八、书面表达。(共10分)
假设你们学校团委为了丰富同学们的课余生活,举行了中美学生书信联谊活动。请你根据下表中的提示内容,介绍你的好友丹尼尔给你的美国笔友。

要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯。
2. 要点必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥。
3. 90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, I'd like to introduce my friend Daniel to you.
假设你们学校团委为了丰富同学们的课余生活,举行了中美学生书信联谊活动。请你根据下表中的提示内容,介绍你的好友丹尼尔给你的美国笔友。
要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯。
2. 要点必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥。
3. 90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, I'd like to introduce my friend Daniel to you.
答案:One possible version:
Hello, I'd like to introduce my friend Daniel to you.
Daniel is a boy of medium height. He has smiling eyes. He always wears a pair of glasses, and that makes him look smart. He has many hobbies. When he is free, he likes listening to classical music because it has a lasting value. He also likes game shows because he can answer most of the questions correctly.
Daniel is brave and helpful. He once offered useful clues to the police and helped them catch a thief. He wants to be a famous actor when he grows up. He hopes he can play a lead role in action films. We think he will make an excellent actor in the future.
Hello, I'd like to introduce my friend Daniel to you.
Daniel is a boy of medium height. He has smiling eyes. He always wears a pair of glasses, and that makes him look smart. He has many hobbies. When he is free, he likes listening to classical music because it has a lasting value. He also likes game shows because he can answer most of the questions correctly.
Daniel is brave and helpful. He once offered useful clues to the police and helped them catch a thief. He wants to be a famous actor when he grows up. He hopes he can play a lead role in action films. We think he will make an excellent actor in the future.
解析:
【分析】本题为英语书信类书面表达题,要求根据给定的表格信息(外貌、爱好、性格、梦想)介绍好友丹尼尔给美国笔友,需覆盖所有要点并适当发挥,保证表达清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯,词数约90词,开头已给出。解题思路:先承接开头,依次介绍丹尼尔的外貌(中等身高、笑眯眯的眼睛,可补充细节如戴眼镜显聪明);再写爱好(选一种音乐类型如古典音乐并说明原因,选一种电视节目类型如游戏节目并说明原因);接着写性格(勇敢、乐于助人,结合具体事例:给警方提供线索帮抓小偷);最后写梦想(成为著名演员,希望在动作片里当主角),适当补充对他的期待,使内容连贯自然。
【解析】按照书信写作规范,结合给定要点展开写作:
1. 外貌:Daniel is a boy of medium height. He has smiling eyes. He always wears a pair of glasses, and that makes him look smart.
2. 爱好:He has many hobbies. When he is free, he likes listening to classical music because it has a lasting value. He also likes game shows because he can answer most of the questions correctly.
3. 性格:Daniel is brave and helpful. He once offered useful clues to the police and helped them catch a thief.
4. 梦想:He wants to be a famous actor when he grows up. He hopes he can play a lead role in action films. We think he will make an excellent actor in the future.
整合后形成符合要求的短文,语法正确,要点齐全,上下文连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
Hello, I'd like to introduce my friend Daniel to you.
Daniel is a boy of medium height. He has smiling eyes. He always wears a pair of glasses, and that makes him look smart. He has many hobbies. When he is free, he likes listening to classical music because it has a lasting value. He also likes game shows because he can answer most of the questions correctly.
Daniel is brave and helpful. He once offered useful clues to the police and helped them catch a thief. He wants to be a famous actor when he grows up. He hopes he can play a lead role in action films. We think he will make an excellent actor in the future.
【知识点】英语书面表达、书信写作、话题词汇运用
【点评】本题考查学生整合信息、运用英语进行书面表达的能力,要求覆盖所有给定要点并适当拓展,符合书信交际语境,难度适中,能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照书信写作规范,结合给定要点展开写作:
1. 外貌:Daniel is a boy of medium height. He has smiling eyes. He always wears a pair of glasses, and that makes him look smart.
2. 爱好:He has many hobbies. When he is free, he likes listening to classical music because it has a lasting value. He also likes game shows because he can answer most of the questions correctly.
3. 性格:Daniel is brave and helpful. He once offered useful clues to the police and helped them catch a thief.
4. 梦想:He wants to be a famous actor when he grows up. He hopes he can play a lead role in action films. We think he will make an excellent actor in the future.
整合后形成符合要求的短文,语法正确,要点齐全,上下文连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
Hello, I'd like to introduce my friend Daniel to you.
Daniel is a boy of medium height. He has smiling eyes. He always wears a pair of glasses, and that makes him look smart. He has many hobbies. When he is free, he likes listening to classical music because it has a lasting value. He also likes game shows because he can answer most of the questions correctly.
Daniel is brave and helpful. He once offered useful clues to the police and helped them catch a thief. He wants to be a famous actor when he grows up. He hopes he can play a lead role in action films. We think he will make an excellent actor in the future.
【知识点】英语书面表达、书信写作、话题词汇运用
【点评】本题考查学生整合信息、运用英语进行书面表达的能力,要求覆盖所有给定要点并适当拓展,符合书信交际语境,难度适中,能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5