八、书面表达。（共15分）
成长路上有荆棘，跨越之后见光芒。你校正在开展“成长故事分享会”英文演讲稿征集活动。请你以“The growing story of a young painter”为题，根据下面表格中的信息，写一篇短文投稿，介绍一位成长者的经历。
注意:1. 短文须包含表格中的信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 词数80～100。
参考词汇：believe in(相信)，clear one’s mind of ...(清除心中的……)
成长路上有荆棘，跨越之后见光芒。你校正在开展“成长故事分享会”英文演讲稿征集活动。请你以“The growing story of a young painter”为题，根据下面表格中的信息，写一篇短文投稿，介绍一位成长者的经历。
注意:1. 短文须包含表格中的信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 词数80～100。
参考词汇：believe in(相信)，clear one’s mind of ...(清除心中的……)
答案：One possible version：
The growing story of a young painter
I would like to talk about a young painter and his growth story.
At first, others laughed at him because they said his paintings were meaningless. He worried a lot and even thought about giving up painting. To cheer himself up, he believed in his own style and kept practising every day. What’s more, he took walks in the park to clear his mind of bad comments.
Now he is a successful painter. His works are so amazing that many people love his paintings. He now knows clearly that holding onto what you love is the key to growth.
I believe we can all learn a lot from his story.
The growing story of a young painter
I would like to talk about a young painter and his growth story.
At first, others laughed at him because they said his paintings were meaningless. He worried a lot and even thought about giving up painting. To cheer himself up, he believed in his own style and kept practising every day. What’s more, he took walks in the park to clear his mind of bad comments.
Now he is a successful painter. His works are so amazing that many people love his paintings. He now knows clearly that holding onto what you love is the key to growth.
I believe we can all learn a lot from his story.
解析：
【分析】本题要求以“The growing story of a young painter”为题写英文短文，需包含表格中三个核心问题：成长中面临的痛苦、解决痛苦的方式、从中获得的感悟，同时要符合词数80～100的要求，不能出现真实姓名和学校名称，需适当补充细节使行文连贯，还要用到给定参考词汇。解题思路是先围绕“年轻画家”的经历对应三个问题组织内容，再用合适的连接词串联，确保语言准确流畅。
【解析】1. 确定短文结构：开头引出主题，介绍年轻画家的成长故事；中间部分依次对应表格问题：①成长的痛苦：他人嘲笑他的画作无意义，他焦虑甚至想放弃；②解决方式：相信自己的绘画风格，坚持每日练习，去公园散步清除负面评价；③收获：成为成功画家，明白坚持热爱是成长的关键；2. 运用参考词汇“believe in”“clear one’s mind of”；3. 控制词数，避免真实信息，使行文连贯自然。
【答案】One possible version：
The growing story of a young painter
I would like to talk about a young painter and his growth story.
At first, others laughed at him because they said his paintings were meaningless. He worried a lot and even thought about giving up painting. To cheer himself up, he believed in his own style and kept practising every day. What’s more, he took walks in the park to clear his mind of bad comments.
Now he is a successful painter. His works are so amazing that many people love his paintings. He now knows clearly that holding onto what you love is the key to growth.
I believe we can all learn a lot from his story.
【知识点】英语书面表达、记叙文写作
【点评】短文紧扣主题，完整涵盖题目要求的所有信息，结构清晰，语言流畅，合理运用参考词汇，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 确定短文结构：开头引出主题，介绍年轻画家的成长故事；中间部分依次对应表格问题：①成长的痛苦：他人嘲笑他的画作无意义，他焦虑甚至想放弃；②解决方式：相信自己的绘画风格，坚持每日练习，去公园散步清除负面评价；③收获：成为成功画家，明白坚持热爱是成长的关键；2. 运用参考词汇“believe in”“clear one’s mind of”；3. 控制词数，避免真实信息，使行文连贯自然。
【答案】One possible version：
The growing story of a young painter
I would like to talk about a young painter and his growth story.
At first, others laughed at him because they said his paintings were meaningless. He worried a lot and even thought about giving up painting. To cheer himself up, he believed in his own style and kept practising every day. What’s more, he took walks in the park to clear his mind of bad comments.
Now he is a successful painter. His works are so amazing that many people love his paintings. He now knows clearly that holding onto what you love is the key to growth.
I believe we can all learn a lot from his story.
【知识点】英语书面表达、记叙文写作
【点评】短文紧扣主题，完整涵盖题目要求的所有信息，结构清晰，语言流畅，合理运用参考词汇，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.5