(2025·江苏南京建邺区期末)你在学校英文校刊上看到了一篇征稿启事。请根据征稿启事,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Your favourite season at school
Different seasons give us different feelings. We would like you to share your ideas about your favourite season at school. You need to write about:
★What does the school look like in that season?
★What do you often do at school in that season?
★What kind of activity would you like your school to hold in that season?
【注意】1.内容涵盖所有要点,全文连贯通顺。
2.不少于90词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
3.文中不得提及有关学生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
My Favourite Season at School
My favourite season at school is
Your favourite season at school
Different seasons give us different feelings. We would like you to share your ideas about your favourite season at school. You need to write about:
★What does the school look like in that season?
★What do you often do at school in that season?
★What kind of activity would you like your school to hold in that season?
【注意】1.内容涵盖所有要点,全文连贯通顺。
2.不少于90词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
3.文中不得提及有关学生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
My Favourite Season at School
My favourite season at school is
spring. With colourful flowers and green leaves around, our school looks like a beautiful garden. We can always enjoy the fresh air and hear birds sing. In my free time, I often love reading under the trees and relaxing in the warm sunshine. I also like doing sports after school, as the weather is neither too hot nor too cold. I hope a spring sports meeting will be held. Students can both have fun and develop teamwork spirit during different games. Spring, full of life and energy, is my favourite season at school.
答案：One possible version:
My Favourite Season at School
My favourite season at school is spring. With colourful flowers and green leaves around, our school looks like a beautiful garden. We can always enjoy the fresh air and hear birds sing.
In my free time, I often love reading under the trees and relaxing in the warm sunshine. I also like doing sports after school, as the weather is neither too hot nor too cold.
I hope a spring sports meeting will be held. Students can both have fun and develop teamwork spirit during different games.
Spring, full of life and energy, is my favourite season at school.
My Favourite Season at School
My favourite season at school is spring. With colourful flowers and green leaves around, our school looks like a beautiful garden. We can always enjoy the fresh air and hear birds sing.
In my free time, I often love reading under the trees and relaxing in the warm sunshine. I also like doing sports after school, as the weather is neither too hot nor too cold.
I hope a spring sports meeting will be held. Students can both have fun and develop teamwork spirit during different games.
Spring, full of life and energy, is my favourite season at school.
解析：
【分析】首先确定写作主题为学校里最喜欢的季节，选择春天作为主题。需紧扣征稿要求的三个要点展开：1. 描述学校在该季节的外观，结合春天的典型景物（鲜花、绿叶、鸟鸣等）体现生机；2. 列举在学校该季节常做的活动，结合春天的天气特点；3. 提出希望学校举办的相关活动，说明活动意义。写作时要保证内容连贯，符合词数要求，不提及个人身份信息。
【解析】第一步：确定最喜欢的季节为春天，围绕三个要求搭建文章框架；第二步：描写学校在春天的样子，用“colourful flowers and green leaves”等词汇体现学校像花园；第三步：写在学校常做的事，如树下阅读、课后做运动，结合春天不冷不热的天气；第四步：提出希望的活动，如春季运动会，说明活动能让学生开心并培养团队精神；第五步：结尾总结呼应主题，使文章结构完整，语言流畅，满足词数要求。
【答案】My Favourite Season at School
My favourite season at school is spring. With colourful flowers and green leaves around, our school looks like a beautiful garden. We can always enjoy the fresh air and hear birds sing.
In my free time, I often love reading under the trees and relaxing in the warm sunshine. I also like doing sports after school, as the weather is neither too hot nor too cold.
I hope a spring sports meeting will be held. Students can both have fun and develop teamwork spirit during different games.
Spring, full of life and energy, is my favourite season at school.
【知识点】英语写作、季节话题、要点表达
【点评】本文紧扣征稿要求，全面覆盖三个写作要点，语言流畅自然，词汇丰富，结构清晰，结尾呼应主题，符合初中英语写作的要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】第一步：确定最喜欢的季节为春天，围绕三个要求搭建文章框架；第二步：描写学校在春天的样子，用“colourful flowers and green leaves”等词汇体现学校像花园；第三步：写在学校常做的事，如树下阅读、课后做运动，结合春天不冷不热的天气；第四步：提出希望的活动，如春季运动会，说明活动能让学生开心并培养团队精神；第五步：结尾总结呼应主题，使文章结构完整，语言流畅，满足词数要求。
【答案】My Favourite Season at School
My favourite season at school is spring. With colourful flowers and green leaves around, our school looks like a beautiful garden. We can always enjoy the fresh air and hear birds sing.
In my free time, I often love reading under the trees and relaxing in the warm sunshine. I also like doing sports after school, as the weather is neither too hot nor too cold.
I hope a spring sports meeting will be held. Students can both have fun and develop teamwork spirit during different games.
Spring, full of life and energy, is my favourite season at school.
【知识点】英语写作、季节话题、要点表达
【点评】本文紧扣征稿要求，全面覆盖三个写作要点，语言流畅自然，词汇丰富，结构清晰，结尾呼应主题，符合初中英语写作的要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6