s, he still kept running.
In the 2022 Beijing Marathon, he faced difficulties but tried his best to get through the challenges, finally finishing the race.
From him, I can learn that age doesn't matter if we have a dream. The spirit of working hard and never giving up can help us achieve our dreams. Like Zhang, I will keep trying no matter what difficulties I face.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、英语应用文写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰，依次回应了所有内容提示，合理运用给定提示词语，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合征文的正式性要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5