经典例题
自然灾害时有发生，而且总是发生得很突然，很难预警。请你以“地震”为主题，根据以下提示写一篇报告，给同学们提供一些地震逃生的建议。
【注意】1. 不少于90词。
2. 短文必须包含以上内容，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
What to Do in an Earthquake
自然灾害时有发生，而且总是发生得很突然，很难预警。请你以“地震”为主题，根据以下提示写一篇报告，给同学们提供一些地震逃生的建议。
【注意】1. 不少于90词。
2. 短文必须包含以上内容，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
What to Do in an Earthquake
答案：What to Do in an Earthquake
Natural disasters often happen all of a sudden, and it is very difficult to give people early warnings, especially for earthquakes. Here is some useful advice for you to keep safe when an earthquake comes.
If you stay indoors when the earthquake happens, never jump out from the high building, or you will get hurt easily. You can hide under a strong table to protect your head from being hit. When the ground stops shaking, you can walk outside to the open and safe area slowly and orderly.
If you are outdoors, you should keep far away from bridges and tall buildings. If you are inside a car, stop the car at a safe place and don't rush out immediately. If you are in the mountains, watch out for the falling rocks.
Above all, you must keep calm all the time, and you can protect yourself better.
Natural disasters often happen all of a sudden, and it is very difficult to give people early warnings, especially for earthquakes. Here is some useful advice for you to keep safe when an earthquake comes.
If you stay indoors when the earthquake happens, never jump out from the high building, or you will get hurt easily. You can hide under a strong table to protect your head from being hit. When the ground stops shaking, you can walk outside to the open and safe area slowly and orderly.
If you are outdoors, you should keep far away from bridges and tall buildings. If you are inside a car, stop the car at a safe place and don't rush out immediately. If you are in the mountains, watch out for the falling rocks.
Above all, you must keep calm all the time, and you can protect yourself better.
解析：
【分析】这是一篇英语应用文写作题，主题为地震逃生建议。解题思路：首先开头点明地震突发难预警的特点，引出要提供安全建议；接着分室内、室外两类场景展开，室内需涵盖不跳楼、躲桌下、地面停晃后有序撤离的内容，室外需涵盖远离桥梁、车内应对、山里注意事项的内容；最后强调保持冷静的重要性，确保覆盖所有提示，适当补充细节使行文连贯，满足词数要求，不出现真实人名地名。
【解析】按照以下步骤写作：
1. 开头：引入地震特点，说明要给出逃生建议；
2. 室内部分：结合提示，写室内逃生的具体做法，如不跳楼、躲桌下、地面停晃后有序撤离；
3. 室外部分：分情况写室外逃生，包括远离桥梁、车内应对、山里注意事项；
4. 结尾：强调保持冷静，完善行文。
【答案】What to Do in an Earthquake
Natural disasters often happen all of a sudden, and it is very difficult to give people early warnings, especially for earthquakes. Here is some useful advice for you to keep safe when an earthquake comes.
If you stay indoors when the earthquake happens, never jump out from the high building, or you will get hurt easily. You can hide under a strong table to protect your head from being hit. When the ground stops shaking, you can walk outside to the open and safe area slowly and orderly.
If you are outdoors, you should keep far away from bridges and tall buildings. If you are inside a car, stop the car at a safe place and don't rush out immediately. If you are in the mountains, watch out for the falling rocks.
Above all, you must keep calm all the time, and you can protect yourself better.
【知识点】英语应用文写作；话题表达
【点评】本文结构清晰，完整覆盖题目给出的所有地震逃生提示内容，适当补充细节使行文连贯，符合词数要求，语言准确，符合写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照以下步骤写作：
1. 开头：引入地震特点，说明要给出逃生建议；
2. 室内部分：结合提示，写室内逃生的具体做法，如不跳楼、躲桌下、地面停晃后有序撤离；
3. 室外部分：分情况写室外逃生，包括远离桥梁、车内应对、山里注意事项；
4. 结尾：强调保持冷静，完善行文。
【答案】What to Do in an Earthquake
Natural disasters often happen all of a sudden, and it is very difficult to give people early warnings, especially for earthquakes. Here is some useful advice for you to keep safe when an earthquake comes.
If you stay indoors when the earthquake happens, never jump out from the high building, or you will get hurt easily. You can hide under a strong table to protect your head from being hit. When the ground stops shaking, you can walk outside to the open and safe area slowly and orderly.
If you are outdoors, you should keep far away from bridges and tall buildings. If you are inside a car, stop the car at a safe place and don't rush out immediately. If you are in the mountains, watch out for the falling rocks.
Above all, you must keep calm all the time, and you can protect yourself better.
【知识点】英语应用文写作；话题表达
【点评】本文结构清晰，完整覆盖题目给出的所有地震逃生提示内容，适当补充细节使行文连贯，符合词数要求，语言准确，符合写作要求。
【难度系数】0.6
写作指导
1. 本文是一篇材料作文。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏表格中的每一项内容，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
写作模板
开篇点题 → Earthquakes always happen suddenly...
↓
详细介绍 → When you're inside, you mustn't...
When you are outside, you'd better...
↓
收篇结尾 → If you follow the advice, you can be safe and help save others.
1. 本文是一篇材料作文。
2. 时态为一般现在时。
3. 写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏表格中的每一项内容，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
写作模板
开篇点题 → Earthquakes always happen suddenly...
↓
详细介绍 → When you're inside, you mustn't...
When you are outside, you'd better...
↓
收篇结尾 → If you follow the advice, you can be safe and help save others.
答案：Earthquakes always happen suddenly, so it is very important for us to learn some safety tips to protect ourselves when an earthquake comes.
When you're inside, you mustn't try to run out of the building right away, or you may get hit by falling bricks and other things. You mustn't take the lift either, because the lift may break down and trap you inside. You should hide under a strong table first, and stay away from windows and heavy furniture. When you are outside, you'd better stay in an open area far away from tall buildings, trees and power lines. These things may fall down easily and hurt you badly.
If you follow the advice, you can be safe and help save others.
When you're inside, you mustn't try to run out of the building right away, or you may get hit by falling bricks and other things. You mustn't take the lift either, because the lift may break down and trap you inside. You should hide under a strong table first, and stay away from windows and heavy furniture. When you are outside, you'd better stay in an open area far away from tall buildings, trees and power lines. These things may fall down easily and hurt you badly.
If you follow the advice, you can be safe and help save others.
解析：
【分析】
这是一篇英语材料作文，需按照给定的三段式结构完成写作。第一步开篇点题，要承接“地震突发”的特点，点明学习地震安全提示的重要性；第二步详细介绍，分室内、室外两个场景，室内需说明禁止的行为（如立刻跑出建筑、乘电梯）及正确避险做法，室外需说明最优的避险选择；第三步收篇结尾，使用给定的总结句，确保所有写作要点不遗漏，时态统一为一般现在时，适当补充细节让内容更充实。
【解析】
写作时严格遵循材料结构：1. 开篇点题：在“Earthquakes always happen suddenly...”后补充点明学习地震安全提示对保护自己的重要性；2. 详细介绍：室内部分，说明禁止立刻跑出建筑、乘电梯的原因，补充躲在坚固家具下、远离危险物品的正确做法；室外部分，说明待在开阔区域、远离高大建筑等危险物的要求；3. 收篇结尾：直接使用给定的总结句，确保要点齐全，语言符合英语写作规范。
【答案】
Earthquakes always happen suddenly, so it is very important for us to learn some safety tips to protect ourselves when an earthquake comes. When you're inside, you mustn't try to run out of the building right away, or you may get hit by falling bricks and other things. You mustn't take the lift either, because the lift may break down and trap you inside. You should hide under a strong table first, and stay away from windows and heavy furniture. When you are outside, you'd better stay in an open area far away from tall buildings, trees and power lines. These things may fall down easily and hurt you badly. If you follow the advice, you can be safe and help save others.
【知识点】
英语材料作文写作、地震安全常识英文表达
【点评】
该作文结构清晰，完全覆盖材料要求的所有要点，时态正确，补充的细节合理，语言流畅自然，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语材料作文，需按照给定的三段式结构完成写作。第一步开篇点题，要承接“地震突发”的特点，点明学习地震安全提示的重要性；第二步详细介绍，分室内、室外两个场景，室内需说明禁止的行为（如立刻跑出建筑、乘电梯）及正确避险做法，室外需说明最优的避险选择；第三步收篇结尾，使用给定的总结句，确保所有写作要点不遗漏，时态统一为一般现在时，适当补充细节让内容更充实。
【解析】
写作时严格遵循材料结构：1. 开篇点题：在“Earthquakes always happen suddenly...”后补充点明学习地震安全提示对保护自己的重要性；2. 详细介绍：室内部分，说明禁止立刻跑出建筑、乘电梯的原因，补充躲在坚固家具下、远离危险物品的正确做法；室外部分，说明待在开阔区域、远离高大建筑等危险物的要求；3. 收篇结尾：直接使用给定的总结句，确保要点齐全，语言符合英语写作规范。
【答案】
Earthquakes always happen suddenly, so it is very important for us to learn some safety tips to protect ourselves when an earthquake comes. When you're inside, you mustn't try to run out of the building right away, or you may get hit by falling bricks and other things. You mustn't take the lift either, because the lift may break down and trap you inside. You should hide under a strong table first, and stay away from windows and heavy furniture. When you are outside, you'd better stay in an open area far away from tall buildings, trees and power lines. These things may fall down easily and hurt you badly. If you follow the advice, you can be safe and help save others.
【知识点】
英语材料作文写作、地震安全常识英文表达
【点评】
该作文结构清晰，完全覆盖材料要求的所有要点，时态正确，补充的细节合理，语言流畅自然，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6