八、书面表达。(共10分)
“榜样是看得见的哲理。”黄旭华的事迹鼓舞了无数人坚守初心,踔厉奋发。假设你的学校正在举办一场主题为“The most inspiring person in my heart—Huang Xuhua”的英语演讲比赛,请你根据以下要点提示准备一篇演讲稿,不少于80词(已给出内容不计入总词数)。
提示:1. What did he do? 2. What makes him respectable? 3. How has he inspired you?
Good morning, everyone! Today, I would like to share with you the most inspiring person in my heart—Huang Xuhua,
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
“榜样是看得见的哲理。”黄旭华的事迹鼓舞了无数人坚守初心,踔厉奋发。假设你的学校正在举办一场主题为“The most inspiring person in my heart—Huang Xuhua”的英语演讲比赛,请你根据以下要点提示准备一篇演讲稿,不少于80词(已给出内容不计入总词数)。
提示:1. What did he do? 2. What makes him respectable? 3. How has he inspired you?
Good morning, everyone! Today, I would like to share with you the most inspiring person in my heart—Huang Xuhua,
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
答案:One possible version:
Good morning, everyone! Today, I would like to share with you the most inspiring person in my heart—Huang Xuhua, the father of China's nuclear submarines.
Huang Xuhua was a dedicated scientist who devoted his life to developing China's first nuclear submarine. Despite limited resources, he and his team overcame countless difficulties through perseverance and independent research. Even after success, he continued working to improve technology, winning the Medal of the Republic in 2019.
His selflessness and determination inspire me deeply. He taught me that challenges can be overcome with hard work and courage. His spirit encourages me to pursue my dreams and contribute to our country's future. Whenever I face difficulties, I remember his story and push forward.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
Good morning, everyone! Today, I would like to share with you the most inspiring person in my heart—Huang Xuhua, the father of China's nuclear submarines.
Huang Xuhua was a dedicated scientist who devoted his life to developing China's first nuclear submarine. Despite limited resources, he and his team overcame countless difficulties through perseverance and independent research. Even after success, he continued working to improve technology, winning the Medal of the Republic in 2019.
His selflessness and determination inspire me deeply. He taught me that challenges can be overcome with hard work and courage. His spirit encourages me to pursue my dreams and contribute to our country's future. Whenever I face difficulties, I remember his story and push forward.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
解析:
【分析】
本题要求撰写英语演讲稿,主题为“The most inspiring person in my heart—Huang Xuhua”,需涵盖三个核心要点:黄旭华的事迹、他值得尊敬的原因、他对自己的启发。写作时需先承接开头点明黄旭华的身份,再按要点依次展开,最后结合自身表达感悟,语言要符合演讲正式且真诚的语气,确保词数达标,内容紧扣提示要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,点明黄旭华的身份:中国核潜艇之父;
2. 介绍他的事迹:毕生致力于研发中国第一艘核潜艇,在资源有限的情况下带领团队克服无数困难,坚持自主研究,成功后仍持续改进技术,2019年获共和国勋章;
3. 阐述他值得尊敬的原因:无私奉献、坚定执着;
4. 说明对自己的启发:教会自己用努力和勇气克服挑战,鼓励自己追求梦想、为国家未来做贡献,遇到困难时以他的故事激励自己前进;
5. 收尾呼应演讲格式,表达感谢。
【答案】
Good morning, everyone! Today, I would like to share with you the most inspiring person in my heart—Huang Xuhua, the father of China's nuclear submarines.
Huang Xuhua was a dedicated scientist who devoted his life to developing China's first nuclear submarine. Despite limited resources, he and his team overcame countless difficulties through perseverance and independent research. Even after success, he continued working to improve technology, winning the Medal of the Republic in 2019.
His selflessness and determination inspire me deeply. He taught me that challenges can be overcome with hard work and courage. His spirit encourages me to pursue my dreams and contribute to our country's future. Whenever I face difficulties, I remember his story and push forward.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、人物介绍类书面表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目所有要点,内容具体充实,情感真挚,符合演讲的文体要求,语言流畅自然,准确传达了黄旭华的事迹、品质及对作者的影响,是一篇优秀的演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求撰写英语演讲稿,主题为“The most inspiring person in my heart—Huang Xuhua”,需涵盖三个核心要点:黄旭华的事迹、他值得尊敬的原因、他对自己的启发。写作时需先承接开头点明黄旭华的身份,再按要点依次展开,最后结合自身表达感悟,语言要符合演讲正式且真诚的语气,确保词数达标,内容紧扣提示要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,点明黄旭华的身份:中国核潜艇之父;
2. 介绍他的事迹:毕生致力于研发中国第一艘核潜艇,在资源有限的情况下带领团队克服无数困难,坚持自主研究,成功后仍持续改进技术,2019年获共和国勋章;
3. 阐述他值得尊敬的原因:无私奉献、坚定执着;
4. 说明对自己的启发:教会自己用努力和勇气克服挑战,鼓励自己追求梦想、为国家未来做贡献,遇到困难时以他的故事激励自己前进;
5. 收尾呼应演讲格式,表达感谢。
【答案】
Good morning, everyone! Today, I would like to share with you the most inspiring person in my heart—Huang Xuhua, the father of China's nuclear submarines.
Huang Xuhua was a dedicated scientist who devoted his life to developing China's first nuclear submarine. Despite limited resources, he and his team overcame countless difficulties through perseverance and independent research. Even after success, he continued working to improve technology, winning the Medal of the Republic in 2019.
His selflessness and determination inspire me deeply. He taught me that challenges can be overcome with hard work and courage. His spirit encourages me to pursue my dreams and contribute to our country's future. Whenever I face difficulties, I remember his story and push forward.
That's all. Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、人物介绍类书面表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目所有要点,内容具体充实,情感真挚,符合演讲的文体要求,语言流畅自然,准确传达了黄旭华的事迹、品质及对作者的影响,是一篇优秀的演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.5