八、书面表达。(共10分)
假定你是李华,你校与某乡镇希望中学(Hope Middle School)是友好学校,上周五两校英语社团在希望中学举行了共演英文课本剧活动。请你以“An English textbook drama show”为题,为校英文报写一则新闻稿,词数100左右。
内容包括:1. 时间、地点、参与人员。2. 活动过程简介。3. 活动意义。
An English textbook drama show
假定你是李华,你校与某乡镇希望中学(Hope Middle School)是友好学校,上周五两校英语社团在希望中学举行了共演英文课本剧活动。请你以“An English textbook drama show”为题,为校英文报写一则新闻稿,词数100左右。
内容包括:1. 时间、地点、参与人员。2. 活动过程简介。3. 活动意义。
An English textbook drama show
答案:One possible version:
An English textbook drama show
Last Friday, a fantastic English textbook drama show was held on the playground of our sister school, Hope Middle School, with up to 300 teachers and students from the English clubs of the two schools taking part.
The drama show lasted two hours. The members of both clubs performed three short plays of traditional Chinese stories from our textbook, which reflected the good qualities of the Chinese people and our excellent traditional culture. Thanks to the great efforts of all performers and teachers, the 2-hour show was a great success.
At the end of the show, all the people present stood up and cheered for their wonderful performance. We all believe this activity provided a good chance for us to enjoy English plays, improving our English language skills as well as bringing the two schools closer.
An English textbook drama show
Last Friday, a fantastic English textbook drama show was held on the playground of our sister school, Hope Middle School, with up to 300 teachers and students from the English clubs of the two schools taking part.
The drama show lasted two hours. The members of both clubs performed three short plays of traditional Chinese stories from our textbook, which reflected the good qualities of the Chinese people and our excellent traditional culture. Thanks to the great efforts of all performers and teachers, the 2-hour show was a great success.
At the end of the show, all the people present stood up and cheered for their wonderful performance. We all believe this activity provided a good chance for us to enjoy English plays, improving our English language skills as well as bringing the two schools closer.
解析:
【分析】本题要求以李华的身份为校英文报撰写题为“An English textbook drama show”的新闻稿,需涵盖时间地点参与人员、活动过程、活动意义三个核心要点,词数约100词。解题思路:1. 开篇直接点明活动的时间、地点及参与人员,契合新闻稿开篇突出核心信息的特点;2. 中间简述活动时长、表演内容(来自课本的中国传统故事短剧),清晰呈现活动过程;3. 结尾阐述活动的双重意义——提升英语语言技能、促进两校友谊,同时呼应活动成功的结果,确保内容完整且符合要求。
【解析】1. 开篇点明活动基本信息:Last Friday, a fantastic English textbook drama show was held on the playground of our sister school, Hope Middle School, with up to 300 teachers and students from the English clubs of the two schools taking part.
2. 介绍活动过程:The drama show lasted two hours. The members of both clubs performed three short plays of traditional Chinese stories from our textbook, which reflected the good qualities of the Chinese people and our excellent traditional culture. Thanks to the great efforts of all performers and teachers, the 2-hour show was a great success.
3. 说明活动意义:At the end of the show, all the people present stood up and cheered for their wonderful performance. We all believe this activity provided a good chance for us to enjoy English plays, improving our English language skills as well as bringing the two schools closer.
【答案】One possible version:
An English textbook drama show
Last Friday, a fantastic English textbook drama show was held on the playground of our sister school, Hope Middle School, with up to 300 teachers and students from the English clubs of the two schools taking part.
The drama show lasted two hours. The members of both clubs performed three short plays of traditional Chinese stories from our textbook, which reflected the good qualities of the Chinese people and our excellent traditional culture. Thanks to the great efforts of all performers and teachers, the 2-hour show was a great success.
At the end of the show, all the people present stood up and cheered for their wonderful performance. We all believe this activity provided a good chance for us to enjoy English plays, improving our English language skills as well as bringing the two schools closer.
【知识点】英语书面表达、英文新闻稿写作
【点评】该范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖所有内容要点,结构清晰,语言流畅自然,符合新闻稿的正式语体,词数控制恰当,既展现了活动全貌,又点明了活动价值,是一篇符合要求的优秀作品。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 开篇点明活动基本信息:Last Friday, a fantastic English textbook drama show was held on the playground of our sister school, Hope Middle School, with up to 300 teachers and students from the English clubs of the two schools taking part.
2. 介绍活动过程:The drama show lasted two hours. The members of both clubs performed three short plays of traditional Chinese stories from our textbook, which reflected the good qualities of the Chinese people and our excellent traditional culture. Thanks to the great efforts of all performers and teachers, the 2-hour show was a great success.
3. 说明活动意义:At the end of the show, all the people present stood up and cheered for their wonderful performance. We all believe this activity provided a good chance for us to enjoy English plays, improving our English language skills as well as bringing the two schools closer.
【答案】One possible version:
An English textbook drama show
Last Friday, a fantastic English textbook drama show was held on the playground of our sister school, Hope Middle School, with up to 300 teachers and students from the English clubs of the two schools taking part.
The drama show lasted two hours. The members of both clubs performed three short plays of traditional Chinese stories from our textbook, which reflected the good qualities of the Chinese people and our excellent traditional culture. Thanks to the great efforts of all performers and teachers, the 2-hour show was a great success.
At the end of the show, all the people present stood up and cheered for their wonderful performance. We all believe this activity provided a good chance for us to enjoy English plays, improving our English language skills as well as bringing the two schools closer.
【知识点】英语书面表达、英文新闻稿写作
【点评】该范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖所有内容要点,结构清晰,语言流畅自然,符合新闻稿的正式语体,词数控制恰当,既展现了活动全貌,又点明了活动价值,是一篇符合要求的优秀作品。
【难度系数】0.5